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rain.


At arms length

feeling disengaged

Mind unusual with hints of strange
 
Disappointments tinged of disillusion 
 
Yet another cheap suit of confusion 
 
Cowardice twists to neatly placate
 
Watch and read
 
No such thing as predestined fate
 
scattered-strewn
 
I watch broken pieces soar 
 
Sailing vastly through

To a found of deary rainy shores

A glutton for punishment

Repeats this damned inner chime
 
Thoughts, tumble to tear

Through contorted space and time

Warmth radiates

Branding every single word I say 
 
{~pitter ~}               
       {~patter~} 
 
There– are the welcomed sounds of rains

pattering green hills so very far away

Dreams fleet, sometimes darkness remains

dreamt daily out my window....

leaving me with only me to cast my blame

This mirroring reflection

me back to me
 
with hopeful pained teared eyes

   the view....... stretches




as far as we can see.







Bluevelvete
Written by Bluevelvete
Published
Author's Note
Inspired by AspergerPoet56's poem https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/337764-droplets/
Not the theme, the rain references... and how that struck me and morphed into this, yet another attempt...
Inspired by AspergerPoet56's poem https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/337764-droplets/
Not the theme, the rain references... and how that struck me and morphed into this, yet another attempt to brush up on my rhyming skills... *gulp

Musings with no real direction....
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