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Chamber 13 your beginning
you have no name
only a number
01
it's your lucky day
you worked hard for the number
before you were nothing
just flesh
for my use
your beauty has no meaning here
you're a void
stop thinking
I'll take care of the rest
only a number
01
it's your lucky day
you worked hard for the number
before you were nothing
just flesh
for my use
your beauty has no meaning here
you're a void
stop thinking
I'll take care of the rest
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Re. Chamber 13 your beginning
9th Nov 2021 2:52pm
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9th Nov 2021 2:54pm
Re. Chamber 13 your beginning
9th Nov 2021 3:20pm
A wonderful poem that scares me, sometimes it's too easy to just stop thinking and once you start 'not thinking', it is so hard to begin again.
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Re: Re. Chamber 13 your beginning
9th Nov 2021 3:25pm
In Chamber 13 you're whole purpose of being there is to get out of your head. That's what you pay me for, to remove the toxins.
Believe me,in the quiet of your after care and moments by yourself you'll have no trouble thinking again....
Thx for your comment Heart
Believe me,in the quiet of your after care and moments by yourself you'll have no trouble thinking again....
Thx for your comment Heart
Re: Re. Chamber 13 your beginning
9th Nov 2021 3:32pm
There have been days when I would follow your tune Pied Piper. Your poem is illuminating.
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Re: Re. Chamber 13 your beginning
9th Nov 2021 3:36pm
Re. Chamber 13 your beginning
9th Nov 2021 5:22pm
so sexy dearest Poet
let me say first I love the picture
secondly you feel my defiance even under the mask
I would start out testing you with my sweet side
then as you got closer to breaking me
you would see my anger
well you know how it goes...
hot read...
let me say first I love the picture
secondly you feel my defiance even under the mask
I would start out testing you with my sweet side
then as you got closer to breaking me
you would see my anger
well you know how it goes...
hot read...
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Re: Re. Chamber 13 your beginning
9th Nov 2021 5:30pm
Re. Chamber 13 your beginning
9th Nov 2021 6:45pm
Oh yes! only the beginning...
What's my number?
After all I worked hard for it.
Give me some orders... the excitement building, waiting...
Dish it out, I can take it all.
I need to stop thinking.
And what better way than in the Chamber...
What's my number?
After all I worked hard for it.
Give me some orders... the excitement building, waiting...
Dish it out, I can take it all.
I need to stop thinking.
And what better way than in the Chamber...
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Re: Re. Chamber 13 your beginning
9th Nov 2021 6:57pm
Not only can you take all but you are all !
Promoting you to my top assistant to deal with prissy bitches who think they want pain until I start dishing it out. That's where you come in ...
Pay is good
Free agony from Master Poetspeak
Promoting you to my top assistant to deal with prissy bitches who think they want pain until I start dishing it out. That's where you come in ...
Pay is good
Free agony from Master Poetspeak
Re. Chamber 13 your beginning
9th Nov 2021 7:03pm
Re: Re. Chamber 13 your beginning
9th Nov 2021 7:08pm
Re. Chamber 13 your beginning
9th Nov 2021 9:38pm
Lust is a powerful drug. It can take you to heaven or hell. It can turn rationality into madness.
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Re: Re. Chamber 13 your beginning
9th Nov 2021 9:47pm
Re. Chamber 13 your beginning
15th Nov 2021 1:31am
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15th Nov 2021 2:15am
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15th Nov 2021 2:15am
Re. Chamber 13 your beginning
17th Nov 2021 3:46pm
I'm thinking this dungeon is a lot bigger than I thought if there are many chambers.
Nicely done sir.
Nicely done sir.
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Re. Chamber 13 your beginning
17th Nov 2021 6:25pm
Re. Chamber 13 your beginning
8th Sep 2024 4:50pm
Wow. I love the deepness. Some say 13 Is unlucky some say it is lucky. Who knows!
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Re: Re. Chamber 13 your beginning
8th Sep 2024 5:02pm
I like 13
Something obtuse about it that I relate to.
Thanks for your comment ASD...
Something obtuse about it that I relate to.
Thanks for your comment ASD...