Fabled___a series (pt.2) ~~Knighted Realm (+Spoken Word)

Such flow ... there is a timeless ... epic feel to this ... deft use of line breaks ... sustains the desire ...

Good morning, LilD :)
Thank you so much for your visit and the generosity of your kind words.... I am so grateful for your feedback, the list add and all the wonderful poems you share, yourself, that I am lucky enough to devour, trying to learn all I can.

I am beyond appreciative 🙏🏻
I hope you are well - 💙
🌹-B

Damn.

Epic!  

Perfect flow and profundity achieved.

Yeah...  damn.

This is just...  Bad Ass.

You've made my morning, C
An enormous, gigantic ((Thank You)) I don't think I would have finished this poem, if it wasn't for that kindness you left via comments on Part 1.

I am so happy you enjoyed reading and and I'm TOTALLY basking in my badassery!! (if only for a moment!!)

(all of that said with the utmost humility!!)
Much love,
🌹-B

Go girl this is absolutely brilliant, just smooth, sexy and the ache and desire oozes from your voice.
Great write, fantastic listen. You are awesome
Love and light
Ron xxx

All my heartfelt thanks, my friend. I appreciate you, the generous list add and your kind remarks, so very very much. I am all smiles that you enjoyed and found some smooth, sexy ache, within.... THAT'S what's awesome!  

All my warmest regards,  
🌹 - 💙  
B

i am entirely consuned by this
sich exquisite flow
a drean to be hin
to be your warriir flame

Your lovely comments leave me speechless, C. I thank you from the bottom of my heart for pushing me to write when I felt like throwing in the towel. Your friendship means so much and I feel fortunate and incredibly lucky.  
 
Much love from across the pond ✨ 🌊 ✨  
🌹 - 💙  
B

Hope you enjoyed orgasmic bliss in your naughty erotic dream.   Keep on writing you strong beautiful smart sexy woman.

I hope your enjoyed listening ;).... Thanks for your continued support, Francisco!
I appreciate it

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Awww... Thank you for your kind words. I appreciate you taking the time to read, I hope you enjoyed listening as well.

I am grateful for your visit - 🌹


-B

Loved the voice giving life to words well wrought, bringing them to another level. A beautiful telling 🌼

Hi there, AJ  :)
Your comments made me smile and feel more encouraged about this particular spoken word. I really appreciate your thoughtfulness the kind list add. Sometimes I can be so very critical of myself, so I'm definitely grateful you found a bit of enjoyment.

Warmest regards ✨
🌹 - B
x

Truth be told, I'm slow, so by the time I read you already have a slew of RL's and comments so I generally just click "like" since my words add nothing new. Occasionally, I let you know its me, and I'm alive, as today. 🌼

Ohhh no no.... Everyone brings something different to the table.. Please, I deeply value your thoughts and opinions.... So, feel free.....

You're always welcome here, AJ!!


Thanks for the check in.... Iol
I enjoy seeing you!
🌹

Dear BV,

Where is this mythical legend of male hotness?! I would very much enjoy making his acquaintance. I think he and I would get along famously, or infamously I’m down for either. I like the concept of these fabled poems. Your story arcs are really great and the journey while reading is wonderful. H🌷

Hi, Honoria :)
I'll totally ask if he has a brother or perhaps a bff of similar prowess.... hahaha!!! Ohhh my, isn't fantasy fun!!.... I am so glad you enjoyed my fictional construct!! I feel slightly renewed with satisfaction, even faced with confronting (yet again) the fact that he's not real, (dammit!) ... lmao!!....

I am so so grateful for your thoughtful comments, the list adds and for you seeing where I was coming from; and enjoying that space /place I tried to convey. I don't know what my plans are for another installment ( I didn't even expect to get to this second one) or if it's worth continuing.... lol... Regardless, I'm super appreciative!!

Much love and thanks for the laughs, my friend 🙏🏻
🌹 - 💙
xo
B

This is a great story, I like how you used italics to accentuate the language, it made it seem like a story being told, really epic :)

Wow... (I'm all smiles)
Hey there, PR -
Thank you so much for reading and listening. Your comments and opinions really mean a lot. I deeply respect your tremendous poetic talents, so much so, I'm left completely humbled and pleased that you enjoyed your experience with my little spoken word /poem... That's so incredibly awesome! Yessss!!

I appreciate you - 💙
🌹 - B

Aww, you're so welcome :)

Dearest, Lady Blue,
I love❣ love❣ love❣ hearing your beautiful voice. This piece is rich with beautiful, bold imagery and palpable sensuality. "Swells with inherited pride" is a fantastic line and can be twisted for bad, good, or just plain animalistic behavior.
You've gi ven me an exercise goal with this stanza,
"His body;      
is salvation      
taught lines      
bold      
and ripe      
smooth design      
chiseled      
weighted"

I already got the "heft" part down 😍
Bravissima beautiful Goddess, BB 🐻💕🐰      

Haha ... Ohh, BB... You make me smile and laugh! You're terrifically lovely, with your extremely thoughtful comments. I'm so glad you enjoyed listening. It wasn't my best SW, but I worked longer on it than I wanted.... lol... So at least I can get satisfaction knowing that you definitely felt some of my work, in the right places.  
 
I am so grateful for your visit here and for you taking the time to leave me such deeply felt sentiments. I always love seeing you on my page. 🙏🏻  
 
Much love–💞  
🌹-B  
xx

Magnificent. I am at a loss for words.

(blushes)
Thanks, Wally
You honor me with that comment.  
I'm humbled and really happy you enjoyed listening /reading. My SW are near and dear to me, so I'm especially thankful for your response and the kindness you've bestowed.  

You made my morning!
Warmest regards,
🌹-B