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A lifetime of wondering, does one red lacey frolic make
Persuasive
persevering thoughts
would clever dance
from time
to time
Fleeting whispers
circulating within
my own
internal place
of worship
Somewhere
buried
(kept secreted)
pulsing of
need
craving..... more
demanding
at times almost
requiring
release
uncovering
unyielding
unrelenting
dire urges
Led to
intensive self
scrutinization,
as youthful
desire
pressed a mind's
imaginative fascination
Where
sex
pain
tolerance
pleasure
release
freedom
All, evoked meaning
an understanding
of wanting to submit—
to be of submission
Whereupon
that small voice
that inkling
became an ardent seed
acknowledgement
securing an origin
In a beginning
a lifestyle,
born
birthed into fetishism
My personal introspection
deep revelations
via an Aha, moment!
This accidental(ly) on purpose
(looking back, maybe?)
[Red lacey corset]
Pulled as tight
as the very dictionary definition
of tight decries
Worn as a joke/dare
Was now,
glorious surrender
found within
being bound
laced up and in
Frederick's of Hollywood
ravishing red
Unlocked potential
threw upon floodgates
unveiling pent-up
power within
purifying verity
....
and where
tied up bindings
breathed relief
by baring a soul's
True steadfast nature.
Author's Note
Serendipitous events, in the somewhat active pursuit of finding oneself. For me now, it's a lesson or maybe a reminder of how the littlest things (as they're often perceived of "in the moment") in life can end up having the biggest impact / consequences. To be as present as possible— in all your moments, because they are undoubtedly fleeting.
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Re. A lifetime of wondering, does one red lacey frolic make
A accidental moment to find one's true self. Or true love, a moment that seemed nothing but was a moment that was meant to be. The push in the right direction to the path you should tread
Awesome poem beautiful absolutely awesome
Love and light
Ron xx
P.s you look yummy in the red xx
Awesome poem beautiful absolutely awesome
Love and light
Ron xx
P.s you look yummy in the red xx
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Re: Re. A lifetime of wondering, does one red lacey frolic make
Oooo.... yes yes Yesss!! A definite, meant to be moment, for sure!! That unseen force.... it's like kismet —imo!!
Mmmm... Tasty, indeed!! 😋
My mouth is watering and my heart hungers, as you've whetted my 'appetite'... lol
Some true amazingly, kind comments as well as the generous list add being the 'yummy icing' ....
I'm beyond delighted that you found pleasure reading, etc ✨
All my warmest, thank you's - my dear
🌹 - 💙 - ⚔️
xo
-S
Mmmm... Tasty, indeed!! 😋
My mouth is watering and my heart hungers, as you've whetted my 'appetite'... lol
Some true amazingly, kind comments as well as the generous list add being the 'yummy icing' ....
I'm beyond delighted that you found pleasure reading, etc ✨
All my warmest, thank you's - my dear
🌹 - 💙 - ⚔️
xo
-S
Re. A lifetime of wondering, does one red lacey frolic make
Anonymous
22nd Oct 2021 4:05pm
Fascinating read!

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Re: Re. A lifetime of wondering, does one red lacey frolic make
23rd Oct 2021 7:40pm
Re: Re. A lifetime of wondering, does one red lacey frolic make
Anonymous
23rd Oct 2021 10:38pm
Your welcome BV! :)

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Re. A lifetime of wondering, does one red lacey frolic make
I must say that I am feeling a monumental amount of Love for this very Captivating write BV.
I love this because my favorite color Red embodies Attitude, Sensuality, and SEX.
I love this because my favorite revealing fabric Lace embodies Eroticism, Seduction, and SEX.
I love this because BV Sensual Self- Love Poetry embodies Insight, Identity, and SEXUALITY.
And of ''Corset'' goes without saying that I love this because I am ''INTOXICATED'' by the accompanied photo with lust..... hmmm apparently, we both got WAISTed with this gem, LOL
..also, your author's note brilliantly magnifies selfness with a vivid description of some very thought-provoking nuggets.
A Self Revelation of Poetic Brilliance!!!
I love this because my favorite color Red embodies Attitude, Sensuality, and SEX.
I love this because my favorite revealing fabric Lace embodies Eroticism, Seduction, and SEX.
I love this because BV Sensual Self- Love Poetry embodies Insight, Identity, and SEXUALITY.
And of ''Corset'' goes without saying that I love this because I am ''INTOXICATED'' by the accompanied photo with lust..... hmmm apparently, we both got WAISTed with this gem, LOL
..also, your author's note brilliantly magnifies selfness with a vivid description of some very thought-provoking nuggets.
A Self Revelation of Poetic Brilliance!!!
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Re: Re. A lifetime of wondering, does one red lacey frolic make
This UNBELIEVABLE Comment!!!
THIS is a comment of which I know not how to properly reply.... hahaha... Can you even imagine me? At a a loss of words!!?!?.... Ha! Did hell just freeze over? ❄ lmao!! The real brilliance I find here, is within your admissions, declarations and poignantly written response. You move me to places that I never knew existed and I'm so so humbly grateful for that, dear Ron.
My heart is overflowing with the special and uniquely only to you, exquisite positivity you've bestowed so selflessly.
THANK YOU.
You bring the light crashing through my instances of darkness, just when it's needed! Creating feelings otherworldly and incredible in their deep beauty.
All my application for the list add, your selfless spirit and the smile you always, always leave me with. ☺
All my respect, love and warmth,
🌹 - Susan
You're
THIS is a comment of which I know not how to properly reply.... hahaha... Can you even imagine me? At a a loss of words!!?!?.... Ha! Did hell just freeze over? ❄ lmao!! The real brilliance I find here, is within your admissions, declarations and poignantly written response. You move me to places that I never knew existed and I'm so so humbly grateful for that, dear Ron.
My heart is overflowing with the special and uniquely only to you, exquisite positivity you've bestowed so selflessly.
THANK YOU.
You bring the light crashing through my instances of darkness, just when it's needed! Creating feelings otherworldly and incredible in their deep beauty.
All my application for the list add, your selfless spirit and the smile you always, always leave me with. ☺
All my respect, love and warmth,
🌹 - Susan
You're
Re. A lifetime of wondering, does one red lacey frolic make
22nd Oct 2021 8:21pm
wonderful visual prompt...red is the colour of passion (and Mars)...sets the mood for the compelling rush of words following......an altogether 'stirring' multi-media experience...love it B
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Re: Re. A lifetime of wondering, does one red lacey frolic make
I do enjoy a dash of color within my vast black wardrobe .... lol...
It's a lovely, surprising pleasure to help stir up a bit of passionate thought... I am so appreciative of you for thinking I was able to even do so, in the tiniest way!... Thank you, L :)
Much love and gratitude,
🌹 B
It's a lovely, surprising pleasure to help stir up a bit of passionate thought... I am so appreciative of you for thinking I was able to even do so, in the tiniest way!... Thank you, L :)
Much love and gratitude,
🌹 B
Re. A lifetime of wondering, does one red lacey frolic make
22nd Oct 2021 8:54pm
You look hot in that red top. You bring the naughty side in me in that top. Keep on writing you strong beautiful smart sexy woman.
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Re: Re. A lifetime of wondering, does one red lacey frolic make
23rd Oct 2021 3:41pm
Thanks for reading Francisco!
Your naughty side is always there, though.... lol
Much appreciation, for the continued support!
🌹 -
Your naughty side is always there, though.... lol
Much appreciation, for the continued support!
🌹 -
Re. A lifetime of wondering, does one red lacey frolic make
22nd Oct 2021 10:22pm
WOW and more WOW. The words were off the chart, but the picture was divine. You are beyond amazing, desirable, and beyond WOW. Forgive my honesty, my beautiful friend. Hugs, peace, and kisses, (O)
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Re: Re. A lifetime of wondering, does one red lacey frolic make
I thank you very much, Oral but It's an old pic from the origin of this poem. Literally— I wrote this poem about this very night's experience... lol... I look similar now, only old. Hahaha....
I am grateful for the read and your kind words, my friend 🙏🏻
I appreciate you taking the time to leave me your thoughts.
🌹 - B
x
I am grateful for the read and your kind words, my friend 🙏🏻
I appreciate you taking the time to leave me your thoughts.
🌹 - B
x
Re. A lifetime of wondering, does one red lacey frolic make
Dear BV,
Jesus B! You scarlet bombshell!
😉
I love the illuminating aspect of this write. So much is gleaned in one small detail/experience/article of corseting. I like how you unfolded the series of events that led to this realization. Takes your reader on a field trip of their own with explosive results. Super write.
H🌷
Jesus B! You scarlet bombshell!
😉
I love the illuminating aspect of this write. So much is gleaned in one small detail/experience/article of corseting. I like how you unfolded the series of events that led to this realization. Takes your reader on a field trip of their own with explosive results. Super write.
H🌷
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Re: Re. A lifetime of wondering, does one red lacey frolic make
23rd Oct 2021 8:14pm
lol... It's an older picture from the exact moments of this little autobiographical poem. Currently, similar yet old(er)... hahaha.
I am so grateful for your attendance in our class field trip! ... *wink... Much respect and appreciation for your astute kindness, Honoria!
Thanks for the lovely list add and for being able to see the revelations within!
Much love, dear lady
🌹B
xo
I am so grateful for your attendance in our class field trip! ... *wink... Much respect and appreciation for your astute kindness, Honoria!
Thanks for the lovely list add and for being able to see the revelations within!
Much love, dear lady
🌹B
xo
Anonymous
- Edited 15th Nov 2021 10:45pm
23rd Oct 2021 12:12pm
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Re: Re. A lifetime of wondering, does one red lacey frolic make
23rd Oct 2021 8:24pm
Hey there PtP :)
You can almost feel the wind in your hair, kinda freedom 🍃....Ahhh....
You are so extremely kind and spot on with trying to find the correct way to transfer deep, personal emotion the the page, in such a way that pays tribute to that emotion— allowing it to burst out and be felt correctly; a struggle that I feel like I never get quite right, so your comments resonated completely. I humbly thank you and deeply appreciate you.
All my warmest regards,
🌹 - B
You can almost feel the wind in your hair, kinda freedom 🍃....Ahhh....
You are so extremely kind and spot on with trying to find the correct way to transfer deep, personal emotion the the page, in such a way that pays tribute to that emotion— allowing it to burst out and be felt correctly; a struggle that I feel like I never get quite right, so your comments resonated completely. I humbly thank you and deeply appreciate you.
All my warmest regards,
🌹 - B
Re. A lifetime of wondering, does one red lacey frolic make
Anonymous
24th Oct 2021 6:43am
Fleeting moments indeed...... Certainly can have the biggest impact....a journey of discovery and self evaluation.
Super write that gets better with each read..... Fab-u-lous darling...
Who dosent love red?
Super write that gets better with each read..... Fab-u-lous darling...
Who dosent love red?

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Re: Re. A lifetime of wondering, does one red lacey frolic make
24th Oct 2021 1:31pm
I appreciate your thoughtful comments, I
🌹 - 💙
Gotta love that hint of it! (red)
💋
🌹 - 💙
Gotta love that hint of it! (red)
💋
Re. A lifetime of wondering, does one red lacey frolic make
24th Oct 2021 11:05am
O... M... G...
:)))
Laced to perfection my beautiful friend.
(Your work really nurtures
my heart mind and soul.)
You are amazing and awesome.
:)))
Laced to perfection my beautiful friend.
(Your work really nurtures
my heart mind and soul.)
You are amazing and awesome.
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Thanks, C
(for everything)
🌹 - 💙
You're incredible, yourself!! - ✨
(It's absolutely likewise, in return, dear poet)
xoxo
—B
(for everything)
🌹 - 💙
You're incredible, yourself!! - ✨
(It's absolutely likewise, in return, dear poet)
xoxo
—B
Re. A lifetime of wondering, does one red lacey frolic make
26th Oct 2021 8:22pm
Re: Re. A lifetime of wondering, does one red lacey frolic make
27th Oct 2021 9:40am
Thank you for seeing more than most do, KP
I always appreciate that, greatly.
(I look forward to it, too!)
🌹 - 💙
B
I always appreciate that, greatly.
(I look forward to it, too!)
🌹 - 💙
B
Anonymous
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28th Oct 2021 7:32pm
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Re: Re. A lifetime of wondering, does one red lacey frolic make
29th Oct 2021 1:50am
Those are some truly awesome comments and I'm seriously moved that you found a bit of artistry, within.
I'm deeply appreciative and I humbly thank you ☺
Much love and respect,
🌹 - B
x
I'm deeply appreciative and I humbly thank you ☺
Much love and respect,
🌹 - B
x
Re. A lifetime of wondering, does one red lacey frolic make
29th Oct 2021 5:09pm
Lacey Red Corset (clap clap).
OMG, that was a...
Oh, hmm.
Excellent spill Ms. Blue (in red). And that's all I will say.
OMG, that was a...
Oh, hmm.
Excellent spill Ms. Blue (in red). And that's all I will say.
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Re: Re. A lifetime of wondering, does one red lacey frolic make
30th Oct 2021 3:18pm
Lmfao... hahahaha....
I love that start/stop Walter!
(Still giggling... lol.)
Yes, I totally thought of your song when I posted this and lost it, laughing... I was thinking (he's gonna totally think of his corset song too!.. hahaha) it was a coincidence that I had this idea and already had it saved... I assure you! ... lol 😂 😂
(soooo funny!)
I thank you for reading and for thinking that I was able to capture excellence. That's a truly lovely sentiment and I'm humbly thankful for it.
All my warmest regards,
🌹 - B
I love that start/stop Walter!
(Still giggling... lol.)
Yes, I totally thought of your song when I posted this and lost it, laughing... I was thinking (he's gonna totally think of his corset song too!.. hahaha) it was a coincidence that I had this idea and already had it saved... I assure you! ... lol 😂 😂
(soooo funny!)
I thank you for reading and for thinking that I was able to capture excellence. That's a truly lovely sentiment and I'm humbly thankful for it.
All my warmest regards,
🌹 - B
Re. A lifetime of wondering, does one red lacey frolic make
29th Oct 2021 7:40pm
Dearest, Lady Blue
I love this piece. It's a beustiful window to your sensuality and life's journey. And the red laced corsett does wonderful things to me...deep, abiding tingles. This stanza is fantastic and illustrates what women go through to feel their besuty and sensuality,
"Pulled as tight
as the very dictionary definition
of tight decries"
Bravisima, my goddess BB🐻💕🐰
I love this piece. It's a beustiful window to your sensuality and life's journey. And the red laced corsett does wonderful things to me...deep, abiding tingles. This stanza is fantastic and illustrates what women go through to feel their besuty and sensuality,
"Pulled as tight
as the very dictionary definition
of tight decries"
Bravisima, my goddess BB🐻💕🐰
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Re: Re. A lifetime of wondering, does one red lacey frolic make
29th Oct 2021 11:22pm
Ohhh BB... you certainly know how to put a smile on this old gals face!! I am so deeply grateful for your thoughtful comments and yummy line selection! Yes, I kind of giggled at that one because it was certainly spot on. I thought long and hard about how I was going to get across how tight I actually had that corset laced up.. because it was TIGHT!.. haha... So yes, I'm glad you enjoyed that part especially.
It's a true joy to see you, you must have known that I was needing your warm presence. It's made my afternoon, my lovely friend 🙏🏻
I am so thankful for you, the generous list add and all the wonderfully apt and beautiful sentiments, shared. Please make your visits more frequent, as I absolutely adore them so.
All my love and respect,
🌹 - 💙
🐰-🐻
💞
xoxo
It's a true joy to see you, you must have known that I was needing your warm presence. It's made my afternoon, my lovely friend 🙏🏻
I am so thankful for you, the generous list add and all the wonderfully apt and beautiful sentiments, shared. Please make your visits more frequent, as I absolutely adore them so.
All my love and respect,
🌹 - 💙
🐰-🐻
💞
xoxo
Re: Re. A lifetime of wondering, does one red lacey frolic make
30th Oct 2021 7:51am
Btw, the tingles are also what makes the tight af corset feel as good as it looks... (not on me but in general!!... lol)
Like I said, don't be a stranger, my lovely BB!
🌹 - 🐻 💋
Like I said, don't be a stranger, my lovely BB!
🌹 - 🐻 💋
Re: Re. A lifetime of wondering, does one red lacey frolic make
30th Oct 2021 9:34am
Re: Re. A lifetime of wondering, does one red lacey frolic make
hahahaha...(Let me burst your bubble) Please keep in mind that pic is older, like I am I now!... Lmao.... 😂
Thanks for once upon a tingle, though!! That's truly kind, BB - 💙
🌹 - B
x
Thanks for once upon a tingle, though!! That's truly kind, BB - 💙
🌹 - B
x
Re. A lifetime of wondering, does one red lacey frolic make
13th Nov 2021 9:56am
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13th Nov 2021 10:02am