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April
I breathe warm air upon the earth.
Life-giving breath. Ruach.
I push the darkness back towards the night
giving the sun more hours;
encouraging growth, new life, rebirth.
My cascading showers irrigate the soil,
quenching the thirst of the plants and flowers.
Leaves and grass spring forth,
transforming the world to shades of green
which are interspersed with white clouds in the sky
and early clouds of pinkish blossom on the trees.
Esprit d'avril.
Life-giving breath. Ruach.
I push the darkness back towards the night
giving the sun more hours;
encouraging growth, new life, rebirth.
My cascading showers irrigate the soil,
quenching the thirst of the plants and flowers.
Leaves and grass spring forth,
transforming the world to shades of green
which are interspersed with white clouds in the sky
and early clouds of pinkish blossom on the trees.
Esprit d'avril.
Written by
Wafflenose
(Ellie)
Published 31st Aug 2021
Author's Note
Written for the Nature of your birth competition
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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Re. April
31st Aug 2021 12:16pm
So nicely done Miss Ellie! I enjoyed the image of pinkish blossom on the trees… so pretty
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Re. April
31st Aug 2021 12:49pm
Lovely imagery... Beautifully penned... It fills the reader with a sense of calmness n joy
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31st Aug 2021 12:50pm
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1st Sep 2021 1:22am
I'm a teacher, and not overly happy about it at the moment. I've just been having a look at other jobs!
Re. April
1st Sep 2021 1:14am
May is the best month, but April comes a close second...btw my birthday's in May....loved being transported back to spring...
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Re: Re. April
1st Sep 2021 1:21am
Thank you! Mine is in April (for the competition, we had to write about our birth month). My younger daughter's is in May. Her sister's is in October. I don't think this is one of my finest works by any stretch, but I'm having fun trying!
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1st Sep 2021 1:36am
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1st Sep 2021 1:39am
Ha ha, yes. No matching temper though. You might enjoy 'The Secret Society'. Just saying!
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1st Sep 2021 1:58am
How spectacularly arrogant of me. I forgot to point out that it's one of my recent poems, but relevant to the conversation!
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/428362-the-secret-society/
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/428362-the-secret-society/
Re. April
1st Sep 2021 2:16pm