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unloved
Unloved and unwanted she just wants to be wanted by the boy she loves he doesn't notice her...but after time they are together they become. Happily on love they wait for the moment to tie the knot living till shes 17 her heart flutters with every beat till the day he leaves for war never to return and make her heart soar...she starts to think he wont come home. The day she gets the letter she drops her legs give way he truely is gone not to be home...dead they say gone forever. That night she takes a blade and joins her love in the otherworld never to feel pain ever again..
Published 2nd Mar 2012
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2nd Mar 2012 10:20pm
this was pretty sick, (the good sort of sick) but you've got some errors going on up there..
2nd Mar 2012 11:23pm
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3rd Mar 2012 5:17pm
28th Feb 2024 5:17pm
On the themes of love, death and heartbreak. It takes us back to the Romeo and Juliet story, where life doesn't seem worth living without the person.
Nice work.
Nice work.
