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Between letters, between lines
I write letters to you, kissing the pages ...
There are tears in my eyes, trembling in my hand.
My heart beats in my chest ... I lower my eyelashes ...
You will feel it as soon as you read me ...
I write you letters, and heaven is a witness,
How much truth is in them, how much pure love!
My tenderness for you ... will bring a fresh wind -
With your eyes read - all my confessions ...
I write letters to you ... line by line,
For hope and dreams, leaf after leaf ...
Read them with your soul, my earthly devotion,
And you will see "I love!" between letters, between lines ...
There are tears in my eyes, trembling in my hand.
My heart beats in my chest ... I lower my eyelashes ...
You will feel it as soon as you read me ...
I write you letters, and heaven is a witness,
How much truth is in them, how much pure love!
My tenderness for you ... will bring a fresh wind -
With your eyes read - all my confessions ...
I write letters to you ... line by line,
For hope and dreams, leaf after leaf ...
Read them with your soul, my earthly devotion,
And you will see "I love!" between letters, between lines ...
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Re. Between letters, between lines
13th Sep 2021 1:23am
I am a true believer in action. Taking the time with the details of love.
People can talk and say I love you. But it is in what you do. The surprise of my favorite coffee creamer in
the fridge. When my hubby goes grocery shopping with me and sees me pick up a certain shade of nail polish. I put it back thinking next time. I find it on my kitchen counter the next morning. The action of attention.
Bravo Kristina!
People can talk and say I love you. But it is in what you do. The surprise of my favorite coffee creamer in
the fridge. When my hubby goes grocery shopping with me and sees me pick up a certain shade of nail polish. I put it back thinking next time. I find it on my kitchen counter the next morning. The action of attention.
Bravo Kristina!
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13th Sep 2021 2:21am
It is always so wonderful to see your beautiful smile Adelphina. :) Taking the time with the details of love, that is so perfectly said. There are so many things that go beyond just the words, all of those actions... little things... And of course the big things like getting a new place together or having a child. The action of attention is truly such an amazing gift you give each other. It makes life worth living. So much is between the lines... Thank you so much for the comment. xo
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13th Sep 2021 1:36am
Re: Re. Between letters, between lines
13th Sep 2021 2:21am
Well placed meaningful words as usual Adagio. Thank you so much for the comment; I always appreciate your thoughts. xo
Re. Between letters, between lines
13th Sep 2021 1:38am
This is absolutely beautiful and whoever this is written for is a very lucky person. If they don't get the hint maybe direct action is required
Drop them a big HEY I LOVE YOU letter lol
Love and light beautiful poetess
Ron x
Drop them a big HEY I LOVE YOU letter lol
Love and light beautiful poetess
Ron x
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Re: Re. Between letters, between lines
13th Sep 2021 2:23am
Your comment has put a big smile on my face Ron. ;) I am so happy you found it beautiful and Oh yes! direct action is required always!!! (I like action). And it's definitely never a bad time to drop (or get) a big HEY I LOVE YOU letter. Sending so much love and light back at ya. xo
Re. Between letters, between lines
13th Sep 2021 2:01am
Some are afraid of getting a negative response once they openly place everything out there on the line. But if they are attentive and returning the attention that you're giving it's written across the sky. It's in the little going nowheres conversations, the late night texts, the smallest things. Tight work Lil X
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13th Sep 2021 2:26am
We must be vulnerable to truly love and trust someone and what comes next can be so incredible. I love that, it's written across the sky; definitely in the clouds, the sun, the stars, everything. All those little things are so wonderful and amazing but together they create something that is so much more! You know I love when you think it's tight work and I really appreciate your thoughts so much. xo
Re. Between letters, between lines
13th Sep 2021 3:49am
Beautiful. A love letter is heart felt gift, though words often fail to capture all, this was beautiful. Thank you for sharing this. 🌼
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13th Sep 2021 4:20pm
A truly heartfelt love letter from the soul is such a gift. It is indeed so difficult to capture love in words, but it is something you do in such a gorgeous and amazing way in your romantic and beautiful writing that radiates from the soul. I am so happy that you have found beauty in my writing. Thank you for sharing all that you do. xo
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Anonymous
13th Sep 2021 4:19am
Wow KX……you’re an absolute beautiful precious soul…….inside and out……I’m speechless how much this outstanding ink moved me…….another gorgeous tribute…….purple luv & hugs xo :)
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13th Sep 2021 4:48pm
And again, it is me who finds myself speechless. That you can feel me is such a beautiful thing; something I cannot express in words. And purple luv and hugs brings me some joy and comfort in the midst of the pain and suffering. And consider this a tribute for you as well, for your love and caring; for the purple luv and hugs you give. xo
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13th Sep 2021 4:52pm
It is indeed, and I appreciate the love that you give so much Francisco. I hope that it shines back upon you so brightly. Your encouragement helps pave the way. xo
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Anonymous
13th Sep 2021 6:18am
God judges by what's in the heart.
Of course, good intentions and all that...
Enjoyed!
Of course, good intentions and all that...
Enjoyed!
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13th Sep 2021 5:08pm
Hi Mark! it is always so wonderful to see you and hear your thoughts. We are judged on so many things; but what's in the heart, that truly matters. Ah, those intentions; what is truly behind them? I have felt so much of the impact from intentions in my life. xo
Re. Between letters, between lines
13th Sep 2021 7:50am
Writing letters is a lost art. Pouring your tears over the scribbles is, ahh the good old days. I am not one to reminisce over the past, but this I do miss.
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13th Sep 2021 5:17pm
That is so true PG, it is definitely a lost art. Still, perhaps we can hang on to this lost art. Pouring our heart and soul into words that can move others in the depth of the waters from which they flow. Thank you so much for your thoughts. xo
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So much can be said in a letter that perhaps could never be said out loud. Like so many other things gone by the wayside in modern life, Covid being one of them, we as humans have altered communication so much that even in-person and phone communication is becoming a lost art.
Last year before Covid began I went to a mini family reunion and my sister discovered love letters my father had written my mom during World War II. Letter after letter expressing love and yearning, trying to fight a war overseas and get back to marry my mom. We were blown away how vocal he was in his letters but as a parent he became quiet and withdrawn. I felt I never really knew him but he became alive all over again in those letters. We wondered if my mom had sent him scented letters to warm him in his loneliness as a soldier far from home ? We will never know but my mom was a passionate woman, it wouldn't surprise me ....
Your write brought all this to the surface. You have a way of doing that to the readers of your work. It's a gift Kristina, i hope you continue to write and expand our horizons .....
A beautiful offering
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Last year before Covid began I went to a mini family reunion and my sister discovered love letters my father had written my mom during World War II. Letter after letter expressing love and yearning, trying to fight a war overseas and get back to marry my mom. We were blown away how vocal he was in his letters but as a parent he became quiet and withdrawn. I felt I never really knew him but he became alive all over again in those letters. We wondered if my mom had sent him scented letters to warm him in his loneliness as a soldier far from home ? We will never know but my mom was a passionate woman, it wouldn't surprise me ....
Your write brought all this to the surface. You have a way of doing that to the readers of your work. It's a gift Kristina, i hope you continue to write and expand our horizons .....
A beautiful offering
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13th Sep 2021 5:35pm
Our communication has changed so much, with technology leading the charge leaving the art of letters in it's wake in the midst of a quick response that only leaves things on the surface. Perhaps I was
meant for a different time; one where a handwritten letter touches the soul and the gentle curves of the letters speak to the heart directly. Those deep feelings can be so hard to express but those
love letters reveal this intense emotion so vividly. The incredible passion displayed among such pain... Those words can keep us going, keep us fighting. If I can incite such memories of love and passion then I feel that is an accomplishment. No doubt her letters kept him going, kept him fighting to return home to her. Knowing that I could bring such memories to the surface is truly an amazing feeling. Thank you so much for your wonderful thoughts. I am truly grateful for your kind and supportive words. And I love the BIG LIKE. Thank you so much PS... xo
meant for a different time; one where a handwritten letter touches the soul and the gentle curves of the letters speak to the heart directly. Those deep feelings can be so hard to express but those
love letters reveal this intense emotion so vividly. The incredible passion displayed among such pain... Those words can keep us going, keep us fighting. If I can incite such memories of love and passion then I feel that is an accomplishment. No doubt her letters kept him going, kept him fighting to return home to her. Knowing that I could bring such memories to the surface is truly an amazing feeling. Thank you so much for your wonderful thoughts. I am truly grateful for your kind and supportive words. And I love the BIG LIKE. Thank you so much PS... xo
Re. Between letters, between lines
13th Sep 2021 9:33am
Dear K,
Echo Penguinphile. Writing letters at all is a lost art and a love letter- losing that art is a crime. I really treasured the memory of doing this and “ For hope and dreams, leaf after leaf ... ” that feeling of laying my soul bare. That exquisite moment where that utter truth is revealed to someone. It’s a fragile piece of crystal giving someone your love. You wrote me right down memory lane with this lush piece. Lovely.
H🌷
Echo Penguinphile. Writing letters at all is a lost art and a love letter- losing that art is a crime. I really treasured the memory of doing this and “ For hope and dreams, leaf after leaf ... ” that feeling of laying my soul bare. That exquisite moment where that utter truth is revealed to someone. It’s a fragile piece of crystal giving someone your love. You wrote me right down memory lane with this lush piece. Lovely.
H🌷
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Re: Re. Between letters, between lines
13th Sep 2021 5:45pm
It is such a lost art and definitely a crime for which I feel I am unable to offer worthy penance. Laying the soul bare for another in so many beautiful, or painful, words that touch the soul. Revealing the truth can be so difficult; something that seems to have been lost among the noise. A fragile piece of crystal so easily broken. And if I wrote you down memory lane, my beautiful indescribable Honoria, then I am truly humbled. And for what is lovely, that is you! xo
Re. Between letters, between lines
13th Sep 2021 1:44pm
This is pure heartfelt beauty... I can't add much that hasn't already been said, but I wanted you to know that I love this. Thank you for sharing it.
❤k
❤k
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Re: Re. Between letters, between lines
13th Sep 2021 5:56pm
My dearest BT, you have added so much; I always appreciate knowing that you found heartfelt beauty in my words. Knowing that you love this is so meaningful to me and I appreciate it so much. xo
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15th Sep 2021 6:50pm
Thank you so much for the comment and thoughts Relic, It's nice to see you. :) Letters of love can be so powerful and embody so much emotion. 'moments captured and given' I really love that representation. xo
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16th Sep 2021 5:46pm
Hi Darkwords!, it is so nice to meet you and I am so happy you found it beautiful and touching. I do love the dark so I am looking forward to reading some of your dark words. ;) xo
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For some reason, there are times I can only truly express my thoughts in written form. Maybe because face to face its difficult to stay on point with anxiety, shyness, embarrassment and communication feedback (verbal, facial expressions, demeanor, etc).
However, my gut tells me this poem is about writing letters to your mom, or yourself. Either avenue I think is fantastic. It may be easier to write out your feelings to your mom versus saying them to her directly (causing you to choke up for example). Or a letter to yourself to help you when you are feeling down. Of course, I could be off and its simply about writing to a boy you are smitten with!! : )
However, my gut tells me this poem is about writing letters to your mom, or yourself. Either avenue I think is fantastic. It may be easier to write out your feelings to your mom versus saying them to her directly (causing you to choke up for example). Or a letter to yourself to help you when you are feeling down. Of course, I could be off and its simply about writing to a boy you are smitten with!! : )
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Re: Re. Between letters, between lines
17th Sep 2021 9:14pm
Writing certainly does allow for a different form of expression. Sometimes it can be so difficult to truly find the right words face to face in the moment but often that is what a kiss or hand on the bum is for. ;) So many methods of communication to explore, it would be ashamed to miss any of them.
And again, you are very much on point. I definitely thought about my Mom, and even myself within the context of this one. I do not want to show my Mom how much I am being affected by things and I don't want her to see me cry; I need to be strong. But I want her to know how much I love her and provide all the support she needs in every way. And if she ever thought herself a burden it would kill me.
And of course it would not be complete without thinking about the kind of passionate love and need of a man as well. ;) xo
And again, you are very much on point. I definitely thought about my Mom, and even myself within the context of this one. I do not want to show my Mom how much I am being affected by things and I don't want her to see me cry; I need to be strong. But I want her to know how much I love her and provide all the support she needs in every way. And if she ever thought herself a burden it would kill me.
And of course it would not be complete without thinking about the kind of passionate love and need of a man as well. ;) xo
Re. Between letters, between lines
5th Oct 2021 8:20pm
Something about being able to hold the words as well read them make them more emotional. And it’s wonderful to see the emotions stirred from all those who commented. This is beautiful.
NG 🌹
NG 🌹
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Re: Re. Between letters, between lines
5th Oct 2021 8:35pm
Wow, this is such an incredible comment. Thank you so much NG for reading and sharing your thoughts. I feel like a deer caught in the headlights again. You have made my afternoon so much brighter! thanks again. xo
Re. Between letters, between lines
13th Oct 2021 5:16pm
Gotta love the underlying emotion, how it really comes across as heartfelt and passionate. As the old saying, reading between the lines, this carries so emotionally intense.
Wonderful work Kristina.
Wonderful work Kristina.
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13th Oct 2021 5:31pm
I have lots of emotion and it comes out in the lines and between letters and lines also. I am glad you could feel how heartfelt and passionate it is. That old saying definitely carries a lot of weight still. I am really happy you liked it. xo
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Re: Re. Between letters, between lines
31st Oct 2022 3:49pm
So very romantic, perhaps it may not seem that way sometimes but romance for me always leads to intense passion. The two go hand in hand. Romance is a fuel that ignite those passions even more. I love how you 'identify' a piece in regards to things like being contemporary. I never quite think of it that way, I just write. But emoting, ah yes - definitely good at that in real life too. ;) And different styles and moods... so many, so very many... I am so happy you saw the romantic facet. ;)
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18th Apr 2023 2:14pm
Stepping back in time.... Thanks for the read and like... I love that you can go back and enjoy these again. And I love the BIG...