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A Virgin
Our love is in vogue,
We are on the rock,
Your lovely touch evoked,
Our hot lips locked,
I feel your hard-oak,
You pull up my frock.
You give a knock,
You set on my dock,
I know you don’t mock,
You enter in me your pole,
You few times stroke,
My sweet world rocks,
I just wake,
My hymen breaks,
I greet with my wail,
You reach my golden gate,
I couldn’t stop to extol,
I soak your stiff pole,
I feel the magic of your poke,
We breathe and again lock,
You turn key, and mystery unlocks,
We remain deeply intimate,
our rarest moment to assimilate.
I recall the time to celebrate.
******
We are on the rock,
Your lovely touch evoked,
Our hot lips locked,
I feel your hard-oak,
You pull up my frock.
You give a knock,
You set on my dock,
I know you don’t mock,
You enter in me your pole,
You few times stroke,
My sweet world rocks,
I just wake,
My hymen breaks,
I greet with my wail,
You reach my golden gate,
I couldn’t stop to extol,
I soak your stiff pole,
I feel the magic of your poke,
We breathe and again lock,
You turn key, and mystery unlocks,
We remain deeply intimate,
our rarest moment to assimilate.
I recall the time to celebrate.
******
Author's Note
I am a nature lover. I love to spend time in the forests, bushes and mountains. I got a chance to visit glacier and spent a good amount of time to appreciate nature and to embrace it. I have written lots of stories, flash stories, poetry. The stories are based on human relation and human elements. My poetry is focused on nature, love, romance, isolation, imagination, eroticism and philosophical and first nation and Inuit culture. I am also impressed with eastern philosophy and woman to be seen Goddess, lover and nurture where man is to serve her to be blessed with supernatural perfect power. I will post gradually as I understand the other writers and response. I do look forward for great friends here. This is my first poem. I need encouragement to post more here. I am shy.
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Re. A Virgin
17th Nov 2021 1:48pm
Re: Re. A Virgin
17th Nov 2021 2:44pm
Re. A Virgin
Anonymous
17th Nov 2021 2:11pm
Hi Kristopher, instantly I am hooked and reeled in by your opening lines--"our love is in vogue---we are on the rock." I love this introduction 2 Virgin.
Everyone(women-of course primarily)! can relate...
I also like "My hymen breaks. I greet with my wail, reach my Golden Gate. Fantastic.
Very evocative imagery that works very well as a whole.
(excuse the Pun)!!
x
Everyone(women-of course primarily)! can relate...
I also like "My hymen breaks. I greet with my wail, reach my Golden Gate. Fantastic.
Very evocative imagery that works very well as a whole.
(excuse the Pun)!!
x
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Re: Re. A Virgin
17th Nov 2021 2:45pm
Re. A Virgin
Anonymous
17th Nov 2021 3:16pm
You're welcome.
And welcome 2 DU...x
And welcome 2 DU...x
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Re. A Virgin
17th Nov 2021 7:38pm
After reading this woman's welcome to lovemaking and the author's note I say 'Welcome to DUP.'
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Re: Re. A Virgin
17th Nov 2021 9:17pm
Re. A Virgin
17th Nov 2021 9:22pm
I too like the opening ... great flow ... vivid and fluid ... welcome to DUP ...
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Re: Re. A Virgin
17th Nov 2021 9:24pm
Thank you. Be the part of my vacuum filled life. I need the encouragement to come out of my cocoon.
Love,
Kristopher
Love,
Kristopher
Re. A Virgin
18th Nov 2021 1:57pm
I enjoyed this foray into the passion and excitement of the first intimate love. A once in a lifetime experience and a memory that can never be forgotten. Welcome to DUP.
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Re. A Virgin
18th Nov 2021 4:01pm
Re. A Virgin
19th Nov 2021 2:56am
I was awash in your descriptive selections.... admiring the juxtaposition of your first poetry attempt against the natural imagery you cleverly wove throughout.... an intriguing and and interesting blend..... I really enjoyed the journey.
Nice to have you here with us!
🌹 - B
Nice to have you here with us!
🌹 - B
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Re. A Virgin
19th Nov 2021 4:52am
Hello Blue,
Thank you for your appreciation. I love nature and believe in serving a lover. I hope you like it more as I post.
Oxoxox
Kris
Thank you for your appreciation. I love nature and believe in serving a lover. I hope you like it more as I post.
Oxoxox
Kris
Re. A Virgin
26th Feb 2024 8:54pm