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Eternal passages
If there is a world full of wonder, I am ready to see it,
And if the sky is full of thunder, will let that lightening hit me
So when my fire-burnt soul turns to ashes
Will touch the ground
Then my life and love, on a tree leave
Will give them sound
As the wind and Earth go round and around
And if the sky is full of thunder, will let that lightening hit me
So when my fire-burnt soul turns to ashes
Will touch the ground
Then my life and love, on a tree leave
Will give them sound
As the wind and Earth go round and around
Published 28th Jul 2021
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28th Jul 2021 8:59pm
Really like this ... crisp ... powerful ... resounding ... well penned ...
28th Jul 2021 10:36pm
Hey, thank you! I am glad you spent some of your time and patience to read and share your coment too!😊
28th Jul 2021 11:22pm
I guess the World still goes round without us but I wouldn't like the idea of you being struck by lightening, all the same!
What I meant is: As time moves on, and we are not here anymore, there are the memories we have left behind, which still keep holding something of us alive. Sure the world keeps going round, with and without us. And yes, I will let that damn lightening hit me, if it is meant to be, but I will never hide away of " new life experiences" fear!
Thank you😊
Thank you😊
26th Aug 2021 6:43pm
I liked this. What I take away from it is living life to your very fullest and most colourful, while you can. Well done.
