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TWIN FLAMES
When we become one without making love we wonder beyond the flesh
Spirits float and find each other midair and all inhibitions turn to ash
Finding a home in each others essence and every breath just refreshes
Instincts only indicate natural surrender as heart beats conjoin and as one make symphonies of lust and love a blissful success
No shame
No blame
No judgment
Just intense enjoyment
Merging and evolving into each other genetically and deeply spliced
Inner beings calling each others names in silence mentally enticed
Honoring each others souls highly prized
Never leaving care and tenderness unemphasized
Mentally
Spiritually
Emotionally
Perfectly balanced to perfection
Seeing total gratification in each others reflection
Naked in all senses
No false pretenses
No asking WHY? and HOW?
Unspoken trust and honor solidifying our vow
Sexual or platonic
Such a connection is undeniable and supremely iconic
As what is mean to be will be its SONIC
An addiction forever CHRONIC
Spirits float and find each other midair and all inhibitions turn to ash
Finding a home in each others essence and every breath just refreshes
Instincts only indicate natural surrender as heart beats conjoin and as one make symphonies of lust and love a blissful success
No shame
No blame
No judgment
Just intense enjoyment
Merging and evolving into each other genetically and deeply spliced
Inner beings calling each others names in silence mentally enticed
Honoring each others souls highly prized
Never leaving care and tenderness unemphasized
Mentally
Spiritually
Emotionally
Perfectly balanced to perfection
Seeing total gratification in each others reflection
Naked in all senses
No false pretenses
No asking WHY? and HOW?
Unspoken trust and honor solidifying our vow
Sexual or platonic
Such a connection is undeniable and supremely iconic
As what is mean to be will be its SONIC
An addiction forever CHRONIC
Written by
SLYMBEKQUEEN
(BLAZE-QUEEN)
Published 8th Jul 2021
| Edited 25th Jul 2021
Author's Note
Finding your twin flame can be serendipitous and very exciting...
All you can hope for is one day feeling complete
https://youtu.be/wSuILmORIRY?list=PLqHm4KHTNxNO4P7zUPpFrhKqUJ9GTrr21
All you can hope for is one day feeling complete
https://youtu.be/wSuILmORIRY?list=PLqHm4KHTNxNO4P7zUPpFrhKqUJ9GTrr21
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Re. TWIN FLAMES
8th Jul 2021 5:11pm
A breathtaking and passionate read! Well penned and flowing with raw emotion! This is amazing Slymbekqueen!
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8th Jul 2021 5:18pm
Thanks i seldom find people that can understand a connection that goes beyond the flesh. Sometimes just the beauty of something or someone can be amazing to behold.
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8th Jul 2021 6:01pm
This spoke to me on a very deep level. It's always so beautiful when you meet someone that you feel so connected to. Beautiful work.
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8th Jul 2021 6:53pm
People always mistake such connections for being overwhelming or maybe something more but i believe we can have deep connections with anyone anywher
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9th Jul 2021 11:57am
I think the form worked well here, providing a sense of balance, uplifting to the theme, and I like the way you wove and worked inside of this form with line sizes and word selections.
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9th Jul 2021 12:00pm
Thank you sir most of the time it just happens.
I like that this comment made me feel like a real poet. IDK but its as if i just accepted it when reading ur comment. Thanks again
I like that this comment made me feel like a real poet. IDK but its as if i just accepted it when reading ur comment. Thanks again
Re. TWIN FLAMES
9th Jul 2021 12:57pm
Two poets living in separate worlds
Read the other's words
No flesh touches, but they touch.
Read the other's words
No flesh touches, but they touch.
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9th Jul 2021 2:07pm
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10th Jul 2021 8:42am
Hey beautiful you must of dropped this when I had no Internet. What a beautiful, passionate, gorgeous write
Absolutely one of my favourites from you
Love and light
Ron xx
Absolutely one of my favourites from you
Love and light
Ron xx
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10th Jul 2021 8:46am
well i am happy you love it... i think we often miss out on finding our twin flame as we tend to rush through conversations and we dont stop to see the others worth
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10th Jul 2021 8:49am
I couldn't agree more, finding time through the madness of life just to look and learn who others truly are is important. Never judge a book by its cover. You.must see and read between then lines
Love and light
Ron x
Love and light
Ron x
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10th Jul 2021 9:33am
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10th Jul 2021 9:41am
Reminds me of the song on Zombies 2. When Allison and Zed sang to each other
Someday, someday
We're gonna be someday
Someday, someday
We're gonna be someday
Someday, someday
We're gonna be someday
Someday, someday
We're gonna be someday
Great song. You always take me back to sweet things.
Thanks for your support.
Someday, someday
We're gonna be someday
Someday, someday
We're gonna be someday
Someday, someday
We're gonna be someday
Someday, someday
We're gonna be someday
Great song. You always take me back to sweet things.
Thanks for your support.
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16th Mar 2022 7:27pm
Favourite lines:
No judgment
Just intense enjoyment
Merging and evolving into each other genetically and deeply spliced
Inner beings calling each others names in silence mentally enticed
No judgment
Just intense enjoyment
Merging and evolving into each other genetically and deeply spliced
Inner beings calling each others names in silence mentally enticed
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