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Pain Landscapes
You're a phenomenal gift
All your turbulent desires
Pain landscapes
Ribbons that provide salvation
When conventional invades
I look to you
You don't know how to disappoint
All your turbulent desires
Pain landscapes
Ribbons that provide salvation
When conventional invades
I look to you
You don't know how to disappoint
Published 9th Jun 2021
Author's Note
I look to her for salvation and find it...
Gouache Painting by Poetspeak
Gouache Painting by Poetspeak
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9th Jun 2021 9:16pm
This moves me on so many levels ... frightening actually ... great art/poetry pairing ...
9th Jun 2021 9:29pm
Somehow I thought I would see you here...
Those who dare to admit their needs are my kind of people
Appreciate your comment Lil
RL too
Thx
Those who dare to admit their needs are my kind of people
Appreciate your comment Lil
RL too
Thx
Anonymous
- Edited 29th Jan 2022 7:45am
9th Jun 2021 9:19pm
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9th Jun 2021 9:30pm
9th Jun 2021 9:41pm
That painting reminds me of a beautiful sunset reflecting in the water you see on one of those tropical beaches! And the ripples head right for you!
Lovely image and accompaying words; they truly complement each other!
LIKE.
Lovely image and accompaying words; they truly complement each other!
LIKE.
9th Jun 2021 9:48pm
This was one of those rare times when I wrote the poem first and then looked through my recent paintings to accompany it.
I always appreciate your comments as you come at them with both an artist and literary sphere...
Thank you A
I always appreciate your comments as you come at them with both an artist and literary sphere...
Thank you A
10th Jun 2021 3:31am
10th Jun 2021 3:58am
Anonymous
9th Jun 2021 9:52pm
Your artwork looks like Asperitus Clouds...tumultuous, yet so dazzling. Great piece, my friend.
9th Jun 2021 10:06pm
I really like your description of my painting....
Thank you for always letting me know !!
Thank you for always letting me know !!
Anonymous
- Edited 9th Apr 2022 5:45am
9th Jun 2021 9:54pm
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9th Jun 2021 10:07pm
10th Jun 2021 3:02am
What an awesome pairing of words and art this is.... I may not seek pain, but I sure do understand turbulence, and this makes me want to grit my teeth right through it. Excellent. ❤✔
10th Jun 2021 3:57am
10th Jun 2021 5:22pm
This was beautiful and inspiring!
Thank you PS for share such fantastic art, on canvas and in print.
--B
Thank you PS for share such fantastic art, on canvas and in print.
--B
10th Jun 2021 5:42pm
It's always a pleasure B
Love your comment, you always get it ....
The art is in full bloom and will keep on coming
Thank you !
Love your comment, you always get it ....
The art is in full bloom and will keep on coming
Thank you !
10th Jun 2021 6:06pm
It is never ending! History shows that many have tried to stomp it out, but it is the embodiment of who and what we are. It's not going anywhere.
--B
--B
10th Jun 2021 6:13pm
You're so right about that
Every time I try to deny it and walk away, it just comes back stronger and with more need.
No more walking, it stays !
Great minds ..
Every time I try to deny it and walk away, it just comes back stronger and with more need.
No more walking, it stays !
Great minds ..
16th Jul 2021 5:15pm
I always enjoy how you're able to say so much with brevity and depth, and then add colors to bring the overall sensation it's becomes tangible.
BIG LIKE.
BIG LIKE.
16th Jul 2021 5:17pm
