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Pain
I feel like absolute shit
Constant ringing in my head
I'm losing my mind
Not much more can be said
I feel like I'm dying
I'm losing all hope
I can't seem to sleep
No way for me to cope
I wish for peace
For the end of my life
For quiet to be found
To find a simple light
I'm depressed and alone
And I'm afraid I'm falling apart
Struggling to feel my own head
I'm losing my soul and my heart
Its hard for me to write
For me to tell my tale
For it hurts to be alive
My mind is beginning to fail
This is it for a bit
Until I'm okay or dead
As I don't got much energy left
This is breaking my head
Constant ringing in my head
I'm losing my mind
Not much more can be said
I feel like I'm dying
I'm losing all hope
I can't seem to sleep
No way for me to cope
I wish for peace
For the end of my life
For quiet to be found
To find a simple light
I'm depressed and alone
And I'm afraid I'm falling apart
Struggling to feel my own head
I'm losing my soul and my heart
Its hard for me to write
For me to tell my tale
For it hurts to be alive
My mind is beginning to fail
This is it for a bit
Until I'm okay or dead
As I don't got much energy left
This is breaking my head
Published 20th Dec 2021
Author's Note
I keep hearing ringing in my head and can't sleep. My head feels like its weighing me down and I feel really sick. Hopefully I can get through this.
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20th Dec 2021 4:17am
You will get through this, we are here to help if you need us. Keep on writing.
21st Dec 2021 10:08am
9th Jan 2022 4:28am
Wow, I could feel the heaviness of your pain. So many sad beautiful descriptions of how you carry it. I hope you continue writing through it. Find a way to cope in your words.
I understand that dark place.
"for quiet to be found"
You have a writing community that supports you. I support you.
I understand that dark place.
"for quiet to be found"
You have a writing community that supports you. I support you.
15th Jan 2022 1:20am
I'm going through some physical pain right now. A lot of pressure is built up in my head. Hopefully they figure it out because I have lost my mind as it is painful. Thanks for the support.
18th Jan 2022 2:44am
I have had something going on a few times like what you are saying. It seems like there is no end! But there is. Continue to tell your story, for I can’t wait to read how you overcame it all. Best of luck❤️
