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Blind Colors Deaf Songs
The world speaks in silence
No sound reaches my ears
Born to loose just one thing
The ability to hear
So alone in my head
From the people in life
With nothing to love
But the pictures i draw
From the colors of life
Mixed with those of dispair
My art sings and plays
What my ears cannot hear
With my passion alone
Red loves and bleeds
Blue cries and flies
Green blooms and decay
My colors are alive
They dance to my beat
And understad my life
Because withought my colors
I would feel dead inside
No sound reaches my ears
Born to loose just one thing
The ability to hear
So alone in my head
From the people in life
With nothing to love
But the pictures i draw
From the colors of life
Mixed with those of dispair
My art sings and plays
What my ears cannot hear
With my passion alone
Red loves and bleeds
Blue cries and flies
Green blooms and decay
My colors are alive
They dance to my beat
And understad my life
Because withought my colors
I would feel dead inside
Published 29th Feb 2012
| Edited 1st Mar 2012
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29th Feb 2012 4:21am
29th Feb 2012 9:13am
Thank you. :] I'm glad you liked it. It reposted it from a contest about colors.
1st Mar 2012 1:32am
Nice poem, however I wonder about the word "may" in the last line. The one word seems to weaken the rest. I would change "may still" to "would". You make a statement, so I think you should not back-off from it.
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8th Mar 2012 6:01am
the way you carry your couplets are very well its hard to keep up a rhythem inthe way you written this
8th Mar 2012 6:15am
