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your subtle hints are blunt instruments
carving pieces of me and I let you
until I don't
every cut, slice and nick
you came close to inflict
while you were excitedly holding your trophies
I was taking pieces of your soul
I know my tormentor better than I know myself
with a sacred vow I secret away your marrow
blood from bone, you under estimated me
I am stalking your breath
your vision blurs
you shudder within
I am the monster you didn't count on...
one who enjoys the nightmare
Author's Note
inspired by this song...
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=O3UuqCN1sQs
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=O3UuqCN1sQs
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29th Jan 2022 1:19am
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29th Jan 2022 1:41am
good evening dearest RT thank you for reading and leaving such a sexy comment 💕
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29th Jan 2022 2:13am
Your poem inspired my latest....it's a mindset...for sure. Thank you...
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29th Jan 2022 1:33am
And the picture you chose represents this very well. There can be very nasty surprises for the one who thinks he's in charge.. Kisses, Robert.
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29th Jan 2022 1:42am
hello dearest Robert thank you I really try to match the picture with the mood of the write I'm happy it worked for you... thank you for reading and leaving a thoughtful comment... I hope you enjoy your night ❤️
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29th Jan 2022 3:26am
"I'm stalking your breath"
This is so seductive. The whole piece. So in tune with yourself C.
Great write!!
This is so seductive. The whole piece. So in tune with yourself C.
Great write!!
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30th Jan 2022 2:50am
good evening beautiful Adelphina I'm happy you liked that line it was my favorite part of the poem... I deeply cherish your thoughts 💕
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29th Jan 2022 8:10am
You are so adept at pairing images with your pieces.
This really demonstrates such a deep awareness and aptitude.
The protagonist of the piece, if I may call them such,
is one capable of turning the tables at the drop of a hat...
Capable of both deep love and profound hatred.
Pick your poison.
:)))
Very cool.
This really demonstrates such a deep awareness and aptitude.
The protagonist of the piece, if I may call them such,
is one capable of turning the tables at the drop of a hat...
Capable of both deep love and profound hatred.
Pick your poison.
:)))
Very cool.
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30th Jan 2022 2:51am
thank you graciously dearest Cipher you know it's funny I kind of go through picks waiting for one to talk to me...I want them to accentuate the thoughts I'm trying to convey... I'm happy it works for you 💕
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30th Jan 2022 00:34am
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30th Jan 2022 2:52am
hello dearest Drieks thank you graciously I deeply appreciate your thoughts I love your comment ❤️
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3rd Mar 2022 6:51pm
Ooh, I liked this. One never knows the true nature of what's in the dark. Something else more sinister has a different plan.
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3rd Mar 2022 7:52pm
thank you dearest Wally it's true enough I appreciate your understanding vision of this write ❤️