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On bended knee (a senryś of thankfulness)
Author's Note
🥂 Here's to the gentle, loving and
compassionate souls of DUP that so generously allow me to borrow a bit of their strength from time to time, while I learn needed lessons and continue to grow, personally. You keep me humbly on my toes; holding me accountable when needed and without hesitation, you share your hearts unconditionally. My respect and admiration for you all is true and deeply steadfast.
From the bottom of my heartTHANK YOU, dear poets.
Happy holidays and lovely warm wishes sent to everyone, hoping you all have a beautiful celebration of thanks and peace ✨ 💫 ✨
All my love, Bluevelvete
🌹-💙
"On this day of grace
O' kindred hearts I bow down
awash in your love"
compassionate souls of DUP that so generously allow me to borrow a bit of their strength from time to time, while I learn needed lessons and continue to grow, personally. You keep me humbly on my toes; holding me accountable when needed and without hesitation, you share your hearts unconditionally. My respect and admiration for you all is true and deeply steadfast.
From the bottom of my heartTHANK YOU, dear poets.
Happy holidays and lovely warm wishes sent to everyone, hoping you all have a beautiful celebration of thanks and peace ✨ 💫 ✨
All my love, Bluevelvete
🌹-💙
"On this day of grace
O' kindred hearts I bow down
awash in your love"
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Re. On bended knee (a senryś)
25th Nov 2021 10:12pm
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25th Nov 2021 11:35pm
Thanks so much, Ron. You're always part of the sunshine that brightens my DU experience. That alone, makes my time here more wonderful and always a day to look forward to.
Hugs and love from across the pond ✨ 🌊 ✨
🌹-B
Hugs and love from across the pond ✨ 🌊 ✨
🌹-B
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Sexy Selina - *wink
Some of the things that I adore about DUP are meeting new like minds and discovering their poetry. Especially when it really hits a nerve, moving me beyond; carrying my thoughts and feelings to another erotic realm where anything is possible. Thanks for being that, for me Selina. Your poetic voice, sings this uniquely sultry sexy 'song'; one that I relate to and read with abandon.
Thank you for making DU better, just by having you with us.
I deeply appreciate the kind holiday wishes you've sent in return ✨
A pleasure to see you 🦋... Enjoy the remainder of your day!
🌹 - 💙
B
Some of the things that I adore about DUP are meeting new like minds and discovering their poetry. Especially when it really hits a nerve, moving me beyond; carrying my thoughts and feelings to another erotic realm where anything is possible. Thanks for being that, for me Selina. Your poetic voice, sings this uniquely sultry sexy 'song'; one that I relate to and read with abandon.
Thank you for making DU better, just by having you with us.
I deeply appreciate the kind holiday wishes you've sent in return ✨
A pleasure to see you 🦋... Enjoy the remainder of your day!
🌹 - 💙
B
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Re. On bended knee (a senryś)
25th Nov 2021 10:49pm
what a wonderfil senyru
there no maters of the art
only a misstress
who has taken it to the next level of excellence
been an absolute
reading your musings dreams heartfekt life strugglws
there no maters of the art
only a misstress
who has taken it to the next level of excellence
been an absolute
reading your musings dreams heartfekt life strugglws
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26th Nov 2021 00:06am
Awww... All my deepest thanks, Colin. Your lovely words are like an answered prayer! I am so humbled to have accomplished much under your lovely DU wing and lucky to have learned a lot along the way.
It's truly my pleasure ✨
🌹 - 💙
xo
It's truly my pleasure ✨
🌹 - 💙
xo
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Very kind sentiment. Thanks, Ted
Have a great remainder of the day and thank you for feeding those in need that's something I'm truly thankful for!
🌹 - 🥧
B
Have a great remainder of the day and thank you for feeding those in need that's something I'm truly thankful for!
🌹 - 🥧
B
Re. On bended knee (a senryś)
26th Nov 2021 00:36am
Thank you for such a lovable poem. You got my vote. Keep on writing you strong beautiful smart sexy woman.
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26th Nov 2021 2:08am
That's a lovely comment, Francisco thank you.... and you're very welcome and I hope you had a great Thanksgiving holiday ✨.
Much appreciate the visit!
Much appreciate the visit!
Re. On bended knee (a senryś of thankfulness)
26th Nov 2021 2:35am
good evening beautiful Blue Happy Thanksgiving I hope today was a good one for you
this is so lovely and tender we are blessed to have you in our company
me I'm a little depressed today I don't why but it's there...
it will pass I'm grateful for your presence here❤
this is so lovely and tender we are blessed to have you in our company
me I'm a little depressed today I don't why but it's there...
it will pass I'm grateful for your presence here❤
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Good evening, lovely Brenda... I'll start with (hugs) of solidarity and empathy for any depression felt, as I too, had a rough day... It's actually my dad's birthday today (I was a total Daddy's girl) he would have been 79. So,It's very hard to celebrate when I still feel such a big hole left by his enormous presence. I put on a brave face and some faux (ha ha) light-heartedness around other family, almost all day, which left me used up and feeling hollow by the time I got home, to myself.... I know my situation might be different but that depression and darkness, was right beneath my surface.....
bubbling all day.... so I definitely can relate.
I hope you have better days ahead, my dear ☀.... I'll be here, in your corner.... rooting for you and knowing that it WILL improve.
Thank you so much for reading and for your extremely kind remarks, I am glad to be here and even more so, I'm glad you are too!
Much love, my friend 🙏🏻
🌹 - 💙
xoxo
Susan
bubbling all day.... so I definitely can relate.
I hope you have better days ahead, my dear ☀.... I'll be here, in your corner.... rooting for you and knowing that it WILL improve.
Thank you so much for reading and for your extremely kind remarks, I am glad to be here and even more so, I'm glad you are too!
Much love, my friend 🙏🏻
🌹 - 💙
xoxo
Susan
Re. On bended knee (a senryś of thankfulness)
26th Nov 2021 2:46am
Dear BV,
On this day of grace it is a lovely feeling to know there are people on the planet who exude compassion. You are one of the few. Beautiful poem. Happy Thanksgiving. H🌷
On this day of grace it is a lovely feeling to know there are people on the planet who exude compassion. You are one of the few. Beautiful poem. Happy Thanksgiving. H🌷
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As are you, dear Honoria! ....I think I've learned the (real) definition of compassion from reading and paying attention to your example... Sometimes, when deep emotions,( like those that cause us all here to write our poems), are so intense and seemingly pummeling my insides to the extent that it's almost hard to breathe; along comes your presence, YOUR way of viewing and describing the world around you.... and all of a sudden, like a godsend everything is okay and more often than not, funny, too. It's Honoria magic!! 🎩🐰 🎱🔮
That's what I've yearned from you and damn, if I don't try my best to emulate.
Much obliged, for the very thoughtful response and welcomed kind words.
And my deepest thanks for letting me in and caring for me, like you do. 💙
I wish you all the best this holiday season, lovely lady - ✨
🌹 -B
xo
That's what I've yearned from you and damn, if I don't try my best to emulate.
Much obliged, for the very thoughtful response and welcomed kind words.
And my deepest thanks for letting me in and caring for me, like you do. 💙
I wish you all the best this holiday season, lovely lady - ✨
🌹 -B
xo
Re. On bended knee (a senryś of thankfulness)
26th Nov 2021 7:42am
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26th Nov 2021 12:12pm
Likewise, DC!!
It's great seeing you 🦋
You're words are missed here, my friend.
I hope you and your family have a great holiday season ahead... ❄ ☃️🎄 thank you for stopping by!
Warm regards,
🌹 - B
It's great seeing you 🦋
You're words are missed here, my friend.
I hope you and your family have a great holiday season ahead... ❄ ☃️🎄 thank you for stopping by!
Warm regards,
🌹 - B
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26th Nov 2021 11:07pm
Thanks very much for the kind words, Tim. You rock.... I hope you had a decent time yesterday.-🙏🏻
🌹 - B
🌹 - B
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Re: Re. On bended knee (a senryś of thankfulness)
26th Nov 2021 11:57pm
Aww....Well, I'm glad it was at least an okay day....and there's always hope that won't continue to be the case in the future days to come If you are indeed, wanting that....
✨ - B
✨ - B
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My poem total is off for some reason, Rew... if you pull up the list, it's a total of over 330 poems (l think) written to date....lol... I have no idea why it reflects wrong on the face of my profile ... haha... That actually is pretty impressive.... if it was true! ... lol!... it's not, by a large margin!!
It's nice dropping by your corner! When I do, I usually find myself enchanted and quite pleased... ☺
Thanks for the reply -
Be well and be safe
🌹 - B
x
It's nice dropping by your corner! When I do, I usually find myself enchanted and quite pleased... ☺
Thanks for the reply -
Be well and be safe
🌹 - B
x
Re. On bended knee (a senryś of thankfulness)
PS... actually, the silly profile homepage shows 81 (for whatever reason) but it's actually a little over 330 publicly on the list view and a grand total of 370, including the ones I've hidden.... lol..
See, (no marveling needed here.... nor jealousy!!)
☺ - hugs
See, (no marveling needed here.... nor jealousy!!)
☺ - hugs
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Re. On bended knee (a senryś of thankfulness)
27th Nov 2021 10:12am
Noooo to deletion (please!) .... this is an epic comment string and I very much like it!! lol...... However, you do what you feel is best, for you. That's all that's of concern.... in the end.
Much love,
🌹 - B
Much love,
🌹 - B
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28th Nov 2021 10:42pm
hahahaha 😂....I love Brit humor /humour... *🤭
and even stranger, go here
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poem-list/Bluevelvete/
and the total reflects as 348.... DUP craziness!
🤪
and even stranger, go here
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poem-list/Bluevelvete/
and the total reflects as 348.... DUP craziness!
🤪
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Re. On bended knee (a senryś of thankfulness)
30th Nov 2021 6:08am
Beautiful Susan! ...and the poem ain't half bad either, lol.
Your amazing talent goes beyond any words to be able to truly do you justice.
I am once again in awe with your touching poetry !!!
My admiration for your gift with words and artistic flair is boundless.
I absolutely adore the format and photo highlighted by your exquisite poetry!
Crazy Beautiful !!!
I am forever ''Thankful'' for your friendship !!!
Your amazing talent goes beyond any words to be able to truly do you justice.
I am once again in awe with your touching poetry !!!
My admiration for your gift with words and artistic flair is boundless.
I absolutely adore the format and photo highlighted by your exquisite poetry!
Crazy Beautiful !!!
I am forever ''Thankful'' for your friendship !!!
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Dear R,
You're the pumpkin pie from the yummy Thanksgiving dinner... aka =The BEST part!!!
🥧 - 💙
Glad you liked my little Ode.
My thanks also now extends to awesome late night comments from a dear soul, that just so happened to make my night, with such an unexpected and meaningful delivery.... YOU!
I too, am so appreciative and wholeheartedly grateful for your amazing friendship. I count myself fortunate beyond measure.
I hope you had a great Thanksgiving and will continue to have a lovely holiday season ahead.
With all my best wishes for warmth and happiness,
🌹 - S
❄🎄 ☃️
xo
You're the pumpkin pie from the yummy Thanksgiving dinner... aka =The BEST part!!!
🥧 - 💙
Glad you liked my little Ode.
My thanks also now extends to awesome late night comments from a dear soul, that just so happened to make my night, with such an unexpected and meaningful delivery.... YOU!
I too, am so appreciative and wholeheartedly grateful for your amazing friendship. I count myself fortunate beyond measure.
I hope you had a great Thanksgiving and will continue to have a lovely holiday season ahead.
With all my best wishes for warmth and happiness,
🌹 - S
❄🎄 ☃️
xo
Re. On bended knee (a senryś of thankfulness)
30th Nov 2021 7:06pm
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30th Nov 2021 7:16pm
Awww shucks....Thank you thank you! It means a ton and I'm super appreciative 🙏🏻
Seasons Greetings, Walter!
(I sincerely hope you had a truly wonderful Thanksgiving holiday ✨)
I also hope you enjoyed watching the marching bands on the Macy's parade.... I always do! My oldest sister marched in the Macy's Thanksgiving Day Parade in her High School marching band.. I want to say in 1980 or 81! She had a blast!
I never got a chance to go because before I was old enough, we moved out of state (to another) that had ZERO band programs in their public school system that were worth a damn or even remotely close to being good enough to get an invitation to march there.
Ahhh so is life.... lol...
again, much obliged!
🌹 - 🥧
B
Seasons Greetings, Walter!
(I sincerely hope you had a truly wonderful Thanksgiving holiday ✨)
I also hope you enjoyed watching the marching bands on the Macy's parade.... I always do! My oldest sister marched in the Macy's Thanksgiving Day Parade in her High School marching band.. I want to say in 1980 or 81! She had a blast!
I never got a chance to go because before I was old enough, we moved out of state (to another) that had ZERO band programs in their public school system that were worth a damn or even remotely close to being good enough to get an invitation to march there.
Ahhh so is life.... lol...
again, much obliged!
🌹 - 🥧
B
Re. On bended knee (a senryś of thankfulness)
14th Dec 2021 5:58pm
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Ohh wow!
What a wonderfully kind comment, Charles.
Thanks for the little jolt of loveliness!
and I definitely appreciate the generous list add, too 💜
It's all very much appreciated.
Warmest regards,
🌹 - B
What a wonderfully kind comment, Charles.
Thanks for the little jolt of loveliness!
and I definitely appreciate the generous list add, too 💜
It's all very much appreciated.
Warmest regards,
🌹 - B