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The daisies and the wind
The joyful daisies danced
with the wind
Swaying to the song of their
carefree paramour
Wedded to earth but his
heart they spy
Lost in the love of that loony guy;
losing their petals...losing their existence
Oh, what a love...
Oh my!
with the wind
Swaying to the song of their
carefree paramour
Wedded to earth but his
heart they spy
Lost in the love of that loony guy;
losing their petals...losing their existence
Oh, what a love...
Oh my!
Author's Note
Ah this writer's block... So posting an old poem of mine...
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Re. The daisies and the wind
6th Sep 2021 2:54pm
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6th Sep 2021 2:59pm
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6th Sep 2021 2:59pm
Re. The daisies and the wind
6th Sep 2021 3:21pm
Beautiful photo and awesome poem to accompany ....
A good poem lasts forever
BIG LIKE
A good poem lasts forever
BIG LIKE
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6th Sep 2021 3:23pm
Re. The daisies and the wind
6th Sep 2021 3:35pm
Lovely ... thanks for sharing ... don't you hate that writer's block ... I use it as a poetry prompt when I get stuck ...
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Re: Re. The daisies and the wind
6th Sep 2021 8:00pm
Thank you, dear poetess🌹
Oh, how I hate WB... It's been so many months and I'm not able to pen down anything....
Yeah, I have used WB as a poetry prompt on three occasions... May be try again... Thanks 😊
Oh, how I hate WB... It's been so many months and I'm not able to pen down anything....
Yeah, I have used WB as a poetry prompt on three occasions... May be try again... Thanks 😊
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6th Sep 2021 4:45pm
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6th Sep 2021 8:02pm
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7th Sep 2021 2:27am
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6th Sep 2021 4:47pm
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6th Sep 2021 8:02pm
Re. The daisies and the wind
6th Sep 2021 6:48pm
This is both whimsical and serious! Sometimes we do lose ourselves for others; it's an apt metaphor! <3
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6th Sep 2021 8:04pm
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Re: Re. The daisies and the wind
6th Sep 2021 8:47pm
Glad you liked it.... Very happy to see this piece got a corner in your reading list.... Much thanks, dear BP☺🌹
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7th Sep 2021 9:03am
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7th Sep 2021 8:20am
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7th Sep 2021 8:30am
Thank you so much, dear RFC... Your comments always bring a smile on my face... I'm so honoured by the RL add😊🌹🌹🌹❤
Re. The daisies and the wind
7th Sep 2021 1:16pm
I think that daisies are a good symbol for care free.
... I like how you endow the daisies with an awareness of things, and in this awareness, the reactions that occur.
Nicely done.
... I like how you endow the daisies with an awareness of things, and in this awareness, the reactions that occur.
Nicely done.
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Re: Re. The daisies and the wind
7th Sep 2021 2:10pm
Thank you, dear poet....i love how you dissect a poem on a metaphysical level... It's so refreshing to read your comments full with wisdom
Re. The daisies and the wind
7th Sep 2021 2:37pm
Just amazing took me back many years pulling petals in the ( she loves me, she loves me not) moments
Absolutely beautiful
Love and light
Ron xx
Absolutely beautiful
Love and light
Ron xx
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Re: Re. The daisies and the wind
7th Sep 2021 2:44pm
So glad to see this piece taking you back to those innocently beautiful moments of life...
Thank you so much, dear poet... 🌷I'm so honoured by the RL add 😊
Thank you so much, dear poet... 🌷I'm so honoured by the RL add 😊
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Re: Re. The daisies and the wind
21st Sep 2021 7:20pm
... and a wonderful poetic comment 😊 it has put a smile on my face, dear DW...
Thanks for your kind support 🌹
Thanks for your kind support 🌹
Re. The daisies and the wind
12th Oct 2021 2:42am
This reminds me of a old story my great grandma Pokni (that wasn't her name but that is what everyone called her)
She would tell all sorts of stories but it took some time to find the name of this one it reminded me of.
Shawondasee and the Golden Girl
Tells love story between a great spirit falling in love with essentially a dandelion.
She would tell all sorts of stories but it took some time to find the name of this one it reminded me of.
Shawondasee and the Golden Girl
Tells love story between a great spirit falling in love with essentially a dandelion.
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Pokni... Aah i love that.... It's sounds cute 😊
I just googled the story... Nice interesting one. 😊 I like these kinds of traditional stories...
Thank you so much, dear poetess, for sharing your thoughts and the lovely story... Thanks a lot for taking time to read and comment on this piece. 😊🌹🌹🌹
I just googled the story... Nice interesting one. 😊 I like these kinds of traditional stories...
Thank you so much, dear poetess, for sharing your thoughts and the lovely story... Thanks a lot for taking time to read and comment on this piece. 😊🌹🌹🌹
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Re: Re. The daisies and the wind
11th Mar 2022 12:56pm
Thanks a lot, dear relic... I'm elated way beyond by your kind words.... and I'm so honoured by the RL adds of my poems. 😊🌷🌷🌷
Re. The daisies and the wind
28th Mar 2022 2:16am
Your prose make me want to be a better poet. Thank you for sharing your gift. This is beautiful beyond words.
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Re: Re. The daisies and the wind
28th Mar 2022 7:20pm
And I can't express in words how much your kind n encouraging words of appreciation mean to me... 😊
Thank you so much, dear poetess🌷🌷🌷
Thank you so much, dear poetess🌷🌷🌷