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Destiny (22)
They were walking
Down the aisle
She, stunning in her
White and very low-cut dress
He in his sparkling tuxedo.
The occasion so solemn.
Then came the time
At the altar,
Time to exchange vows
The pastor asked the question.
She pondered for a second too many
And said no.
Down the aisle
She, stunning in her
White and very low-cut dress
He in his sparkling tuxedo.
The occasion so solemn.
Then came the time
At the altar,
Time to exchange vows
The pastor asked the question.
She pondered for a second too many
And said no.
Published 12th Oct 2021
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12th Oct 2021 7:00pm
Hmm. Well. Yes; not everyone wants to be anchored to someone for the rest of their life !
Marriage, oft equates to a lifetime of misery; heartache & disappointment; especially, when latched to one who’s incapable of discerning the sacredness of such vows.
Aargh. Can’t think of anything more nauseating !
You aptly capture that in your write…🎯
Marriage, oft equates to a lifetime of misery; heartache & disappointment; especially, when latched to one who’s incapable of discerning the sacredness of such vows.
Aargh. Can’t think of anything more nauseating !
You aptly capture that in your write…🎯
12th Oct 2021 7:25pm
12th Oct 2021 8:17pm
hello dearest Robert it's better if she wasn't sure no to marry
to me that means it's the wrong timing or there is someone else fate has chosen
great scene setting and writing❤
to me that means it's the wrong timing or there is someone else fate has chosen
great scene setting and writing❤
12th Oct 2021 9:11pm
Thanks, dearest. Always nice of you visit. And comments much appreciated. Regards, Robert.
12th Oct 2021 11:34pm
Sometimes pondering for a few seconds or minutes can be a BIG plus. Another A+ write. Hugs and peach, xoxo
13th Oct 2021 2:04am
I suppose it is a good thing she took another second to reflect! I chuckled at the surprise ending. I like when I am surprised. nice write.
13th Oct 2021 2:06am
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