I Remain Rigid and Stolen

hey there sexy neighbor
this is so deliciously erotic
don't mind me I just had a couple of shots
I rarely drink these days...

just had to tell you hello and I love this...

I drink spirits every night before dinner
Good for your heart in moderation
Allows me to pine and want
Not be so lonely

Thanks beautiful one

Xx

Sometimes I think that being lonely is the only way to be (Just speaking for myself) .


hugs,
buddhakitty.

That has issues too
I've been on both sides

Thx bk

Some great lines here.
First and foremost:

Then I tied you to a chair.
I just wanted you there with me.

That could be one of the greatest couplets in the history of love poetry--so ballsy, so clear and unapologetic.
Also, love the title--very nice!
Enjoyed!

Writing from the heart
When your mind is exhausted
Better poetry emerges
I think that's what happened here ...

Appreciate you Mark

Oh. Tied to the chair, and spanked for being an ornery salacious little thing. I hope she forgives you…🙏

I tied her because i didn't want her to leave
For anything or anyone
She likes being tied too
By me ?
You'll have to ask her

Tell her how you feel.  Keep on writing.

I try to daily ....

When I  first saw this I saw you as the one being captive and read it again closely to see you where the one containing the submissive; Only to read again to see you were actually being the one captive by your desire to capture the submissive. One really has to think. Who has who captive in this poem. Beautiful. Somewhat confusing. But when closely observed, real.

Sometimes the confusing ones are the most honest.
You just write because you're tired of trying to be clever.
I think the desire and love follow buried within

Great comment

Thx DScruff

“ You just write because you're tired of trying to be clever”

Damnit, do I ever feel this. I get tired of trying to dream up clever metaphors and the like. I need real. I need raw. I need a bleeding heart on the table. This is inspirational to me.

I loved this piece. It doesn’t make me guess and it doesn’t mince words.

xx

Well, you know me well E xx
I totally get you getting me

Exhaustion reveals

Awesome comment

X

What a place to be
I'm sure you could have written similar Brandon

Thanks

No forgiveness my dear PS, just more rope.. bound so tight but I think we see who is really bound here. ;) Oh the passive dominance striving for submission, wanting to please with every tool of the trade. She, dying for it, silently demanding it with such all consuming feelings pushing beyond the limits of love. This is such an incredible and powerful expression of desire.

Just so many phenomenal lines....
"Then I tied you to the chair
I just wanted you there with me"
Brilliant...

For some reason made me think of Bonnie and Clyde.  

Yes
Bonnie and Clyde
Misfits, lovers of each other but also lovers of violence and power, but still with a heart.  The money was secondary, just part of the thrill.
Sticking up banks, sticking up you....

Bdsm is sexual identification and a confessional of intellectual property.  There are those who you need by your side who complete your search.  Capture, kidnap,  tie .....  whatever it takes

You read me well Kx
Always appreciate you
RL too.  I gave them up but still love them back occasionally

This is the moment

X

I agree with the prior comments. Power but with heart, yes!  I like the last line, it shows a vulnerability.
NG 🌹

I'm not afraid to show  vulnerability
It's my calling card actually in a what sometimes is a savage arena ....

Thanks so much NG

"I just wanted you there with me" I find it interesting that for as much dominance there is also some vulnerability, as if it fills the void.
Nicely done.

Yes a little of this and a little of that
Kristinax got it the best I think, Eerie too

Get a woman, tie her up, never let her go if she's a good one .
Thx Wallace