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Blood flows to your feet
I like to faint with pain
And feel the weakness in the body
I don't have that will power
So I can rebel against you
You are proud, strong, beautiful, calm
The predatory look is rapacious
Not everyone is worthy of you
Inaccessibility is your thing
You are full of strength and passion
A sparkling dagger in hand
Here is the red ace of hearts
That fell to the floor, cut open
I can see the drops running down
Over my body, on my hands
And so calmly, quietly dripping
Red blood at your feet
By the touch of the skin
Revived with the movement of fingers
All these feelings are not the same
Not the weakness of simple love
They are more beautiful and cleaner
Not everyone is destined to understand
And not likely to write anywhere
It is better to simply accept
For us, they are full of hope
Eternal devotion, happiness and love
Scattered around the clothes
Blood flows down to your feet.
And feel the weakness in the body
I don't have that will power
So I can rebel against you
You are proud, strong, beautiful, calm
The predatory look is rapacious
Not everyone is worthy of you
Inaccessibility is your thing
You are full of strength and passion
A sparkling dagger in hand
Here is the red ace of hearts
That fell to the floor, cut open
I can see the drops running down
Over my body, on my hands
And so calmly, quietly dripping
Red blood at your feet
By the touch of the skin
Revived with the movement of fingers
All these feelings are not the same
Not the weakness of simple love
They are more beautiful and cleaner
Not everyone is destined to understand
And not likely to write anywhere
It is better to simply accept
For us, they are full of hope
Eternal devotion, happiness and love
Scattered around the clothes
Blood flows down to your feet.
Author's Note
Thank you Poetspeak for allowing me to use your beautiful digital art to compliment this.
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Re. Blood flows to your feet
18th Oct 2021 11:36pm
Rapacious, oh I love that word mmm...the strength that carries us, the blood that brings us life and the passion burns oh so hot...delicious poem K xx
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Re: Re. Blood flows to your feet
I love that word too, go figure... ;) Oh yes! the blood coursing through our veins inciting such passions and lust. You know your blood type says a lot about personality; so they say in some cultures. I wonder what your type says about you? I am so happy you thought it delicious, perhaps blood is an acquired taste sometimes. Thank you so much for reading and giving me your thoughts. xo ๐ฉธ๐๐
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Re. Blood flows to your feet
18th Oct 2021 11:40pm
Super hot, love the handing yourself over, this is a awesome piece beautiful
Great read, awesome write
Love and light
Ron xx
Great read, awesome write
Love and light
Ron xx
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Re: Re. Blood flows to your feet
19th Oct 2021 00:05am
Hey Ron! I am always handing myself over to someone or something. :p lol I am so happy you found it super hot - like my blood, and an awesome piece. I love that!! Thank you so much for reading and giving me your thoughts. xo ๐ฉธ๐๐
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Re: Re. Blood flows to your feet
19th Oct 2021 00:08am
Blood makes me all emotional BP, like a proper vampire! ;) It can be very sticky and hard to clean though. Thank you so much for reading and giving me your thoughts. xo ๐ฉธ๐๐
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Re. Blood flows to your feet
19th Oct 2021 00:37am
Re: Re. Blood flows to your feet
19th Oct 2021 12:57pm
Oh yes! orgasmic bliss is a necessity Francisco. ;) Thank you so much for reading and giving me your thoughts. xo ๐ฉธ๐๐
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Re: Re. Blood flows to your feet
19th Oct 2021 12:57pm
Expansive indeed, definitely more to come BM on that. I do love capturing the experiences, scenes, and life style in words. Thank you so much for reading and giving me your thoughts. xo ๐ฉธ๐๐
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Re. Blood flows to your feet
19th Oct 2021 1:45am
Hey Kristina,
This is my favorite passage. Nicely done!!
Here is the red ace of hearts
That fell to the floor, cut open
For me - I saw a bloodied card float to the ground.
Not sure if that is what you were aiming for but either way - this is great!!
This is my favorite passage. Nicely done!!
Here is the red ace of hearts
That fell to the floor, cut open
For me - I saw a bloodied card float to the ground.
Not sure if that is what you were aiming for but either way - this is great!!
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Re: Re. Blood flows to your feet
19th Oct 2021 12:59pm
That is exactly the image I was thinking of and it is a center point of this one. :) Perhaps I should have made the title Ace of Hearts. I am so happy you like it Adelphina. Thank you so much for reading and giving me your thoughts. xo ๐ฉธ๐๐
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Re. Blood flows to your feet
19th Oct 2021 2:31am
Immaculate love story
Those who love outside of the law
Passion defined
Exquisitely told
Appreciate that you chose my blood painting over conventional art
BIG RED LIKE
RL AWARD
Those who love outside of the law
Passion defined
Exquisitely told
Appreciate that you chose my blood painting over conventional art
BIG RED LIKE
RL AWARD
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Re: Re. Blood flows to your feet
19th Oct 2021 1:00pm
Always loving outside the law my dear PS. Some laws are made to be broken... Passion and lust should know no bounds. The artwork looks great and really compliments the writing, thanks again.
I love the BIG RED LIKE and RL. Thank you so much for reading and giving me your thoughts. xo ๐ฉธ๐๐ พ๏ธ
I love the BIG RED LIKE and RL. Thank you so much for reading and giving me your thoughts. xo ๐ฉธ๐๐ พ๏ธ
Re. Blood flows to your feet
19th Oct 2021 2:53am
I like the metaphor of the fallen ace
Blood is always darkly associated
with the eternal ๐ท๐ฉธ
Blood is always darkly associated
with the eternal ๐ท๐ฉธ
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Re: Re. Blood flows to your feet
19th Oct 2021 1:22pm
I am so happy you like the metaphor NG. ;) There is something sexy about blood. I am sure you have all the vampires fighting over yours. ๐ท Thank you so much for reading and giving me your thoughts. xo ๐ฉธ๐๐
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Re. Blood flows to your feet
19th Oct 2021 4:48am
bathed in the blood of desire and not the needy weakness that is passed off for love. The gods loved like this, are you related to Athena or Persephone by chance?
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Re: Re. Blood flows to your feet
19th Oct 2021 1:31pm
Exactly, who wants needy weakness when you have carnal desire and lust in your blood. The passion of the gods knows no bounds. Zeus was always stirring up some drama. :p Oh yes! definitely related to Persephone. Thank you so much for reading and giving me your thoughts. xo ๐ฉธ๐๐
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Re. Blood flows to your feet
Anonymous
19th Oct 2021 6:32am
Nothing quite like blood. Sacred, life giving, soul fusing.
Beautiful write.
Beautiful write.

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Re: Re. Blood flows to your feet
19th Oct 2021 1:34pm
Ah yes! blood is the nectar of the gods. It gives us life and without it we cannot live. I really like 'soul fusing' - that's such a great description. And definitely sacred. I am really happy you liked it. Thank you so much for reading and giving me your thoughts. xo ๐ฉธ๐๐
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Re. Blood flows to your feet
19th Oct 2021 1:25pm
Just when I think you can't write a better poem, you write this amazing A++ poem, eloquently supported by the chosen artwork. I now know and expect even better in the future. You are blessed with amazing creativity. Hugs and peace, xoxo, (O)-(O)
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Re: Re. Blood flows to your feet
19th Oct 2021 1:42pm
You are too sweet Oral. Thank you so much for the wonderful compliment. I am so happy you consider this an A++ poem and like the artwork. Oh no! setting myself up for high expectations. ;) I really love that you see 'amazing creativity'. xoxo And thank you so much for reading and giving me your thoughts. xo ๐ฉธ๐๐
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Re. Blood flows to your feet
19th Oct 2021 2:28pm
mmm I your the poetic characterization of vampires, dominance and submission
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Re: Re. Blood flows to your feet
19th Oct 2021 2:37pm
Vampires are the perfect companion to dominance and submission. ;) I am really happy you like the characterization in my writing. It is so nice to meet you. Thank you so much for reading and giving me your thoughts. xo ๐ฉธ๐๐
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Re. Blood flows to your feet
Same to you ....I share your interest, and yeah I'm the vampire.....and you?:)
oh dragon man
take my life
unwind me slow
i'm summer ripe
xo
oh dragon man
take my life
unwind me slow
i'm summer ripe
xo
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Re: Re. Blood flows to your feet
19th Oct 2021 7:07pm
The submissive with the sweetest blood that needs to be dominated, taken, and drank from. But at times the vampire also... The one who is doing the biting and tasting. 'unwind me slow' is very erotic. I like that.
Re. Blood flows to your feet
19th Oct 2021 7:33pm
Nice poetic/artistic pairing ... compliments perfectly ... well done KX ...
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Re: Re. Blood flows to your feet
19th Oct 2021 7:39pm
I am really glad you like it and the pairing LDF. It's always nice to have access to art to pair with the words. Thank you so much for reading and giving me your thoughts. xo ๐ฉธ๐๐
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Re. Blood flows to your feet
KX...I am really Feeling this metaphoric seductive write running through my veins.
.....cutting edge poetry pouring all over the pages of D.U.P
Your bloody romantic spills of brilliant ink are priceless.
.....pure sensual poetry deserving of its own special vault in the Blood Bank of Dark Love
.....cutting edge poetry pouring all over the pages of D.U.P
Your bloody romantic spills of brilliant ink are priceless.
.....pure sensual poetry deserving of its own special vault in the Blood Bank of Dark Love
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Re: Re. Blood flows to your feet
19th Oct 2021 8:40pm
You have been missed Feet. I adore your puns, metaphors, and analogies. And I love running through your veins with poetry. Damn, you really know how to shut me up. :p I am at a loss for words. Deer in the headlights. I appreciate your awesome compliments so much! I like the sound of cutting edge poetry and having my own special vault would be great. (Perhaps my own little torture chamber). ;) You would definitely get a cardkey. Thank you so much for reading and giving me your thoughts. xo ๐ฉธ๐๐
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Re. Blood flows to your feet
It is if Selene wrote this for Ambrogio. I believe Ambrogio, the Count, and Vlad Dracul would enjoy your words as you seek eternal love and immortality. You donโt want to rebel, but enjoy the taking. You submit to the dark power that can bring you the rapture you need and seek. The hypnotic state of no pain, only passion, and the lust for eternal blood. The dagger not only taking your emotional human heart, but also spreading you open to receive eternal passion where new lifeโs blood once flowed.
Your craving to become a Princess in the dark realm, comes through in the piece.
Shout out to Poet Speak for the fine art.
Your craving to become a Princess in the dark realm, comes through in the piece.
Shout out to Poet Speak for the fine art.
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Re: Re. Blood flows to your feet
You are speaking my language DaVinci. One of lust and passion, eternal love and immortality, vampires and counts... I love the night, bathed in the darkness seeking rapture and satisfaction. Enjoyable pain in the pursuit of eternal blood. 'spreading you open to receive' I love that.. it describes BDSM so well. Always searching for new blood; excitement and experiences to run through the veins.
Oh yes! always striving to be Princess of the Dark Realm.
I know PS will be happy with the shoutout. :)
Thank you so much for reading and giving me your thoughts. xo ๐ฉธ๐๐ พ๏ธ
Oh yes! always striving to be Princess of the Dark Realm.
I know PS will be happy with the shoutout. :)
Thank you so much for reading and giving me your thoughts. xo ๐ฉธ๐๐ พ๏ธ
Re. Blood flows to your feet
27th Oct 2021 9:22pm
Enjoyed very much. I really liked that closing stanza. Vivid and dark all throughout the piece.
Well done Kristina.
The art also compliments the words very well.
Well done Kristina.
The art also compliments the words very well.
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Re: Re. Blood flows to your feet
28th Oct 2021 00:34am
Hey Wally! I am really glad you enjoyed it! The closing stanza is one of my favorites and it ties my thoughts together. Vivid and dark, that's me. ;)
I am happy you felt the art was fitting as well. I think it definitely added to it.
Thank you so much for reading and giving me your thoughts. xo ๐ฉธ๐๐ พ๏ธ
I am happy you felt the art was fitting as well. I think it definitely added to it.
Thank you so much for reading and giving me your thoughts. xo ๐ฉธ๐๐ พ๏ธ
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Re: Re. Blood flows to your feet
18th Nov 2022 1:44pm
Poetic evolution, I like that... I suppose there is an evolution, certainly in regards to sharing more. There is a lot to this one; love, passion, surrender ... Your art is truly great. I love that you include it with your writing, it really enhances the effect and is so creative. Which comes first, does not really matter. But anyway, you never offered in regards to not asking. :p