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There Are None So Blind
The light surface
leads to a black hole,
a darkened soul
and something
so out of control
it uses the light
to swallow you whole,
and yet you long
to touch it.
Poor baby.
leads to a black hole,
a darkened soul
and something
so out of control
it uses the light
to swallow you whole,
and yet you long
to touch it.
Poor baby.
Published 16th Dec 2021
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16th Dec 2021 6:13pm
Hmm tricky. I interpret this as not listening to one’s own good advice and getting burned for it.
Contemplative piece.
Contemplative piece.
16th Dec 2021 7:55pm
Your words wrap around my psyche... I feel your title, nik ... "like those who refuse to see" ....
Oh, how I dig the subjectivity and pondering.
That photo is incredible.... nicely shot. 📸
🌹 - B
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Oh, how I dig the subjectivity and pondering.
That photo is incredible.... nicely shot. 📸
🌹 - B
x
17th Dec 2021 00:50am
Like moths to a flame, finding the fire fueled by our souls. Burning for love, we are consumed by the pyre. How many times I've risen from my own ashed, let me count the ways.
18th Dec 2021 9:04pm
I'm telling you... I want the coffee table book of your poems and photography... truly... another great one nikki...
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19th Dec 2021 2:42am
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Fucking goth seduction summed up with Scheherazade’s trademark motif of bitter revelations composed like dystopian fortune cookies. Your clouded lens is a gift Scheherazade
This poem is hard on me. I dated her in college, a lot. Why I had to list it, for the parable
This poem is hard on me. I dated her in college, a lot. Why I had to list it, for the parable
29th Dec 2021 9:54am
As they say, nothing escapes a black hole, so it's best to watch from afar, but those who long to be near or touch...hmm, it's a far more dangerous / painful than we can imagine.
Nice spill.
Nice spill.
