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Words on the Embankment
I keep coming back
Sexuality and grace mark you
My hands are calloused
You're my kind
I paint for you
Do extra reps
Try harder
I know my place
I'm an observer
You took me inside
It's a cool darkness
Firey sparkles
Moments on the perimeter
You rescued me from silence
Words on the embankment
Look for me there
Sexuality and grace mark you
My hands are calloused
You're my kind
I paint for you
Do extra reps
Try harder
I know my place
I'm an observer
You took me inside
It's a cool darkness
Firey sparkles
Moments on the perimeter
You rescued me from silence
Words on the embankment
Look for me there
Published 17th Jul 2021
Author's Note
Writing out of writers block
Image by Poetspeak
Image by Poetspeak
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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17th Jul 2021 2:33am
17th Jul 2021 2:36am
17th Jul 2021 3:18am
this is so beautiful dearest Poet
my soul is deeply touched
by your tender pen...
any lady would be so lucky
to inspire you like this...
my soul is deeply touched
by your tender pen...
any lady would be so lucky
to inspire you like this...
17th Jul 2021 4:23am
I must say, she does a good job
I'm totally mesmerized
An extraordinary human
Thx Brenda
Love seeing you well again
X
I'm totally mesmerized
An extraordinary human
Thx Brenda
Love seeing you well again
X
17th Jul 2021 4:50am
Dear PS,
“ I know my place
I'm an observer” not sure if it’s where I am just now but I found myself drawn to these sentences. As though there is an awareness and an acceptance to our roles in life. I’m putting this on a t-shirt. Lovely write and great pic. H🌷
“ I know my place
I'm an observer” not sure if it’s where I am just now but I found myself drawn to these sentences. As though there is an awareness and an acceptance to our roles in life. I’m putting this on a t-shirt. Lovely write and great pic. H🌷
17th Jul 2021 11:46am
Good morning H
Thank you for the lovely comment
I'd like to see you wearing that t shirt
Yes, its good to be an observer and then jump in when necessary....
Thank you for the lovely comment
I'd like to see you wearing that t shirt
Yes, its good to be an observer and then jump in when necessary....
Anonymous
- Edited 17th Jul 2021 6:37am
17th Jul 2021 6:36am
"embankment" is an amazing choice here--
My favorite line:
"Words on the embankment
Look for me there"
Grounded yet very suggestive, ambiguous, and also filled with longing, deep connection.
Very nice!
My favorite line:
"Words on the embankment
Look for me there"
Grounded yet very suggestive, ambiguous, and also filled with longing, deep connection.
Very nice!
17th Jul 2021 11:48am
Thank you Mark
I appreciate the comment
I've felt this way for a long time so it was time to write it ....
I appreciate the comment
I've felt this way for a long time so it was time to write it ....
17th Jul 2021 12:07pm
Is it possible for something to be full of both longing and acceptance at the same time...? You've certainly done it here. So beautiful. And the art.....❤
This one's a keeper. ✔
xx
This one's a keeper. ✔
xx
17th Jul 2021 1:32pm
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26th Jul 2021 4:06am
I'm mesmerized by the art. The glow is phenomenal.
There's something aftercare-ish about it...
Great work, all around. You do a superb
job of mashing together your art forms.
xx
There's something aftercare-ish about it...
Great work, all around. You do a superb
job of mashing together your art forms.
xx
26th Jul 2021 7:52am
Wow, what a nice comment E
I love making art, love and painting
All a win when they merge
Thx babe
🖤🖤
I love making art, love and painting
All a win when they merge
Thx babe
🖤🖤
8th Aug 2021 3:22am
Your combination of writing and imaging this combined perfectly. I've always said, that when battling writer's block, write about writer's block, or how frustrating it could be.
Well done sir. BIG LIKE.
Well done sir. BIG LIKE.
8th Aug 2021 11:29am
