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Lying
I lied to myself
All those years.
Pretentious.
Super inflated
Ego
Based on zero.
Then I was mad
At everyboy,
Mad at the World
Because the
House of Cards
Toppled and the
Ego was smashed
To nothing
By Reality.
All those years.
Pretentious.
Super inflated
Ego
Based on zero.
Then I was mad
At everyboy,
Mad at the World
Because the
House of Cards
Toppled and the
Ego was smashed
To nothing
By Reality.
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Re. Lying
1st Sep 2021 4:40am
Re. Lying
4th Sep 2021 3:33am
hi Robert I feel for your tenderness
you are still you...regardless...
great write...
you are still you...regardless...
great write...
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Re: Re. Lying
4th Sep 2021 3:36am
Thanks. i appreciate your comments. Reality hits hard. Every day I try to deal with it. Not bitching, but not easy to live with myself and accepting who and what I am. Kisses, Robert.
Re: Re. Lying
4th Sep 2021 3:39am
I understand dearest Robert I have to as well I look at myself and think I need at least one more lifetime to be any good at a relationship...I understand being hard on yourself...relationships aren't easy...
much love my dearest poet....
much love my dearest poet....
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Re: Re. Lying
4th Sep 2021 3:44am
We are in the same boat in a manner. At least we are progressing in that we realize that we have issues... PS: crimsin seems like a sort of code name?
Re: Re. Lying
4th Sep 2021 3:49am
it's just my pen name meaning sinful criminal so I guess it is code... I used to live in the fast lane...not these days...yes I think just recognizing that is progress...
I like yours a Viking I love listening to Wardruna and other Viking music...
I'm listening to Zach Wild at the moment who looks like a big Viking amazing guitar...
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HdS7i6xy7_w
I like yours a Viking I love listening to Wardruna and other Viking music...
I'm listening to Zach Wild at the moment who looks like a big Viking amazing guitar...
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HdS7i6xy7_w
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Re: Re. Lying
4th Sep 2021 3:55am
My HS was Vikings. But I also got into Northern Mythology through many sources, one including Ludwig II, king of Bavaria (and ''creator'' of Neuschwanstein castle) and his love for Wagner and works. Ok: I don't freak out on opera...just ''the best of'' in a manner. PS: I will have a lot of music to listen to in the next couple of days and more. Kisses, Robert.
Re. Lying
6th Oct 2021 5:12pm
I think in our youth, for some reason the ego think it knows everything and then life really gets a hold of us and slaps us back to reality.
Reflective and insightful write robert.
Reflective and insightful write robert.
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Re: Re. Lying
6th Oct 2021 7:03pm