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Then Dusk
Twilight
then
Dusk
the
City
begins
To
sleep
Quiet
over
The
front
then
Dusk
the
City
begins
To
sleep
Quiet
over
The
front
Author's Note
Gouache Painting by Poetspeak enhanced by X44C Technology
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Re. Then Dusk
19th Feb 2022 11:22pm
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19th Feb 2022 11:22pm
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Re. Then Dusk
20th Feb 2022 00:10am
The night sky is very romantic and she might thank you. Keep on writing.
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20th Feb 2022 00:12am
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20th Feb 2022 1:32am
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20th Feb 2022 1:47am
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20th Feb 2022 2:30am
I'm feeling movement like it is alive.
Can reach out at any moment
with its black and white fingers and pull me in the T.V.
Digging this black and white.
Can reach out at any moment
with its black and white fingers and pull me in the T.V.
Digging this black and white.
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20th Feb 2022 2:55am
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20th Feb 2022 8:01am
Dear PS,
I really enjoyed the idea of visualizing a calm blanketing a frenzy of activity and now the possibility of dreams to take the soul far away. Love the muted colors of the painting to provide the dreams to anywhere. H🌷
I really enjoyed the idea of visualizing a calm blanketing a frenzy of activity and now the possibility of dreams to take the soul far away. Love the muted colors of the painting to provide the dreams to anywhere. H🌷
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20th Feb 2022 11:28am
Dear H
I must do a confessional
This is one of my first poems on DUP from way back in 2014 that I reworked on format and added art. It's one of my favorites so I'm happy that you felt it. I can think of no greater feeling as a poet and artist than to get comments like yours !!!
Stay tuned as I will be presenting more in this vein.
Thank you H
🤠❤
I must do a confessional
This is one of my first poems on DUP from way back in 2014 that I reworked on format and added art. It's one of my favorites so I'm happy that you felt it. I can think of no greater feeling as a poet and artist than to get comments like yours !!!
Stay tuned as I will be presenting more in this vein.
Thank you H
🤠❤
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Gosh Gouashe! Giggles!!!
I had goulash for my tea;
and thoughtful verse now
I had goulash for my tea;
and thoughtful verse now
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28th Feb 2022 4:42pm
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28th Feb 2022 9:41pm
He's so sweet and sour
you can taste him every hour:
such refreshing power
you can taste him every hour:
such refreshing power
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Re. Then Dusk
10th Mar 2022 5:42pm
It's always interesting in how you portray those colors, sharing an artist's point of view.
BIG LIKE.
BIG LIKE.
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10th Mar 2022 9:44pm
This was am older poem that I reworked and added a painting...
Appreciate the nod Wally
Appreciate the nod Wally
Re. Then Dusk
18th Mar 2022 1:05am
What awesome talent you possess, both ink and paint. Very impressive with words as well as colors.
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18th Mar 2022 1:27am
I appreciate your comment immensely...
I do like to combine words and art as partners
Thank you for the visit
I do like to combine words and art as partners
Thank you for the visit
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29th Apr 2022 4:04pm
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