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Ravish me with poetry
You hurt me with words,
more furious day by day
Come on, violate me with poetry!
Verses of my soul!
Come on, devote a few more lines,
Tie me tight to the bed!
For this, listen, there is always time
For this I will not be ...
Come on, just a few more lines,
I really love your torture,
the whip of your verses
Ravish me with poetry
more furious day by day
Come on, violate me with poetry!
Verses of my soul!
Come on, devote a few more lines,
Tie me tight to the bed!
For this, listen, there is always time
For this I will not be ...
Come on, just a few more lines,
I really love your torture,
the whip of your verses
Ravish me with poetry
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Re. Ravish me with poetry
29th Dec 2021 9:11pm
Beautiful words and amazing request, which I accept from you lovely lady. Hugs and peace, Oral xo
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You have made me really happy by accepting the request my dear Oral. I am so excited to see what comes from your beautiful mind. Ravish me with poetry! ;) Happy Holidays, and I hope you have a wonderful New Year. Hugs... xo 🎄🎆💖🎁
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29th Dec 2021 9:22pm
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Re: Re. Ravish me with poetry
29th Dec 2021 9:59pm
Words can be very powerful in so many ways. I really take them to heart, sometimes that is the source of great pleasure and other times it can cause a lot of pain. Oh yes! I do love the thought of being bound in adjectives and verbs though... ;) I prefer to think of all the pleasure that can come from words. Happy Holidays! Tim 🎄🎆💖🎁
Re. Ravish me with poetry
29th Dec 2021 9:23pm
Come take me
Ravish me
Rip me apart
Come steal my heart
The nights I long for you
Wishing my dreams would come true
Take me
Seduce me
Reduce me
To a primal man
Your wet lips hit mine
So divine
A kiss for all time
Not letting go
Passion I show
To the heavens we'll go
Come ravish me
Scratch your name in my back
Tattoo your love on my heart
And that's just a start
Come touch my soul
Come make me whole
Come tie me down
In pleasure I'll drown
Take me to new heights
Be my delight
Bathe in my scent
Be my main event
Crave me
Taste me
Savor me
Devour me
Baby come ravish me
...an old poem of mine...to be the desire of another, the longing, the lust, the love, the pain...only breath remains...you capture it all k xx
Ravish me
Rip me apart
Come steal my heart
The nights I long for you
Wishing my dreams would come true
Take me
Seduce me
Reduce me
To a primal man
Your wet lips hit mine
So divine
A kiss for all time
Not letting go
Passion I show
To the heavens we'll go
Come ravish me
Scratch your name in my back
Tattoo your love on my heart
And that's just a start
Come touch my soul
Come make me whole
Come tie me down
In pleasure I'll drown
Take me to new heights
Be my delight
Bathe in my scent
Be my main event
Crave me
Taste me
Savor me
Devour me
Baby come ravish me
...an old poem of mine...to be the desire of another, the longing, the lust, the love, the pain...only breath remains...you capture it all k xx
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I certainly can see why this one came to mind. You have such a magnificent capacity to express deep desire, lust, longing, and love. You have definitely ravished me with poetry Tim. I will look for that one so I can leave a proper comment. :) I am really happy you could feel what I wanted to capture. There is a lot behind this one, as usual. This turned out to be a difficult Christmas for me. I hope you are having a very Happy Holidays! 🎄🎆💖🎁
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Re: Re. Ravish me with poetry
29th Dec 2021 10:50pm
Hey there Keilani, I am so happy you liked it! Some verses definitely hit harder than others. The crack of the whip can cause pleasure and/or pain. There is definitely a lot of power in words. I hope you have a very Happy Holidays! 🎄🎆💖🎁
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Anonymous
29th Dec 2021 9:30pm
The rhythmic pattern of stress in the first stanza is sublime, and the last line, the way the poem rises--"of my SOUL"...a very powerful ending to a stanza where it's not necessary, but does so much to improve the first motion of the poem--so nice!
Enjoyed!
Enjoyed!

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Re: Re. Ravish me with poetry
30th Dec 2021 00:06am
Hey there Lenny, this one certainly started with a pattern of stress. I had something unexpected come up over Christmas so that definitely factored into the rhythm. I am so happy you enjoyed it and thank you so much for giving me your thoughts. I hope you have a very Happy Holidays! 🎄🎆💖🎁
Re. Ravish me with poetry
29th Dec 2021 10:18pm
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30th Dec 2021 00:08am
I love delicious ideas, and to be a delicious idea, my dear Poetrician. I am so happy you stopped in to have a taste of this one. I hope you have a very Happy Holidays! 🎄🎆💖🎁
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30th Dec 2021 00:50am
Thank you so much for the lovely compliment PQ. You definitely made me smile at a time when I can very much use one. :) I am really happy you found beauty in this one. And I adore your beautiful ravishing words too, they stand alone casting a translucent glow but also could be the start of something. I hope you have a very Happy Holidays! 🎄🎆💖🎁
Re. Ravish me with poetry
29th Dec 2021 10:37pm
Re: Re. Ravish me with poetry
30th Dec 2021 00:53am
You are such a sweetheart Francisco. Thank you so much for being you and all of the support. I hope you are having a very Happy Holidays! 🎄🎆💖🎁
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30th Dec 2021 1:22am
Re. Ravish me with poetry
29th Dec 2021 11:16pm
Well that's a offer hard to refuse, to write a poem to delight you mentally and physically would be a honour and a challenge I gratefully accept
Love and light
Ron xxx
Love and light
Ron xxx
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30th Dec 2021 00:56am
Don't tease me Ron. I am so excited to see what you will write. Thank you so much for accepting the challenge. I know you will ravish me with poetry. :) To delight mentally and physically is definitely such a beautiful gift. I hope you are having a very Happy Holidays! 🎄🎆💖🎁
Re. Ravish me with poetry
29th Dec 2021 11:17pm
“Strength does not come from winning. Your struggles develop your strengths. When you go through hardships and decide not to surrender, that is strength.”– Arnold Schwarzenegger
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30th Dec 2021 1:48am
That really is such a powerful quote Leo. Thank you so much for sharing it with me. I don't think I had ever heard that one before but it's so true. Definitely one to keep on hand when things are difficult. I hope you are having a very Happy Holidays! 🎄🎆💖🎁
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Re: Re. Ravish me with poetry
30th Dec 2021 2:18am
Oh yes! You already got my pre-sleep fantasies started with that super sexy promise. Something tells me I will be tapped into yours too, so those extra sensations and feelings you have; that's me. ;) So happy you loved the poem and it got you thinking. I hope you are having a very Happy Holidays! 🎄🎆💖🎁<3 xoxo
Re. Ravish me with poetry
29th Dec 2021 11:47pm
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30th Dec 2021 2:23am
So much can be said with flowers and I really love the one you gave me AJ. ;) And I am happy if you liked the poem. I hope you are having a very Happy Holidays! 🎄🎆💖🎁
Re. Ravish me with poetry
29th Dec 2021 11:51pm
Hits all the marks
Who doesn't love marks ?
Sexy and a little violent
My kind of write wrapped up
Sliced and diced
Pink ribbons
BIG LIKE
Who doesn't love marks ?
Sexy and a little violent
My kind of write wrapped up
Sliced and diced
Pink ribbons
BIG LIKE
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30th Dec 2021 2:38am
I knew I could find you anywhere there is whips and bondage PS.
Making your mark...
And like you said, who doesn't love marks.
Especially tying up the best present of all with pink ribbons.
No other wrapping necessary.
Just imagine all the possibilities. ;)
I hope you are having a very Happy Holidays! 🎄🎆💖🎁
Making your mark...
And like you said, who doesn't love marks.
Especially tying up the best present of all with pink ribbons.
No other wrapping necessary.
Just imagine all the possibilities. ;)
I hope you are having a very Happy Holidays! 🎄🎆💖🎁
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Hi Ted, I am really happy you read me so well. A well turned verse can carry so much meaning, I can definitely be ravished by it. Pushing beyond the limits of words, there is almost always meaning between the lines. I am glad you can see that and I love that you enjoyed this one. I hope you are having a very Happy Holidays! 🎄🎆💖🎁
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Re: Re. Ravish me with poetry
30th Dec 2021 8:48pm
Hey there Rac, I have to admit I am a little lost on how to reply. I am not really sure exactly what you mean by all this. Sorry if I am overlooking something. I hope you are having a really Happy Holidays! 🎄🎆💖🎁
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30th Dec 2021 9:08pm
Okay, thank you for clarifying the warbling for me. The WWF reference was lost on me for sure. :p But I definitely like incandescently enjoyable. :)
Re. Ravish me with poetry
30th Dec 2021 2:43am
Dear K,
In the couple of years I’ve been flinging my pen to scratch out “poetry” none of mine could/would ever resemble ravishingly lush and artistic verbiage as this.
I’d be arrested for lascivious writing. Hands down. I give. This is great.
Happy New Year! Xx
H🌷
In the couple of years I’ve been flinging my pen to scratch out “poetry” none of mine could/would ever resemble ravishingly lush and artistic verbiage as this.
I’d be arrested for lascivious writing. Hands down. I give. This is great.
Happy New Year! Xx
H🌷
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30th Dec 2021 4:05pm
My dear Honoria, your poetry is truly magnificent like you. I wish you knew the power of your words; the way I see and I feel confident in saying, everyone else here too. It is truly a gift to have you here sharing your writing and your thoughts. I think you can write anything you want and it would be equally amazing. To have you appreciate what I write means so much to me. I hope you are having a very Happy Holidays! 🎄🎆💖🎁 Xx
Re. Ravish me with poetry
30th Dec 2021 3:01am
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30th Dec 2021 4:09pm
Hi there Harry, I am so happy to have you visit :) and I really appreciate the bravo! I am really glad you liked it. I hope you are having a very Happy Holidays! 🎄🎆💖🎁
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31st Dec 2021 00:45am
Re. Ravish me with poetry
30th Dec 2021 9:00pm
KX you certainly know how dazzle me with your thought- provoking sensuous poetry.
Just the perfect poem to ring in my New Year!
I raise my glass and drink to you and your creative love/ poetic offerings!
Needless to say, I get intoxicated by your sheer seduction of metaphors and words through poetry.
There will always remain an insatiable craving that I have for your alluring verse.
It is beautiful to believe that poetry can have so much power.
That verse can cause pain.
That verse exquisitely expresses love.
And that verse can satisfy desires.
You hold nothing back with your brilliant spills.
....and poof my head explodes (keep your mind out of the gutter, lol).
Now with all that being said, if this incredible write is yet another metaphor
for your passions for BDSM, as I have found myself recently involved in a lot again
lately, then thank you for showing me the ''ROPES'' through poetry. LOL
I sure am glad you are into BDSM because my humor can be pure
PUN-ishment! hahaha
Happy New Year to you and all of yours Kristina!
Special hugs and kisses for mom!!!
Just the perfect poem to ring in my New Year!
I raise my glass and drink to you and your creative love/ poetic offerings!
Needless to say, I get intoxicated by your sheer seduction of metaphors and words through poetry.
There will always remain an insatiable craving that I have for your alluring verse.
It is beautiful to believe that poetry can have so much power.
That verse can cause pain.
That verse exquisitely expresses love.
And that verse can satisfy desires.
You hold nothing back with your brilliant spills.
....and poof my head explodes (keep your mind out of the gutter, lol).
Now with all that being said, if this incredible write is yet another metaphor
for your passions for BDSM, as I have found myself recently involved in a lot again
lately, then thank you for showing me the ''ROPES'' through poetry. LOL
I sure am glad you are into BDSM because my humor can be pure
PUN-ishment! hahaha
Happy New Year to you and all of yours Kristina!
Special hugs and kisses for mom!!!
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It's so lovely to be dazzled with words.
And you always know the right ones.
I love that you can drink me in.
Be careful though, you can definitely get intoxicated doing that. ;)
I will need to take your keys. Something tells me it's not the first time. Perhaps they end up in a bowl. :p
What could be more beautiful than to be craved?
It is a beautiful thing to be the object of such a powerful desire.
Oh, to seduce the mind with poetry... how wonderful.
Sometimes it causes pain, but you know you are alive.
Some pain frees you from other earthly afflictions
And that feeling takes you away from it all.
Love amplifies everything... the pain is so much more intense.
And the desires to please, to feel that pleasure...
That point of explosion is magnificent. To feel every pulse rocks the body.
My mind is always in the gutter.
So many metaphors but based in reality.
My passions for BDSM have a way of showing themselves in so many ways.
I love being shown the ropes.
It takes me to somewhere of pure feeling where I can get out of my mind.
I need that so much...
I love your humor...
And you give the best PUN-ishment. I love your puns.
A very Happy New Year to you and all of yours too.
Thank you so much, that's so sweet. I need them, yesterday was a very hard day in regards to my Mom. 🎄🎆💖🎁
And you always know the right ones.
I love that you can drink me in.
Be careful though, you can definitely get intoxicated doing that. ;)
I will need to take your keys. Something tells me it's not the first time. Perhaps they end up in a bowl. :p
What could be more beautiful than to be craved?
It is a beautiful thing to be the object of such a powerful desire.
Oh, to seduce the mind with poetry... how wonderful.
Sometimes it causes pain, but you know you are alive.
Some pain frees you from other earthly afflictions
And that feeling takes you away from it all.
Love amplifies everything... the pain is so much more intense.
And the desires to please, to feel that pleasure...
That point of explosion is magnificent. To feel every pulse rocks the body.
My mind is always in the gutter.
So many metaphors but based in reality.
My passions for BDSM have a way of showing themselves in so many ways.
I love being shown the ropes.
It takes me to somewhere of pure feeling where I can get out of my mind.
I need that so much...
I love your humor...
And you give the best PUN-ishment. I love your puns.
A very Happy New Year to you and all of yours too.
Thank you so much, that's so sweet. I need them, yesterday was a very hard day in regards to my Mom. 🎄🎆💖🎁
Re. Ravish me with poetry
5th Jan 2022 6:48pm
There’s nothing more exciting than the anticipation of poetry arousing the cortex with words and expressions leaving the reader with satisfaction.
Outstanding Kristina.
Outstanding Kristina.
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Re: Re. Ravish me with poetry
6th Jan 2022 5:20pm
Thank you so much Wally - your opinion means a lot to me, if I can arouse you and engage the senses with 'poetry' then that makes me very happy. The anticipation is such a wonderful thing; words can create such powerful images and feelings... 🎄🎆💖🎁
Re. Ravish me with poetry
10th Jan 2022 4:47pm
Do you like poetry? Throw the whole book at me if this is the intensity at which it is thrown with.
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Re: Re. Ravish me with poetry
10th Jan 2022 6:20pm
Hey there Remy, I do love poetry and I am sure you do too... ;) I will happily throw the book at you... and in return you can ravish me with words... Thank you so much for your comment. 🎄🎆💖🎁
Re. Ravish me with poetry
17th Mar 2022 6:55am
In the words of a 70s Ian Durie song, a plea from to hit her with his poetic rhythm stick.
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Re: Re. Ravish me with poetry
12th May 2022 4:06pm
Hey there SS, I am so sorry for the long delay in responding. It has been quite a challenging year so I have not been around much. What girl does not love being hit with his poetic rhythm stick? ;) That's a good way to take my mind off other things... I hope you are doing great! 🎄🎆💖🎁
Re. Ravish me with poetry
15th Jul 2022 7:07am
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15th Jul 2022 1:17pm
Hey there Markis, I thought it was a good title, it really fit the thoughts. ;) I am really glad you thought it was superb and I really appreciate you stopping by and sharing your thoughts with me. I had not read this one in a long time so it was interesting to see it again. :) 🎄🎆💖🎁