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Come Be Naked
Come, be naked for me.
Come.
Be.
Naked for me.
Come be,
naked for me.
Come be naked,
for me.
Come.
Be naked for me.
Cum.
Be naked
…for me
© 2021 Raibeart Bruis
Come.
Be.
Naked for me.
Come be,
naked for me.
Come be naked,
for me.
Come.
Be naked for me.
Cum.
Be naked
…for me
© 2021 Raibeart Bruis
Published 6th Jul 2021
Author's Note
Didn’t your mother teach you not to play with your words.
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6th Jul 2021 9:59pm
heh heh heh.... 😈
Guess I'll need to be taught a lesson... lol
Nicely penned, KP!
Guess I'll need to be taught a lesson... lol
Nicely penned, KP!
7th Jul 2021 6:54pm
7th Jul 2021 00:42am
7th Jul 2021 6:54pm
Interesting how sentences come out when words or groups of words are emphasised at different points. Favourite 0ne (for sense of possession):
Come be naked,
for me.
Come be naked,
for me.
7th Jul 2021 6:58pm
Yes. Interesting how pacing and pauses change meanings.
Then in person we get inflection, body language and setting thrown into the mix. No, wonder there are misunderstandings.
Thanks for you comments.
🙏
Then in person we get inflection, body language and setting thrown into the mix. No, wonder there are misunderstandings.
Thanks for you comments.
🙏
