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4th Sep 2021 1:13am
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4th Sep 2021 3:30am
hi Robert your poem made me think of this song so I thought it would share it with you...
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TEqX5CWh7tY
great feeling write I feel for your heart....
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TEqX5CWh7tY
great feeling write I feel for your heart....
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4th Sep 2021 3:34am
Thanks. I will try the yoiu tube connection. Perhaps simpler to give me the name of the song?
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4th Sep 2021 4:05am
Hello sweets: just listened to Blue on Black. I swear I did not steal the words....''words can't be undone oh no, well it slipped from the tip of your tongue''. Great minds unite...ok, kidding. Kisses, Robert.
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they really do I've written poems and been on similar wavelengths it's not unusual at all...
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