The envy of wonder (+spoken word)

Dear Blue,

I love the energy in this write, just on the cusp of controlled frenzy. But how is it achieved “ a sparkling tease
of  
illuminated
inquiries
 
to all that
needs  
discovering ” wishing on the first star didn’t help. I feel like all my sizzle has fizzed out. Then I get pumped up by your lovely poems. Alas, if only that special someone would truly see the fire inside but too scared to erupt. I thought this was beautiful reading it. Then I listened and it went gorgeous. H🌷

Thank you, H
I've been a big ball of self doubt recently and your lovely and always supportive encouragement means the world. I don't take it for granted and I am so very grateful that I could play a small part in bringing some beauty into your day. Thank you for all you do, the list add and each thoughtfulness shown.  
All my warmest regards,  
🌹-💙
xo
B

A very beautiful write and poeting
.....
Love it all round the short bursts of sentences keep it intriguing all the way....

POft,  
I am so appreciative of your visit and the opportunity to read your thoughts. It's so valuable in allowing growth from the another's understanding
Thank you and I am extremely happy you enjoyed.  
Much love,
🌹-💙  
B

I like the usage of the stars as both a navigational method, as well as a method of communication.  As you have pointed out previously, we are comprised of the stars; that is something we as humans share, a common thread, a thread that interconnects us, both to one another and to the stars.  Though perhaps not readily contemplated by many, there is that channel available, the channel of the stars, the stars as a device of communication, both interpersonal communication and inter cosmic communication.  Oh...  The wonders that may be performed.  I'm talking about a love that exists in the starry eyes and the starry minds that is a reflection of and reflected by...  That great-great paradise in the sky.  As all the stars are interconnected, as we are interconnected.  

A very thought provoking write.

I listened to the audio twice and I feel there is an organic beauty contained in the recording and I am grateful that you have shared this...  Totally cool.

Your comments are unbelievably uplifting and I'm filled with warmth and encouragement from your words. It means so much to that you derived enjoyment in it enough to listen twice. Your comments are so very resounding and thoughtful. I thank you so much for taking the time that you have, Cipher..... Sincerely.  
It's so lovely to see you 🦋  
I appreciate the list add and your creative loveliness
🌹-💙  
xo
B

I adore voluptuous and arousing... Ty for those kind words and the list add, Tim. I am forever questioning myself and my writing and your thoughtful comments boosted my morale today... I'm so grateful!
It's always a pleasure seeing you 🦋
Much love and respect,
🌹-💙
xoxo
B

Solid is something!
Thanks for leaving your thoughts.
I am definitely glad you enjoy reading.
🌹

Thanks so much for reading and leaving your thoughts with me, Stanley. I'm so appreciative for the list add and you taking the time... it means a lot a lot. So happy you enjoyed it.
🌹-B

WOW! An A+++ for my amazing and talented friend. Hugs and peace, oral

Thanks for that kind review, Oral
I humbly thank you and I'm all smiles that you seemed to like it that much!
Don't be a stranger, my dear friend 🙏🏻
🌹-💙
B

Discovery of yourself opens you up to new possibilities.  Keep on writing you strong beautiful sexy woman.

Thanks for the reminder, Francisco! I appreciate it
🌹

I am intrigued and fascinated by the countless interpretations that can be drawn from this
If a hundred, a thousand or a million people read this they'll all have different personal perspectives
Now it makes sense when people say every one of us has their own truth
There will always be his story, her story and their story

I love that subjectivity!! It's one of the reasons that I enjoy poetry and art, in general. It's fluid and always, ALWAYS in the eye of the beholder, what's felt, and experienced. Despite the writer / artist's personal impetus.... it's always within the reader /experiencer what's felt /derived. I really enjoyed this thought provoking and insightful comment. I am so grateful for your visit and taking the time to leave these beautiful thoughts.
I sure hope to see you again, it was my pleasure!
Warm regards,
🌹-B

We clap hands for both the piece and the vocals. There is several members on this site that have mastered that next level with there poetry, and we're not jealous. We're simply amazed by each and every one of you. Freaking beautiful work here lady, super tight

I very much appreciate you, Me. adore your forthright honesty and the ability you have to sum up your experiences reading /listening /understanding the pieces you come across here on DU... I am so grateful for you stopping by (yes, upon my behest! but still, I appreciate it greatly)
.. lol... Sometimes all it takes to elicit a smile after a long shitty day is to read "super tight" in ref to myself.... YESSS!!! It's a great feeling, indeed.
Thanks for the encouraging words and the support.
🌹
-B

Filled with so much feeling... I can relate

Thank you for reading /listening Tim....I really respect your opinion, so your comments and the generous list add mean a lot to me.... 🙏🏻
Much love and my heartfelt gratitude,
🌹-💙
xo
B

🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹

Ty, very kindly.
🌹-💙
B

Go beautiful poetess, again captivating read and a absolute awesome voice
Loved this, the ache, the yearn, the need. Absolutely dreamy
Love and light
Ron x

Thanks for reading and leaving your thoughts.

The pacing and pauses are brilliant. The silence between the words creates more than the words themselves. You are a sorceress. I could become trapped in the emptiness you create within the poem.

Ty for reading /listening. I hope you enjoyed the poem AND the silences, too.... lol.... just sayin'...
😉... I appreciate the list add and all your kindness.

Warmest regards,
🌹-B

Beautiful poetry along with a beautiful voice!

(blushes)
🌹 - Thank you for the generous list add and your very thoughtful and kind remarks. I'm all smiles that you found pleasure reading /listening.
B-💙

Absolutely beautiful read of your beautiful arrangement of words.  I picture you with your bag and your wand, just casting these beautiful verses on paper... wicked write!!!

Hahaha... I love how you pictured me! 🧙🏻‍♀️ .... still giggling... thanks for that Lj... made my day.
I'm humbly thankful for your lovely sentiments.
🌹-💙
Always a pleasure, indeed.
-B

Damn Blue, that read definitely got my ear's attention.  I'm feeling cosmic, I like this.

I totally dig this response, Remy! Yesss!!!
Thank you for reading /listening and escaping into to the cosmos with me for a bit... I appreciate your thoughtful comments, the list add and your visits, in general....

It's always so lovely to see you 🦋
🌹-💙
xo
B

Dearest, Lady Blue. I really enjoy this piece. Your vocal rendering is beautiful and your music selection spot-on.  Your "Damn' made me chuckle but also brought some serious tingles.  Now this passage is a serious sensual pleasure,
"can you feel the pull  
every time  
your mind flashes  
 
that certain draw  
exquisite in it's ache  "
Every so often I get warm feelings, intuitive goose bumps that feel as if someone is trying to communicate with me. That beautiful "draw" you so wonderfully describe.
Bravissima mon jolie amie🌹🌹🐻💞🐰

Ohh my BB... You certainly have a distinct way of words, when you comment. It's some of my favorite time of day.... hoping that I get to read your inspired, heartfelt, honest summation. I take amazing pleasure and motivation from every single word you leave me. I think it's gotten to the point where I feel like I haven't lived up to my own standards, unless I can elicit a tingle of some fashion from you... lol... (I'm pretty serious!) You make me proud of myself and I can't tell you how much that means to me, dearest BB.... because it's priceless....
All my thanks for the incredible generosity you show me and for everything you've said here.
Much love and endless respect
🌹-💙 - 🐻 - 🐰 - 🌹  
xoxo
S

You write very well.  Light and the written word can both travel fast and over great distances.  Hopefully, we all get the time to discover all the things worth discovering.

Much thanks for your visit and taking the time to leave your thoughts, my friend. I definitely agree with your sentiments of discovery and I return to you, thoughts of well wishes and hopeful vibes
✨ 💫 ✨
It's lovely to meet you! 🦋
and I hope to hear from you again.
Warm regards,
🌹 - B

Sets a mood and sets one to thinking. Sensual. Sensational.
Thank you.
❣️🙏

Mmmm.... I kind of adore the notion of setting your mind to sensual thoughts.....

.... pondering that deeply... *wink

Thank you for reading /listening, and the generous list add KP. Your opinions affect /infect me with positivity and a desire to continue to stay motivated.... it's like refueling my submissive heart with inspirational energy and pride when I know you've enjoyed my little offering... sending quivers.
Ohhh, the best kind!
🙏🏻 - 😇
-B

I read this word for word while your sensual voice spoke your passion. And the cosmos twinkled like a cluster of orgasmic love as I swam through your voice and found the source of all energy and faith the bliss that turns corporeal into magic. That was all I needed to know.

Xo
John

I can picture you reading and listening along!!!
Lol... Thanks so much for your utterly heart stopping comments - 🙏🏻-...I am smiles from ear to ear, that, that was your reaction. I am so happy that you enjoyed it, John.
Thank you, kind sir...
.... for everything.
🌹-💙
xo
-Susan

Hey Blue…….BRAVO! Holy Purple! Outstanding ink……..tipping my pen to you in respect……everything about this is brilliant…….I admire those who can do spoken word……you show your talent splendidly…….RL for me……..purple luv & hugs xo :)

Hey there flowergirl!  
It's such a pleasure to see you 🦋!! I am over the moon, after reading your lovely comments... I humbly thank you for such wonderfully kind words and your generous list add... All smiles that you enjoyed it enough for that true honour... Returned purple hugs and luv!! 💜

You're always welcomed here.... please don't be a stranger ;)
Warmest regards  
🌹-B  
xo

That velvet voice the envy of wonder xx

Purrrrr ;) .... I'm glad you enjoyed listening! I humbly thank you for the visit and you leaving your thoughts for me....  
Nice to meet you, tonight, Vatsyayana.  

It's a pleasure ✨  
🌹  
-B

Oh, this renowned twinkling of starts. How much I have observed their distant greeting. It is a very thought provoking way to describe it, that you used.

Your insightful comments are so uplifting and appreciated, Boyana. It's a lovely feeling to know that you've read /listened and derived a connection or the beginnings of thoughts to ponder. I am so grateful for your visit, the list add and your ability to encourage from your kindness.
It's always such a pleasure to see you 🦋

🌹-💙
xo
B

I was just about to type that you had to delete it! hahaha 😂

Thanks for the compliment, WF
You're awesome and I love that you like this enough to nominate it.
Much love and respect your way ✨ 💫 ✨
🌹 - 💙
B

"all those whispered wants" oh how many would be lovers yearning and aching for each other have spent many a night wishing and dreaming.

Wonderful work.

I am so grateful for your thoughtful comments and that you enjoyed those lines particularly... You're so nice and considerate, reading and following up, Walter... I am so so grateful for this!

All my warmest regards, my lovely friend
🌹 - B

Your voice is magic. Your words are mesmerising. Your thoughts are inviting.  Your composition is just the two lovers blended in the starry night and wish it never ends. Caress and love

KS

Awww... Your kindness echoes such loveliness throughout the night, dear soul. I'm humbly thankful and truly appreciative!


I love knowing that you were affected like you described, while listening. It's extremely heart warming and motivational.

Be well, my new friend 🙏🏻
🌹-B

WOW. This was deep and I enjoyed the spoken word & visual immensely. Your amazing. Passionate, erotic, hot and just all out sensual. Plus your voice is really sexy!!!
10 out of 10

daaaayum.... 10 out of 10 he says!!! Woo-hoo!

Thanks for listening to my spoken word and for adding some much needed joy to my day today. Glad you enjoyed and could feel my love of poetry and passion, too

Much love and many regards,
🌹B