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HE NEVER KNEW (INSPIRED BY NIZANA'S POEM)
He never knew
the 'I love you'
I may have said
to him in bed
meant 'Stay with me,
please' inwardly.
All he just heard
was thought, 'I scored!'
He now sleeps round
with others found
who cross his path
and raise his laugh.
the 'I love you'
I may have said
to him in bed
meant 'Stay with me,
please' inwardly.
All he just heard
was thought, 'I scored!'
He now sleeps round
with others found
who cross his path
and raise his laugh.
Published 29th Dec 2021
Author's Note
Inspired by the theme of Nizana's 'He never knew', using the title as my poetry prompt.
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29th Dec 2021 7:54am
29th Dec 2021 2:38pm
29th Dec 2021 3:12pm
Terrific job at using that inspiration, Solomon! This piece worked out wonderfully.👍🏻
🌹 - B
🌹 - B
3rd Jan 2022 4:17am
Oh, my wise poet you have composed your rendition of this poem inspiration in excellent taste. This is softly stated...
