Discerning

Thank you as always ❤️

thought provoking write
may the eyes see.

thanks for sharing

Thank you mysticstones for taking the time to read my work ❤️

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Thank you Billy for the positivity ❤️

This has that 50/50 kind of vibe and feel.

It may go either way.

The problem is it's not clear which direction this is going to take.

Totally get

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Wonderful piece! Haiku/Senryu is one of my favorite poetry forms. There's power in brevity and I find that I take more time with the the 17 syllable than with longer poems.
The lasty line really speaks to me. We really are made by each individual we encounter. We are constructed differently by each brain that processes our information. And it's actually none of our business how we are perceived by others through their subjective lens.
Thanks for the think.

Love this... well penned...

When eyes meet but inspire fear.

Hello,MW
I apologize that this is the first time I'm reading your work. I love the senryu form and you have expertly demonstrated. I can feel the tension in the piece. "You are what you made me" is a profoundly poignant statement. Brava, dear poet🌹

Provokes readers minds with this one . Makes you wonder the nature of these two beings . Great write

I think this is interesting in it’s message that what we become is sometimes unpredictable. I guess we always have to be careful of our actions. You never know how they might effect another human being.

Thank you for sharing this

-M

This is elegant and starts off feeling good, before taking on a sinister turn.  We are all the product of our environment and relationships at times, but you are in charge of what happens next.

Very well written senyru... you're amazing with the pen

Great writing. To the point & powerful.

delightful

Intoxicating ❤️