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Chance reflections off a distant sea
Your heart
'tis solid made
honest as an arrow's truth
i thought i heard
a smallish beckon of forevermore
like the very soil
where seeds find ends
in bones
and soon espied,
were your planted stones
loyal, are hefty winds
that uplift— securing
a sculpted tongue
where the love,
Oh my darling
where our love,
whispers sweetened prose
in dire shared alliance
spilling, perfectly
artful swoons
of whimsical drowning
your broken
and my broken
together
our cracks
flaunt a besotted spectacular,
drunk glistening dreams
we've both
staggeredly dreamt
admitted, truths
secrets, lies
bold and shy
and binds... that tie
an affinity understood
in words plucked
from salty air
to shake hands
with metered
phrases
so verdantly grand
how fortuned fate
runs roughshod,
a collision of words
spilled—
pouring from
ancient twin hearts
forged in like molten ore,
scorched desire and moments of ire
cooled to wisely harden
steadfast- always
is this, discovery
profoundly found
(almost) instantly sound.
we two wanderers—
kinship bound by destiny
across distant lands
and deep fathomed sea
chance-blossomed
friendship
willed to life
by a faint kismet plea
a staunch truth
a driving need
etched acutely
hidden within
steely mettle
and passionate flares
it's there
i catch our reflection
tacking into the wind
sailing, upon poetry's sails.
(For AspergerPoet56)
Written by
Bluevelvete
Published 24th Dec 2021
| Edited 13th Feb 2024
Author's Note
Merry Christmas, Colin! 🎄
I couldn't ask for a better DUP bff!! Thank you for all that you've given me throughout the year, this was my way of giving you a little something in return. Sending all my love and wishes for beautiful holiday tidings your way... ✨❄✨
🌹 - S
©Blu2021
I couldn't ask for a better DUP bff!! Thank you for all that you've given me throughout the year, this was my way of giving you a little something in return. Sending all my love and wishes for beautiful holiday tidings your way... ✨❄✨
🌹 - S
©Blu2021
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Re. Chance reflections off a distant sea
24th Dec 2021 10:01am
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24th Dec 2021 3:35pm
Har Har! ... 😂... *giggles 🤭
C'mon... He's my best buddy!!
If you can't embarrass that shit out of your bff @ Christmas, than what good is it!?!? 🤷🏻♀️... lol
*There's something to be said for someone who has supported and encouraged me, since day one on a site like this, without ultimately ending up being a colossal creep. A legit good person.
It gives me hope, inspiration and some very much needed restored faith in humanity.
(get a verse, he says! ..... still giggling 🤭)
Happy Christmas to you, RT
🌹 - 💙
x
C'mon... He's my best buddy!!
If you can't embarrass that shit out of your bff @ Christmas, than what good is it!?!? 🤷🏻♀️... lol
*There's something to be said for someone who has supported and encouraged me, since day one on a site like this, without ultimately ending up being a colossal creep. A legit good person.
It gives me hope, inspiration and some very much needed restored faith in humanity.
(get a verse, he says! ..... still giggling 🤭)
Happy Christmas to you, RT
🌹 - 💙
x
Re: Re. Chance reflections off a distant sea
24th Dec 2021 6:12pm
I understand....I have two friends, neither of which I have ever met IRL with whom I share 2 million words + each.....friends are rare.
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Re. Chance reflections off a distant sea
24th Dec 2021 6:08pm
WOW! How are you able to go any higher in your poetic creativity? Amazing by dear friend. A++. Hugs and peace, xoxo Oral
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Re: Re. Chance reflections off a distant sea
24th Dec 2021 6:32pm
You're extremely kind, Oral...thanks for the nice remarks... it means a lot to me!
Much love, my friend 🙏🏻
🌹 - B
x
Much love, my friend 🙏🏻
🌹 - B
x
Re. Chance reflections off a distant sea
A Christmas present between friends is making me mushy. Keep on writing you strong beautiful smart sexy woman. Merry Christmas and Happy New Year.
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26th Dec 2021 4:58am
Merry Christmas to you as well, Francisco! Thanks for your continued support and readership! I hope you have a wonderful new year!
🌹-
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Re: Re. Chance reflections off a distant sea
26th Dec 2021 6:02am
I will have a beautiful New Year's Eve and day with you my beautiful strong smart sexy woman.
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Re. Chance reflections off a distant sea
24th Dec 2021 7:51pm
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AP is a gem, I agree! Thanks LilD... so happy you enjoyed it.
I hope you had a lovely day today!
🌹 - B
I hope you had a lovely day today!
🌹 - B
Re. Chance reflections off a distant sea
25th Dec 2021 2:51am
This is awesomazing!!! Very creative and touching.
Love everything about it:)
Love everything about it:)
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Awww... Danke, kind lady!
All my deepest appreciation and thanks 🙏🏻
AP is the more deserving, a true good friend and outstanding poet. I'm certainly lucky!
I hope you had a truly wonderful day today and that your 2022 is all you desire it to be... and more!
Warm regards,
🌹 - B
x
All my deepest appreciation and thanks 🙏🏻
AP is the more deserving, a true good friend and outstanding poet. I'm certainly lucky!
I hope you had a truly wonderful day today and that your 2022 is all you desire it to be... and more!
Warm regards,
🌹 - B
x
Re. Chance reflections off a distant sea
25th Dec 2021 4:11am
Dear BV,
There is no poet more deserving than this one, and your homage to him and his talent is stellar. If I give you a list of poets I admire would write a little something for them from me? 😉
Fine! I’ll do it myself but it won’t be as great as this. H🌷
There is no poet more deserving than this one, and your homage to him and his talent is stellar. If I give you a list of poets I admire would write a little something for them from me? 😉
Fine! I’ll do it myself but it won’t be as great as this. H🌷
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Awww... I love that you have a list of poets that you admire, so! (me too, actually) Your pen is mightier than most, my friend. I am sure you'd do more than justice and shine your gratitude bright, in honor of a select few.... blowing minds and connecting deeply to hearts and souls! 😉 👍🏻 💯 💯
I, absolutely concur! AP is a force of nature, and a born poet, in my opinion!! Such a beautiful soul (he'd totally argue with me, there... lol) who I am proud to call my friend. I lucked out, meeting him on my first day here!! 🍀.. thank goodness!
I appreciate the lovely comments, Honoria... I hope your day today treated you well and the new year ahead is filled with love and prosperity!
🌹 - 💙
B
I, absolutely concur! AP is a force of nature, and a born poet, in my opinion!! Such a beautiful soul (he'd totally argue with me, there... lol) who I am proud to call my friend. I lucked out, meeting him on my first day here!! 🍀.. thank goodness!
I appreciate the lovely comments, Honoria... I hope your day today treated you well and the new year ahead is filled with love and prosperity!
🌹 - 💙
B
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Anonymous
25th Dec 2021 5:23pm
Awe Blue…….this a beautiful tribute to Asper…….a sacred friend is hard to find these days……..Merry Christmas! Wishing you many blessing in the New Year……purple luv & hugs xo :)
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Re: Re. Chance reflections off a distant sea
26th Dec 2021 7:38pm
Hey there fg!
What a truly lovely comment, sweet lady! Thank you so much for reading and taking the time to leave me your thoughts. It's very much appreciated!! I agree that having a true bonded and loyal friendship is indeed, lucky! AP and I are unbelievably fortunate to have had serendipity on our side, way back when!
Returned Season's Greetings to you, too....Sending out all the best wishes for a happy, prosperous and joyful new year!
Much love,
🌹 - B
What a truly lovely comment, sweet lady! Thank you so much for reading and taking the time to leave me your thoughts. It's very much appreciated!! I agree that having a true bonded and loyal friendship is indeed, lucky! AP and I are unbelievably fortunate to have had serendipity on our side, way back when!
Returned Season's Greetings to you, too....Sending out all the best wishes for a happy, prosperous and joyful new year!
Much love,
🌹 - B
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Re: Re. Chance reflections off a distant sea
Thanks so much for saying so, Cara! It really was.
I'm so glad you enjoyed reading and left me those lovely comments. It means a lot!!
Happy Holidays, to you and yours!
🌹 - B
I'm so glad you enjoyed reading and left me those lovely comments. It means a lot!!
Happy Holidays, to you and yours!
🌹 - B
Re. Chance reflections off a distant sea
26th Dec 2021 7:04pm
sounds like twin flames.
I always have admired poets that manage to describe true love in original ways.
It has worked for you
I always have admired poets that manage to describe true love in original ways.
It has worked for you
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Re: Re. Chance reflections off a distant sea
Hey there, Boyana :)
Thank you for visiting and for leaving me your thoughts. It's so nice to read of your appreciation! AP and I have a strong friendship that is a true joy, so I'm glad that came across!
It means a lot that youve taken the time you have.
Much love and Happy Holidays to you and yours ❄️
🌹 - B
Thank you for visiting and for leaving me your thoughts. It's so nice to read of your appreciation! AP and I have a strong friendship that is a true joy, so I'm glad that came across!
It means a lot that youve taken the time you have.
Much love and Happy Holidays to you and yours ❄️
🌹 - B
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28th Dec 2021 3:24am
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29th Dec 2021 11:26pm
That's lovely, Margo-🙏🏻 ... My buddy AP is totally worth it! Thanks so much for stopping in and leaving your feedback.... I am so very happy you found something touching here! It was completely heartfelt!
All my warmest regards, dear soul!
🌹 - 💙
xo
All my warmest regards, dear soul!
🌹 - 💙
xo
Re. Chance reflections off a distant sea
30th Dec 2021 7:40pm
Sail on, Blue, sail on.
How often poetry can take us places even the spirit cannot imagine.
Well written.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
How often poetry can take us places even the spirit cannot imagine.
Well written.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
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Re: Re. Chance reflections off a distant sea
30th Dec 2021 9:25pm
🍃 🍃 🍃 🦋
It's so wonderful and why I still continue to spend time here on DUP— The incredibly good fortune of being deeply inspired by the enormous talents around me... Present company, making the top of the list!!
Thanks for taking the time, bk.... it means a lot to me!
🌹 - xoxo
—B
It's so wonderful and why I still continue to spend time here on DUP— The incredibly good fortune of being deeply inspired by the enormous talents around me... Present company, making the top of the list!!
Thanks for taking the time, bk.... it means a lot to me!
🌹 - xoxo
—B
Re. Chance reflections off a distant sea
31st Dec 2021 8:47am
"an affinity understood" those connections we feel with others does create a special kind of bond between writers.
Wonderful piece and warm sentiments in this special season toward AP.
Well done Blue.
Wonderful piece and warm sentiments in this special season toward AP.
Well done Blue.
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Thanks Walter!
I just wanted to show my deep appreciation for a true DU buddy and was so excited that the poetcast project gave me a wonderful way to do so!!
I'm so glad you enjoyed reading and could feel admiration! Colin is awesome!
Much obliged, my friend!
🌹 - 💙
B
I just wanted to show my deep appreciation for a true DU buddy and was so excited that the poetcast project gave me a wonderful way to do so!!
I'm so glad you enjoyed reading and could feel admiration! Colin is awesome!
Much obliged, my friend!
🌹 - 💙
B