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You failed me
I don't know what I want.
I thought that I wanted you, but you proved what I had hoped wasn't true.
I was in the middle of getting help and you said that we were through.
I thought that I wanted you, but you proved what I had hoped wasn't true.
I was in the middle of getting help and you said that we were through.
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Re. You failed me
28th May 2021 11:08pm
Re: Re. You failed me
28th May 2021 11:19pm
Thank you. I'm trying to stand my ground and make sure he knows I'll no longer be someone he can push around!
Re. You failed me
28th May 2021 11:22pm
Can you do without him if the worst comes to the worst? That's what you've got to ask yourself, I think.
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Re. You failed me
28th May 2021 11:59pm
Re: Re. You failed me
29th May 2021 1:06am
Aww haha. I was dealing with mental struggles as I've expressed in many of my poems. I was in the mental health department of the hospital this last week because I tried to end it. He called me on the second day and broke up with me.
Sorry just needed to get it out.
Sorry just needed to get it out.
Re: Re. You failed me
You're unbreakable. Hang onto that thought. Ok, it's raining on you a lot at the moment but the rain doesn't last forever. Yeah, the rain eventually returns again one day but none of us are happy or sad all of the time. Maybe your boyfriend's frightened of the situation you're currently in, as equally, I'm sure you are too & perhaps he doesn't know how to deal with it, hence his lack of support?
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29th May 2021 4:24am
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Re. You failed me
29th May 2021 4:18am
Dear M,
I’m sorry to hear this. Your poems are so strong I can’t help but think your inner self is just as strong and at some point the inner and outer you will come to the same conclusion that you are worthy and strong and bring joy to yourself and others. This poem is true for many of us it’s raw and tender because of its pain. H🌷
I’m sorry to hear this. Your poems are so strong I can’t help but think your inner self is just as strong and at some point the inner and outer you will come to the same conclusion that you are worthy and strong and bring joy to yourself and others. This poem is true for many of us it’s raw and tender because of its pain. H🌷
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Re. You failed me
29th May 2021 11:54pm
So sorry to hear about your struggles and then the break-up. I hope that you feel better soon and you find someone that truly appreciates how beautiful you are. Hugs...
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Re. You failed me
18th Jun 2021 7:12am
Good girl don't let him or any guy push you around TrueLover a TrueLover is hard to find . xx
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Re: Re. You failed me
18th Jun 2021 3:44pm
Aww wow! Thank you. I chose the name TrueLover because I’m a genuine person and a TrueLover! Thank you for reminding me about that!