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Making sense(s)
You touch me
with your imperfections
Reaching out
with both hands
silently caressing
away the pain
Recognition
of shared air
soothes skin
creates a
welcoming terrain
Closed eyes
palpable recall
lost within the taste
of sweet decadence
Hints of salty
richness
all consuming
is true nourishment
Snapshots frame
tender meanderings
images, viewseared
scouring the decay of hurt
You pierce strong, a veil
with a tiniest pin prick
of secure light
stealing it's way
through harsh
darkness
to shine upon
it's newest home
Illumination
of carefully
crafted
svelte sensitivity
Fragile and new,
is delicate
glowing light
upon a lovely face
Potential
magic
perhaps
angelic grace
Lucent
dualities
viscerally caress
awash
My once blinded
shadowy existence
combusts
newly bright, abounds
Gleaming
whimsical essence
quietly
and thoroughly
surrounds
Perfectly stimulated,
a thought
long awaited
olfactory
reacted
The very smell
incandescently drawn
in
wafts—
heady
pluming
Sweetest wildflower
scents,
thrilling
subconsciously
Thought tendrils
extended out
entwine time
imbued of
tender memory
Oh this welcomed
overload
to all senses
I am
left
completely
defenseless
Author's Note
My NoPoo from a few days ago that I updated a little bit
©Blu2021
©Blu2021
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Re: Re. Making sense(s)
14th Sep 2021 11:16pm
Awww, thanks so much for reading and the great comment, Lawrence.... You made me smile ☺
🌹 - 💙
B
🌹 - 💙
B
Re. Making sense(s)
11th Sep 2021 11:11am
With images just out of reach I rush through the first reading chasing dreams trapped by quill and ink - only to reach the end and realize the the dreams only exists within the reading. So the second reading is luxuriously slow, allowing the words to caress my spirit and ignite a glowing smile within my soul. Inspired, sated, and enthralled.
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Re: Re. Making sense(s)
Is there anything better than being able to rev that ignition?!?....Ohhh what a true compliment, Richard....Thank you my dear poet 🙏🏻 - 🔥
Your thoughts stimulate and the generosity of your spirit always leaves me motivated to continue to press forward, putting pen to paper.... I thank you for reading, the comments and the visit.
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The deepest parts of me are filled with such happiness that you are able to find joy within my little poem.... It's truly appreciated and my gratitude is boundless....
Much love and respect your way ✨
🌹 - 💙
B
Your thoughts stimulate and the generosity of your spirit always leaves me motivated to continue to press forward, putting pen to paper.... I thank you for reading, the comments and the visit.
.
The deepest parts of me are filled with such happiness that you are able to find joy within my little poem.... It's truly appreciated and my gratitude is boundless....
Much love and respect your way ✨
🌹 - 💙
B
Re. Making sense(s)
11th Sep 2021 3:05pm
Another amazing write from your creative mind. Thanks, as always, for sharing. Hugs and peace, (OO)
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Re: Re. Making sense(s)
14th Sep 2021 11:53pm
I appreciate your thoughtful comments, Oral... You're a lovely sight..... ✨ 💫 ✨
🌹 - 💙
xo
B
🌹 - 💙
xo
B
Re. Making sense(s)
11th Sep 2021 7:37pm
Princess of the moated castle - "Wait, why is the drawbridge down and the gate up?"
When you understand the terrain, you can sidestep the obstacles along the path and arrive behind her defenses. 🤔
xxoo
-LD
When you understand the terrain, you can sidestep the obstacles along the path and arrive behind her defenses. 🤔
xxoo
-LD
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Re: Re. Making sense(s)
It's sounding like war strategies.... or maybe more like the planning of attack during a chess match... hahahaha.... lol... ♟️It's the depth of his knowledge that's potentially alluring and tantalizing....
I giggled at your drawbridge down, gate up analogy.... It's only possibilities.... In my opinion it's all open and completely passable.... heh
Thanks Leo,
You always bring me a smile and a true giggle...
(I hope you're watching the Inspiration 4 episodes that were released on Netflix... They're amazing! and I know you're probably preparing for the Live countdown on Wed too =
https://www.space.com/netlix-inspiration4-spacex-mission-launch-webcast)
🚀 - 💙
xo
B
I giggled at your drawbridge down, gate up analogy.... It's only possibilities.... In my opinion it's all open and completely passable.... heh
Thanks Leo,
You always bring me a smile and a true giggle...
(I hope you're watching the Inspiration 4 episodes that were released on Netflix... They're amazing! and I know you're probably preparing for the Live countdown on Wed too =
https://www.space.com/netlix-inspiration4-spacex-mission-launch-webcast)
🚀 - 💙
xo
B
Re: Re. Making sense(s)
15th Sep 2021 7:10pm
Thanks for the space info. I've been lax following it recently. If I'm not mistaken, the crew will be all civilians.
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Re: Re. Making sense(s)
Yes, they are! I believe that they're scheduled to lift off tonight @ 8pm from Canaveral..... if the weather permits!.... Woo-hoo....Exciting!!
I hope you get a chance to watch the documentary on Netflix that leads up to today.... it's fantastic!
🚀 - 💙
I hope you get a chance to watch the documentary on Netflix that leads up to today.... it's fantastic!
🚀 - 💙
Re. Making sense(s)
11th Sep 2021 8:45pm
Strong feeling of intimacy in this poem.
Feels like you are talking directly to me.
Well done poet!
❣️🙏🏼
Feels like you are talking directly to me.
Well done poet!
❣️🙏🏼
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Re: Re. Making sense(s)
15th Sep 2021 00:13am
Thanks for taking the time to leave your thoughts, KP... It means a lot to me and I'm all smiles you felt the intimate nature...
🌹 - 💙
xo
B
🌹 - 💙
xo
B
Re. Making sense(s)
11th Sep 2021 8:53pm
His touch gives you orgasmic bliss. Keep on writing you strong beautiful smart sexy woman 👩.
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Re: Re. Making sense(s)
15th Sep 2021 00:14am
I am always on the look out for the best that bliss... haha... Thank you, Francisco
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Re. Making sense(s)
11th Sep 2021 11:40pm
Dear, lady Blue❣🌹,
I emkoyed, immensely, this beautifil piece. This stNza is so stroking in it's imagery,
"My once blinded
shadowy existence
combusts
newly bright, abounds"
Bravissima, my lovely Goddess BB💋🐻💞🐰
I emkoyed, immensely, this beautifil piece. This stNza is so stroking in it's imagery,
"My once blinded
shadowy existence
combusts
newly bright, abounds"
Bravissima, my lovely Goddess BB💋🐻💞🐰
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Re: Re. Making sense(s)
11th Sep 2021 11:44pm
Muah.... muah.... muah!!!
Danke, mein liebenswerter BB!!
I can't thank you enough, for being so incredible... I truly appreciate you dropping in and being my DU highlight! ✨ 💫 ✨
Much love and oodles of hugs and kisses too 💜
xoxo
🌹 - 💙 - 🐰 - 🐻 - 💋
-Blue
Danke, mein liebenswerter BB!!
I can't thank you enough, for being so incredible... I truly appreciate you dropping in and being my DU highlight! ✨ 💫 ✨
Much love and oodles of hugs and kisses too 💜
xoxo
🌹 - 💙 - 🐰 - 🐻 - 💋
-Blue
Re. Making sense(s)
12th Sep 2021 2:42am
Re: Re. Making sense(s)
Your comments and the generosity of your spirit, shine so brilliantly, Harry.
I am alway deeply thankful for your visits, the kindness you've shown and the encouragement your words beautifully convey upon my page.... ✨
Much love and respect, dear poet 🙏🏻
🌹 - 💙 - 🐨
xo
B
I am alway deeply thankful for your visits, the kindness you've shown and the encouragement your words beautifully convey upon my page.... ✨
Much love and respect, dear poet 🙏🏻
🌹 - 💙 - 🐨
xo
B
Re. Making sense(s)
12th Sep 2021 4:03am
the vulnerability and yet firm~reach of that which does shine.. damn this is intricately beautiful, ladylove♡♡
That third stanza just Forces an intake of breath, subconcious n lovely.. enthralling the reader with where ur words will tug next..
"Fragile and new,
is delicate
glowing light
upon a lovely face
Potential
magic
perhaps
angelic grace"
~fer certes, my fav stanzas.. delicate and bleeding
All magicks, this and You..
*facekisses over the miles, with so much loves,
~d
That third stanza just Forces an intake of breath, subconcious n lovely.. enthralling the reader with where ur words will tug next..
"Fragile and new,
is delicate
glowing light
upon a lovely face
Potential
magic
perhaps
angelic grace"
~fer certes, my fav stanzas.. delicate and bleeding
All magicks, this and You..
*facekisses over the miles, with so much loves,
~d
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Re: Re. Making sense(s)
I am basking within the warmth and goodness from all the beauty sent my way via cybersmoochies and your lovely brand of tenderness.... These heartened words, illuminate and power a light inside me that I didn't even realize needed to be relit.... Until your lovely comments and generous insights, made my fire come to life... with a roar!! ..... I am so grateful and blessed to be able to call you a friend... My cup runneth over.. My motivation is sparked too,
.... I don't take this type of kindness lightly and I'm deeply and truly appreciative 🙏🏻
Sending returned cyberhugs /smooches and endless love your way ✨ .....
🌹 - 💙
xo
B
.... I don't take this type of kindness lightly and I'm deeply and truly appreciative 🙏🏻
Sending returned cyberhugs /smooches and endless love your way ✨ .....
🌹 - 💙
xo
B
Re. Making sense(s)
12th Sep 2021 1:51pm
Re: Re. Making sense(s)
15th Sep 2021 00:43am
Thanks for taking the time to leave your thoughts, NG... Yes, sometimes it's the best place to be.... lol..
Always a pleasure ✨
🌹 - B
Always a pleasure ✨
🌹 - B
Re. Making sense(s)
13th Sep 2021 8:13pm
This is professional grade work. I love it. It's not just word choice but the way you use and connect words. Awesome 👍😎
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Re: Re. Making sense(s)
15th Sep 2021 00:46am
Hey there William, you're a lovely sight to see and read tonight.... Your ability to be open and honest, reflects not only in your poetry but within your heartfelt comments and summations, too. I am humbly appreciative and so very thankful for your kind words, here.... It means the world and I absolutely adore you taking the time you have... It's empowering and I am filled will gratitude.
Much love from across the pond ✨ 🌊
🌹 - 💙
xo
B
Much love from across the pond ✨ 🌊
🌹 - 💙
xo
B
Re: Re. Making sense(s)
15th Sep 2021 1:48am
It's been my pleasure 😊
Your work makes kind words and attention easy to do! And thank you for all the compliments. Your reply was better than my comment lol
Your work makes kind words and attention easy to do! And thank you for all the compliments. Your reply was better than my comment lol
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Re: Re. Making sense(s)
15th Sep 2021 10:09pm
Lol.... You're welcome, my friend 🙏🏻 .... Your remarks here and elsewhere have been terrific!
I feel it's important to convey some humility and an honest sense of appreciation, so perhaps I tend to be long winded... hahaha....
It's always a pleasure to see you ✨
🌹 - 💙
B
I feel it's important to convey some humility and an honest sense of appreciation, so perhaps I tend to be long winded... hahaha....
It's always a pleasure to see you ✨
🌹 - 💙
B
Re: Re. Making sense(s)
15th Sep 2021 10:14pm
Re. Making sense(s)
Anonymous
15th Sep 2021 10:58am
Hey Blue…….this is a gorgeous ink as usual……..you write amazingly……..I’m lost for words……..purple luv & hugs xo :)
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Re: Re. Making sense(s)
15th Sep 2021 10:15pm
Ohhh flowergirl.... Your visits are always so inspired and truly lovely.... I often question myself and my writing, even as I really try to be less self deprecating, so your voice, via your comments brings my focus back to where it needs to be, in such a pleasurable and kind way.... I wholeheartedly appreciate you for that and
I humbly thank you, dear purple poetess....
Please don't be a stranger,
🌹- 💜 💜 💜 💜
xoxo
B
I humbly thank you, dear purple poetess....
Please don't be a stranger,
🌹- 💜 💜 💜 💜
xoxo
B
Re. Making sense(s)
21st Sep 2021 7:44am
You are a maestro at weaving sensuality into a seduction that is oh so erotic but subtle in your mission to take the reader into that point of no return. Loved this through and through.
Xo
John
Xo
John
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Re: Re. Making sense(s)
21st Sep 2021 2:00pm
Thank youuuuuuu.... I love being able to weave the seduction in such a way that I can leave my indelible marks..... just.. so... *wink
I adore your comments and the generous list ads you've so graciously seen fit to bestow.... I am so happy and grateful that you loved what you've read here....
All my warmest appreciation, John
Thanks again -
Susan
xoxo
I adore your comments and the generous list ads you've so graciously seen fit to bestow.... I am so happy and grateful that you loved what you've read here....
All my warmest appreciation, John
Thanks again -
Susan
xoxo
Re. Making sense(s)
22nd Sep 2021 9:28pm
This is a Very power poem for me. It is powerful in that it kept me intrigued. There is not a lot I know about format and arrangement of words. At times I knew exactly how it made me feel and what it was saying. At other times I had to read again and again. To my embarrassment I often found myself looking a lot of words up to get a clearer understanding. (This is In no way in a critique of your writing. It is more of a lack of my exposure to poetry and Scholastic background.) the more I write this the more it’s sounding like a back handed compliment. I really don’t mean it as such. What I’m really trying to say is that with a lot of poetry; if there’s something that I just don’t get , I usually just go off to the next poem. This poem has compelled me to study and dig deeper into the lines. That is just something I normally don’t have the attention span to do. This poem has compelled me to do so. Maybe it’s the overall joy that I see in it. Maybe it’s how you describe that infectious light that you mentioned. Okay I’m rambling. I’ll just shut up and say “Great poem.” lol
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Re: Re. Making sense(s)
22nd Sep 2021 9:57pm
Hey there, DS :)... Nice seeing you 🦋
Firstly, I appreciate you stopping by to read and hanging in there for the long haul.... It means a lot, so kudos to you for that! Secondly, I feel the same way about long writes with word choices that I don't usually use or can't really get the meaning of... it IS tedious and I too, usually move along to the next read.... So no feelings of backhanded compliments, here... I assure you. I didn't mind your thoughts or have any problems with your kind comments... I felt your honesty refreshing and open... Like a breath of fresh air.. 🍃
I am so grateful that you managed to make it through, and it seems like you felt a sort of connection that allowed for your curiosity to dig a bit deeper ...THAT'S a true amazing compliment, in itself!! How awesome! I usually don't write longer poems; this one is probably one of the longer ones out of my repertoire....It's formatting lengthens it in appearance as well....All in all.... your insights and sentiments were smile inducing and I am smiling from ear to ear and incredibly happy that you enjoyed and found something within it. I thank you for the generous Reading List ad as well - 🙏🏻
Much gratitude and heartfelt joy your way ✨
You're always welcomed here,
🌹 - 💙
—B
Firstly, I appreciate you stopping by to read and hanging in there for the long haul.... It means a lot, so kudos to you for that! Secondly, I feel the same way about long writes with word choices that I don't usually use or can't really get the meaning of... it IS tedious and I too, usually move along to the next read.... So no feelings of backhanded compliments, here... I assure you. I didn't mind your thoughts or have any problems with your kind comments... I felt your honesty refreshing and open... Like a breath of fresh air.. 🍃
I am so grateful that you managed to make it through, and it seems like you felt a sort of connection that allowed for your curiosity to dig a bit deeper ...THAT'S a true amazing compliment, in itself!! How awesome! I usually don't write longer poems; this one is probably one of the longer ones out of my repertoire....It's formatting lengthens it in appearance as well....All in all.... your insights and sentiments were smile inducing and I am smiling from ear to ear and incredibly happy that you enjoyed and found something within it. I thank you for the generous Reading List ad as well - 🙏🏻
Much gratitude and heartfelt joy your way ✨
You're always welcomed here,
🌹 - 💙
—B
Re. Making sense(s)
29th Sep 2021 7:11pm
Completely defenseless? Sometimes that is the best offense.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
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Re: Re. Making sense(s)
29th Sep 2021 7:47pm
lol... Damn bk!
Tis stark truth you leave me with! I dig it and relish your on your kind and generous visits!!!
Thanks for thinking of me - 💙
🌹 - B
Tis stark truth you leave me with! I dig it and relish your on your kind and generous visits!!!
Thanks for thinking of me - 💙
🌹 - B
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Re. Making sense(s)
12th Oct 2021 3:53am
"Closed eyes
palpable recall
lost within the taste
of sweet decadence"
this stanza and as with many others, you really heightened the senses, giving the poem an overall quality of something classic, as if written centuries ago and yet staying so modern in the sensuality of it all.
Wonderful work.
palpable recall
lost within the taste
of sweet decadence"
this stanza and as with many others, you really heightened the senses, giving the poem an overall quality of something classic, as if written centuries ago and yet staying so modern in the sensuality of it all.
Wonderful work.
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Re: Re. Making sense(s)
12th Oct 2021 3:57am
Wow, really awesome feedback, Walter.
I'm stoked you enjoyed and found that my little poem had a bit of impact! That's very awesome.
All my humble thanks and appreciation - 🙏🏻
🌹 - B
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I'm stoked you enjoyed and found that my little poem had a bit of impact! That's very awesome.
All my humble thanks and appreciation - 🙏🏻
🌹 - B
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