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Revivify
To be of novel skin,
raw and newly bare
O' delicate
this fledgling flesh
wanton in want to beckon
for handed touch
A newborn breath
As an exodus
of a haunted past
slowly reconciles itself
into a deliberate
forceful
driving
need
of a body's freedom
liberating a psyche's prolonged turmoil
while sparking an internal blaze
plumes abound and raging
igniting a heart's camouflaged desire
and
with each
maddening
pulse
incessant there
is that drum, beating
Author's Note
©Blu2021
My #Nopoo from a few days ago, cleaned up a bit ... just ideas and musings of rekindling one's mojo... ;)
My #Nopoo from a few days ago, cleaned up a bit ... just ideas and musings of rekindling one's mojo... ;)
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Re. Revivify
23rd May 2021 7:57pm
Re: Re. Revivify
23rd May 2021 9:22pm
Thanks, Ron. I am grateful for your thoughtful comments the list add and all your kindness. So happy to see you 🦋 on my page.
🌹-💙
Much love from across the pond ✨
xoxo
B
🌹-💙
Much love from across the pond ✨
xoxo
B
Re. Revivify
23rd May 2021 8:02pm
Dearest, Lady Blue
This piece ignited in me wonderful feelings of passion. My drum, that is incessantly beating, axcelerated 10 fold. This passage is so beautiful and expresses yearning so well,
"fledgling flesh
wanton in want to beckon
for handed touch"
And you turned up the sensual flame with this vibrant gem,
" a haunted past
slowly reconciles itself
into a deliberate
forceful
driving
need"
Bravissima, my Goddess BB🙏🌹❤
This piece ignited in me wonderful feelings of passion. My drum, that is incessantly beating, axcelerated 10 fold. This passage is so beautiful and expresses yearning so well,
"fledgling flesh
wanton in want to beckon
for handed touch"
And you turned up the sensual flame with this vibrant gem,
" a haunted past
slowly reconciles itself
into a deliberate
forceful
driving
need"
Bravissima, my Goddess BB🙏🌹❤
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Re: Re. Revivify
23rd May 2021 9:33pm
Ohh BB!!! Per usual, your comments are so special and uplifting. You've made my day today with your appreciation. I'm all smiles that you enjoyed those lines and that I could ignite passions within. Thank you for stopping by, the list add and all the lovely kind words of encouragement and kingship in sensuality.
Much love and respect,
🌹-💙
🐻✨ 🐇
xo
B
Much love and respect,
🌹-💙
🐻✨ 🐇
xo
B
Re. Revivify
23rd May 2021 8:53pm
I am flooded with memories of a Simon and Garfunkel song, “Dangling Conversation”. Love the lines, “ of a body's freedom
liberating a psyche's prolonged turmoil ”
liberating a psyche's prolonged turmoil ”
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Re: Re. Revivify
23rd May 2021 9:36pm
Thanks for stopping by JM. I truly enjoy it when I am lucky enough to inspire a particular thought or emotional experience via a song. I'm not heartened that you enjoyed reading and those lines, in particular.
It's always a pleasure to see you 🦋
🌹-💙
B
It's always a pleasure to see you 🦋
🌹-💙
B
Re. Revivify
23rd May 2021 10:15pm
Simply
Makes you feel breathless
Reading such a smoldering write
Sensual embers hurning
Makes you feel breathless
Reading such a smoldering write
Sensual embers hurning
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Re: Re. Revivify
24th May 2021 00:50am
Ohhh... some steamy remarks, my lovely friend!!
I'm so appreciative of your visit, the list add and all your poetic magic that you leave via comments, C
Thank youuuuuuu!!
🌹-💙
xo
I'm so appreciative of your visit, the list add and all your poetic magic that you leave via comments, C
Thank youuuuuuu!!
🌹-💙
xo
Re. Revivify
You are making my heart beat with this poem and picture. Keep on writing you strong beautiful sexy woman.
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24th May 2021 4:30pm
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Re: Re. Revivify
24th May 2021 4:39pm
Yours are the amazing writes but I very much appreciate your RL add and nice comment.
Thank you.
🌹
Thank you.
🌹
Re: Re. Revivify
24th May 2021 4:30pm
Re. Revivify
Another well written piece. You are a professional at this style of poetry. Also, loved the image for your poem.
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Re: Re. Revivify
24th May 2021 3:56pm
Hey there William, nice seeing you 🦋 I appreciate you taking the time to stop by and leave your thoughts. Glad you enjoyed it and the visual...
Always a pleasure and ✨ 💫 ✨
much love your way,
🌹-💙
xo
B
Always a pleasure and ✨ 💫 ✨
much love your way,
🌹-💙
xo
B
Re: Re. Revivify
25th May 2021 00:19am
Re. Revivify
25th May 2021 3:30pm
Oh B ... love this ... there is an ebb and flow with the play in short lines and longer stanzas ... like a ragged breath ... fits the subject perfect ... vivid ... dotted with ripe words ... ripening in the sun ... great read for my morning coffee ...
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Re: Re. Revivify
27th May 2021 4:20am
My sly little grin is wide after reading this, LilD!!
You totally understood what I was trying to do, in accentuating those words via the formatting...
I adore your immediate ability to see me and my intentions... thanks for that... it's heart warming, indeed. I am so grateful for you, the generous list add and all your loveliness, dear poetess 🙏🏻
🌹 - 💙
xo
B
You totally understood what I was trying to do, in accentuating those words via the formatting...
I adore your immediate ability to see me and my intentions... thanks for that... it's heart warming, indeed. I am so grateful for you, the generous list add and all your loveliness, dear poetess 🙏🏻
🌹 - 💙
xo
B
Re. Revivify
26th May 2021 4:01am
I cherish the words of an erotic poet who knows the language of desire and how to make my drumbeat through her words. There is a magic in sensual writing that envelopes me from a lyricist of your prowess. I felt your cunning deep down where the sun doesn't shine.
Xo
John
Xo
John
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Re: Re. Revivify
27th May 2021 4:24am
I love love LOVE your comments here, John... So amazingly thoughtful and very inspiring, indeed. I giggled reading that last point of feeling it deep into down.... just so perfect, as that's the hope!!
Thank you for the generous list add and you taking the time to leave your thoughts on all these poems of mine... it's truly appreciated and not ever do I take it lightly.
Warmest regards,
🌹-Susan
Thank you for the generous list add and you taking the time to leave your thoughts on all these poems of mine... it's truly appreciated and not ever do I take it lightly.
Warmest regards,
🌹-Susan
Re. Revivify
5th Jun 2021 5:35pm
Well, Susan 🥂
Your title drew me in, your scintillatingly vivacious picture captivated and vividly woke my interest, but it was the consummately warming skill of your words that stirred and vivified my manly senses ~ revivifying and encouraging at every new word and line, verse and luring caress … um*
It's been a very lonnng time since I've vicariously felt such pleasure from a well-struck piece; it's almost as though … well, let's say you've a lovely way of making metaphors sigh 'n whisper jusssst right! ; )
To paraphrase:
"O' delicate
this fledgling flesh
wantonly beckoning
with each
maddening, incessant pulse
is 'that' drum, beating" … ohhh, so delicately put*
In estimating the timbre of my review, one could be quite correct were they to assume you've put me in a palpably amorous mood. ; q
*Wonderful Free Versing, Dear Poetess, with most blissfully felt touches.
Thank you, ever-so warmly and sincerely! ⁓ Richard 🍃
Your title drew me in, your scintillatingly vivacious picture captivated and vividly woke my interest, but it was the consummately warming skill of your words that stirred and vivified my manly senses ~ revivifying and encouraging at every new word and line, verse and luring caress … um*
It's been a very lonnng time since I've vicariously felt such pleasure from a well-struck piece; it's almost as though … well, let's say you've a lovely way of making metaphors sigh 'n whisper jusssst right! ; )
To paraphrase:
"O' delicate
this fledgling flesh
wantonly beckoning
with each
maddening, incessant pulse
is 'that' drum, beating" … ohhh, so delicately put*
In estimating the timbre of my review, one could be quite correct were they to assume you've put me in a palpably amorous mood. ; q
*Wonderful Free Versing, Dear Poetess, with most blissfully felt touches.
Thank you, ever-so warmly and sincerely! ⁓ Richard 🍃
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Re: Re. Revivify
6th Jun 2021 2:06pm
My lovely bard,
Your extremely kind thoughtfulness has me filled with such warmth and appreciation. What a wonderful admission, that I was able to rouse from slumber a feeling of such pleasure and delight within you. I am all smiles that you have felt my words, like you have and I hope that I can continue to entice and allure similarly, going forward.
I appreciate you and all the loveliness you've shown me. - 🙏🏻
Thank you, my new friend.
My adoration is utterly spurred as you've certainly have had an affect on me as well!
Until the next time,
🌹-💙
-Susan
Your extremely kind thoughtfulness has me filled with such warmth and appreciation. What a wonderful admission, that I was able to rouse from slumber a feeling of such pleasure and delight within you. I am all smiles that you have felt my words, like you have and I hope that I can continue to entice and allure similarly, going forward.
I appreciate you and all the loveliness you've shown me. - 🙏🏻
Thank you, my new friend.
My adoration is utterly spurred as you've certainly have had an affect on me as well!
Until the next time,
🌹-💙
-Susan
Re: Re. Revivify
6th Jun 2021 6:01pm
Re. Revivify
6th Jun 2021 7:52am
Re: Re. Revivify
Ohh my.... that's very nice of you to say, J... I do so enjoy getting the blood pumping!! Thank you for reading, the generous list add and leaving your thoughts with me... I am so grateful for the opportunity to hear your feedback :)
It's always such a pleasure ✨
🌹-B
It's always such a pleasure ✨
🌹-B
Re. Revivify
10th Jul 2021 6:42am
You gotta add some warnings "may make your device overheat or blush when reading this".
"this fledgling flesh
wanton in want to beckon
for handed touch" eloquent and elegant and so erotic.
Well done.
"this fledgling flesh
wanton in want to beckon
for handed touch" eloquent and elegant and so erotic.
Well done.
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Re: Re. Revivify
10th Jul 2021 10:31pm
lol... Sometimes I gotta bring a little heat 🔥.... my Cheshire Cat smile, beams... thank you for reading and your awesome response... I'm delighted to see...
🌹
xo
🌹
xo