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thoughtless
my lover said to
me,
"you had better
think this through
before I walk out!"
I thought things over
carefully and
considerably
until I didn't give
it another
thought,
and went to bed
alone.
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Re. thoughtless
19th Jun 2021 2:18am
Sometimes being alone for the right reasons is totally necessary.
Real life write, bk.
🌹-💙
xo
B
Real life write, bk.
🌹-💙
xo
B
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Re: Re. thoughtless
19th Jun 2021 3:11am
Oh those moments in our life when we dodge a bullet ( or two).
Many thanks, Blue ( hope you don't have to dodge too many of those bullets).
hugs/ luv's
buddhakitty m
Many thanks, Blue ( hope you don't have to dodge too many of those bullets).
hugs/ luv's
buddhakitty m
Re: Re. thoughtless
19th Jun 2021 7:46am
Re. thoughtless
19th Jun 2021 5:39am
Dear BK,
And that was the best nights sleep ever had! Why does it always feel like I’m dodging bullets and land mines? Your fabulous insights and witticisms in your poetry keep me going! H🌷
And that was the best nights sleep ever had! Why does it always feel like I’m dodging bullets and land mines? Your fabulous insights and witticisms in your poetry keep me going! H🌷
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Re: Re. thoughtless
19th Jun 2021 7:50am
The world is full of dirty rotten snipers and landmines, Honoria. It's a sad game we have to play. As long as we have something someone wants we have to keep bobbing and weaving.
love,
buddhakitty.
love,
buddhakitty.
Re. thoughtless
19th Jun 2021 3:37pm
Exactly. If they can't accept you for who you are, let them leave. You're better off alone.
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Re. thoughtless
19th Jun 2021 5:32pm
A plus, my dear Ahvanti. That's the issues with this whole sad world right now...peoples inability to accept someone for who they are.
luv's/hugs
buddhakitty.
luv's/hugs
buddhakitty.
Re. thoughtless
22nd Jun 2021 3:40am
YEs... I totally agree. Better off alone.
Takes strength and fortitude...
Keep breaking on through.
Takes strength and fortitude...
Keep breaking on through.
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Re: Re. thoughtless
Thank you, Cipher. Been through crap fest of relationships before. I can see the red flags from a mile away.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
Re. thoughtless
26th Jun 2021 9:37pm
Your words ev move & stir sure..in juz few words.wisdom & artistic flair shines as ev adored one..write on .
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Re: Re. thoughtless
26th Jun 2021 10:00pm
Re. thoughtless
21st Jul 2021 6:59pm
The challenge is that thinking it through sometimes doesn't give us the answer we're specifically want or are looking for.
Interesting write bk.
Interesting write bk.
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Re: Re. thoughtless
22nd Jul 2021 1:44am
Lucky for me that in this case it was the correct response...lol.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
hugs,
buddhakitty.