A perfect storm

i love thunder... it reminds me how small i am...🌹
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Me too.... I find it relaxing....
Thanks for reading and your generous list add... I really appreciate it.
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B

I like to reread all the poetry i felt. I like to study people and patterns and routines. I think ur an awesome writer and poetess. Elegant. I think i could learn a thing or ten from ur writing. 🌹

Damn, nice comments, lovely lady. I am all smiles and humbled by your compliments.

Let me tell you that my first poem here was a true nightmare, so much so, that I have removed it out of embarrassment and keep it, for myself to look at, so I can remember how very much I have learned in the almost year that I've been here. I am still a work in progress, trust me.

I can already see a difference in your writing. You learn quickly and you're so very passionate. Two killer combinations that will take you a long way! I can't wait to see where you'll be, a few months from now. Don't let anyone stand in your way. Not here or anywhere. Keep writing, daily if possible. My biggest tip... (which you already do, I believe) is read, read, read as much as you can, here and elsewhere. It really broadens your horizons and expands your creativity. I wholly believe that reading as much as I do and the feedback I've received here are the two most valuable learning tools DU has afforded me.
Good luck to you!!

All my warmest wishes of continued growth ✨
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B

I appreciate you my lady.

Rain and thunder is the perfect writing platform

Seems you captured the storm, wicked write Blu.

I tried, Lj! Thanks for reading and I appreciate your comments muchly  
🌹 - B

Dear, Lady Blue
I am enthralled by the rich romanticism expressed in your description of a thunderstorm. I love them expect when they TKO our electricity...then I can do without the bombastic buggers.
And talk about romantic, this passage feeds my choo choo love,
"faintest sounds
of a train's whistle
sing it's song
of wandering
dreamy thought"
"Curt" is such an apt personification of the behavior of lightening.
And you educated me on a new form of "waft." Oh deep thinking goddess. Bravissima, BB🌹🐻💞🐰

Ohhh BB!!!
Your visits and continued support mean so much to me, my friend. I know it's not always easy to keep abreast of current entries, real life keeping you busy etc... which is all absolutely understandable.. Yet, I never get that sense that you've forgotten me, so I'm truly all smiles. I am with you, about the TKO of power, especially in the summer here... it gets so hot so fast without AC!!... lol... I'm so appreciative and glad you found the romance within. It made my night to read that...

Much love, my dear 🙏🏻
xoxo
-💙
🌹

Your words and the picture captured it perfectly, another A++. Hugs and peace, xo, oral

Thanks for your kind inspiring and thoughtful response, my dear poet 🙏🏻
A pleasure ✨
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xoxo
B

The rain where me and you go out there and play in the rain,  LOL.  Keep on writing you beautiful strong smart sexy woman.

hahaha... a little playtime is always good! Thanks, Francisco! 🌹

Existing within your poems is now one of my greatest pleasures. The world just stops and a feeling of contented fulfillment imbues the rest of my day [well until someone cuts me off on the highway]. The magic is not so much what you rhyme [well except your erotic prose, which is a whole other universe] but the world created by the rhyming, and by rhyming I mean the pacing if you follow me. Your poems are incantations transporting people to a new world and we all know incantations rely on how the spell is read as much as what the spell means. So, thank you for this new bit of magic.  

You uplift and inspire me with the sheer loveliness of your far far too kind comments, Richard. I very much appreciate your insights and valuable summations.... The fact that I can elicit such emotion and feeling makes ME feel special and that's always so heartwarming and meaningful to me, because it has happened so infrequently in my "IRL" as of late... mostly due to the social distancing that COVID-19 required.... hopefully that will change, soon...  
;)  

All my warmest regards and truest gratitude,
🌹 -💙
Susan

Wow what a vision!


Silence
is peppered
with sounds
of torrential rain

I love love love this poem thanks for sharing beautifulblue ♥️♥️♥️🤗🤗🤗😘
Loves you sis
Aways ♥️
Jackie

I
loooooooooooooooove
yoooooooooooooooou
too!!!
Miss you like crazy and I hope you are doing well, my lovely friend 🙏🏻

I'm sooo happy and glad you liked this poem!
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Much love,
🌹 - BlueBoo
xoxo
xoxo

A perfect storm perfectly written:) B as always.

Thanks for reading and leaving your thoughts, Grace. I wholly appreciate it and I just adore seeing you 🦋
🌹 - B

Jealous!
Waiting for monsoon rains to begin. Over 100 days without a drop here
Wonderful poem.  I love the sensuality.
-KP

Ohhh to trade locations for a few days!! We live in polar opposites, methinks. ;)... I would love to explore that dry heat vs humidity that's always near 100%.... The grass is always greener, I suppose!... 😁.. I've only ever driven through the southwest, never have I spent time to experience it first hand.....

Glad you enjoyed, reading, KP
Means a lot
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xo
B

If you only knew blue... I think you've inspired a piece in return. Its good to be back.

Awww, that's the best compliment! ... can't wait to read.....
Thank you, Jenny
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xo
B

Nice immediacy ... I love that you captured it real time ... the best ... I love flash poetry ...

Thank you, LilD. I appreciate those kind words and the generous list add....🙏🏻... it means a lot to me.





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B

Wonderful poem.

Thanks for reading, Leo. I appreciate you and that kindness.. - 🌹





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B

A thunderstorm of a poem . xx

Written in the moment... it sure was.... thank you, thank, thank you.... for everything.

You're very kind - 💙
xo
B

I felt the clap of thunder and those windows rattling like a banshee whose maddening wail is beyond human reason. This is a magnificent poem that took me right into the heart of the storm. And it was most exhilarating.

Xo
John

I love the word exhilarating!! My breath quickens that you were so moved and drawn in...


I love rain /thunderstorms!

Glad I could share :)
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xoxo
Susan

It's quite lovely, it really captures the sound and experience while listening and watching from inside.
Superb write Blue.

Awww.... shucks... (blushes).... lol...

You are so very kind, W.
I am so so humbled and appreciative of all the time you take to read my poetry... it's very meaningful to me. I value your opinions, thoughts and perspectives to the upmost degree.

All my heartfelt thanks for the RL adds and all your terrific insightfulness.

A true pleasure, my friend 🙏🏻
🌹 - B

It's just dimply amazing how you are able wrap your mind around
a subject
and bring it to life...

I'm so here for it

Glad you pulled up a chair, Naaj

Thank you for sharing in my little stream of consciousness spill as the storm took place.....I remember it well. It warms me, to read your kind words...-🙏🏻

It's always a treat and such a lovely pleasure to have you visit ✨
🌹 💙
B