It was a Beautiful Night

That opening line of the beer tasting better when you’re cold and unemployed hooked me straight away, and the rest did not disappoint.

I just love these little pure thoughts that appear sometimes. This feels like a memory… of something coming to the foreground, being remembered.

Each image is concise from the taste of the beer, to the skipping whippets, to the songbirds. It shows great economy.

Thank you for this. It’s beautiful.

-M

Hi,
Thanks for your kind words. I have been working on weaving images with Bold emotions like that for a few years. My newset find was Philip Larkin, who, as you may already know, managed to make Hull feel poetic.

James

Good write

Thanks.

Nice crisp brevity...

Thanks I'm trying taking back the ground that was lost. I don't want a world where people who have no job are looked down upon. Because if everyone is gain fully employed we would have never had Van gogh - who dedicated himself to his art.

I enjoyed the raw honestly from the opening line.
I want more :)

Thanks for your words of strength,
I have more peoms to post but they are unfinished. I can't seem to tie them down. Because I am focused on short stories.  

I hear you there for sure James . I dabble a little in story writing now and again ☺️
Write on ✍️
Zazzles xx

Truth

BIG LIKE

thanks man

I loved hearing this one James. :) For the most part this has serene calm feel for me but some substances can definitely do that. The second line definitely takes me to a different place, altered reality where the troubles of life are drowned by trying to change the perception any way you can. To find that enjoyment in life that is missing at that time.

Thank you for reading it and listening.
this was a work that took almost seven years to complete. to capture the uncapturable, the nights spent Drunk writing peoms about the beauty of the world.
regards
james