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Cigarettes and Sex
Say that you love me; even if you don’t.
I want to taste the salt living on your skin;
Because it has touched more of you than I ever will.
I want to hold you in my arms even if you are planning to Jab the knife right between my lungs.
You taste like roses and whiskey; sin and everything good.
You remind me of cracked lips and paradise;
Loving you to the point where I fucking hate you.
Say that you love me; even if you don’t.
I want to taste the salt on your skin;
Because it has touched more of you than I ever will.
I want to kiss you until our lips begin to bleed.
You taste like cigarettes and sex; all the best of things.
You are unraveling us both; this must be what hell looks like.
I want to taste the salt living on your skin;
Because it has touched more of you than I ever will.
I want to hold you in my arms even if you are planning to Jab the knife right between my lungs.
You taste like roses and whiskey; sin and everything good.
You remind me of cracked lips and paradise;
Loving you to the point where I fucking hate you.
Say that you love me; even if you don’t.
I want to taste the salt on your skin;
Because it has touched more of you than I ever will.
I want to kiss you until our lips begin to bleed.
You taste like cigarettes and sex; all the best of things.
You are unraveling us both; this must be what hell looks like.
Published 31st Oct 2021
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Damn!
Powerful portrayal of a delicious forbidden kind of love by my interpretation.
How can something so wrong feel so right and yet be so wrong or right? LOL
Your metaphoric overtones are mind blowing with extreme intensity with this incredible write!
...without all the madness of love,
can we truly find true love???
Excellent Vivid Write !!!
Powerful portrayal of a delicious forbidden kind of love by my interpretation.
How can something so wrong feel so right and yet be so wrong or right? LOL
Your metaphoric overtones are mind blowing with extreme intensity with this incredible write!
...without all the madness of love,
can we truly find true love???
Excellent Vivid Write !!!
14th Nov 2021 11:05am
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