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Death It Is.
He kissed her hand
and wiped a single
tear from her eye.
He told her it
wasn't really a goodbye
more of a i'll find
you in our next
lifetime.
Look for me
he screamed
as he drove away
leaving her sitting
in her own self pity.
and wiped a single
tear from her eye.
He told her it
wasn't really a goodbye
more of a i'll find
you in our next
lifetime.
Look for me
he screamed
as he drove away
leaving her sitting
in her own self pity.
Published 17th Dec 2021
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17th Dec 2021 11:27am
Dear N,
Oh my. My chest cavity felt a large pang of remorse, and a little bit of surprise as though the female character didn’t really see this coming. Extremely moving and so vivid. H🌷
Oh my. My chest cavity felt a large pang of remorse, and a little bit of surprise as though the female character didn’t really see this coming. Extremely moving and so vivid. H🌷
18th Dec 2021 9:03pm
22nd Dec 2021 5:43am
The countless times I’ve used that same line. Damn, Scheherazade you touch close to the bone. Lemme know if you’re ever interested in coming to Seattle land and tripping on shrooms
29th Dec 2021 5:19pm
I liked the appeal of the mystery to this, that this may not be the only life they experience,
Intriguing write nikki.
Intriguing write nikki.
