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isolation amidst an aftermath.
Twisted, is this web
where fear becomes of comfort
and faith masquerades in solid
Unnoticed with eyes sewn shut
as avoidance hugs it's arms
enshrouding my shriveled husk
with embarrassing procrastination
A better person
hears "for shame" ringing
while naked and unafraid
Where 'shut in by force'
morphs into a very willing imprisonment
Yet I, just oblivious bask
in the complacency
of my delusional own doing
I pile on top of metaphorical pile
the security of aloneness, routine—
birthing an emotional hoarder
where locked in safety
becomes silent acceptance
while I...
quietly slip through the cracks
Author's Note
inspired by Zazzles' poem TBBT.
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/419699-tbbt/
I appreciate the impetus, Jackie. 🐚-💙 and the kinship of knowing that I'm not alone in this feeling. I emphasized and was truly impacted by this piece today. Ty again, for sharing.
*also, in tribute to my episodic binge-watching... I threw in loose references to Naked and Afraid (no judgements!) / Games of Thrones references, cuz I watched/re-watched each, throughout this past year... lol.. 📺
~I'm slowly reminding myself of who and what I was, pre-pandemic. Getting there... ~
©Blu2021
pic:via Pinterest, doctored up.
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/419699-tbbt/
I appreciate the impetus, Jackie. 🐚-💙 and the kinship of knowing that I'm not alone in this feeling. I emphasized and was truly impacted by this piece today. Ty again, for sharing.
*also, in tribute to my episodic binge-watching... I threw in loose references to Naked and Afraid (no judgements!) / Games of Thrones references, cuz I watched/re-watched each, throughout this past year... lol.. 📺
~I'm slowly reminding myself of who and what I was, pre-pandemic. Getting there... ~
©Blu2021
pic:via Pinterest, doctored up.
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Re. isolation amidst an aftermath.
19th May 2021 5:32pm
Re: Re. isolation amidst an aftermath.
19th May 2021 5:38pm
Re. isolation amidst an aftermath.
19th May 2021 7:00pm
Lately
and quite relatable
also read Zazzles' spill and Your spill is not quite the same theme as Hers but i can see how it is mildly relatable
and quite relatable
also read Zazzles' spill and Your spill is not quite the same theme as Hers but i can see how it is mildly relatable
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Re: Re. isolation amidst an aftermath.
19th May 2021 7:11pm
Agreed... hers jump-started my inspiration....Which I truly adore and is rare but always such a pleasure. IMO, that's what the best art does. ;)
Ty so very much for taking the time to leave your thoughts, T. I really appreciate it. I'm all smiles that you could find something relatable.
I hope you're hanging in there, sending my most pleasant thoughts of peace and healing your way... ✨ 💫 ✨
Much love and respect,
🌹-💙
B
Ty so very much for taking the time to leave your thoughts, T. I really appreciate it. I'm all smiles that you could find something relatable.
I hope you're hanging in there, sending my most pleasant thoughts of peace and healing your way... ✨ 💫 ✨
Much love and respect,
🌹-💙
B
Re. isolation amidst an aftermath.
19th May 2021 8:56pm
Nicely poeted ... I love when a poem prompts a poem ... like a poetic link ... chain of artistry ... one of things I love about being here ... this sort of thing never happens in my "real" life ... engaging write ... smooth flow ... pleasing structure that sustains the cadence ...
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Re: Re. isolation amidst an aftermath.
Thanks, LilD... I completely understand that 'chain of artistry' (terrific description) feeling.... it's soul satisfying 🙏🏻....Your comments mean a lot to me and the generous list add is never taken lightly... I needed a pick me up today and your feedback helped me out, there. It's the little things, sometimes... Ty, dear poetess :)
Much love and respect,
🌹-💙
B
Much love and respect,
🌹-💙
B
Re. isolation amidst an aftermath.
19th May 2021 8:58pm
Re: Re. isolation amidst an aftermath.
I appreciate you stopping by, Grace.
Ty so much for sharing your thoughts...
I always look forward to seeing you 🦋
🌹-💙
Ty so much for sharing your thoughts...
I always look forward to seeing you 🦋
🌹-💙
Re. isolation amidst an aftermath.
19th May 2021 9:09pm
"Yet I, just oblivious bask
in the complacency
of my delusional own doing
I pile on top of metaphorical pile
the security of aloneness, routine—
birthing an emotional hoarder
where locked in safety
becomes silent acceptance..
Nothing to say that has not already been said here..
So honest piece blue..
in the complacency
of my delusional own doing
I pile on top of metaphorical pile
the security of aloneness, routine—
birthing an emotional hoarder
where locked in safety
becomes silent acceptance..
Nothing to say that has not already been said here..
So honest piece blue..
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Re: Re. isolation amidst an aftermath.
Appreciate the nod, Numer.
I'm always so grateful for you stopping by to read and leave your thoughts.... So glad you you could feel the honesty... ✨
Much thanks—🌹
-💙
B
I'm always so grateful for you stopping by to read and leave your thoughts.... So glad you you could feel the honesty... ✨
Much thanks—🌹
-💙
B
Re. isolation amidst an aftermath.
19th May 2021 9:33pm
The perfect pandemic reflection poem. Not only our society but also our psyche changed with binge TV watching and inward focus. It is so easy to slip through this psychic crack. Love Game of Thrones! They dared to go where TV hadn’t gone before. But your poem is a deeply contemplative look at where this past year took you. Your use of language and metaphor dazzle me and make me aspire to reach higher.
Xo
John
Xo
John
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Re: Re. isolation amidst an aftermath.
19th May 2021 11:25pm
There's very few series that I would watch in their completion for a second time and Game of Thrones is definitely one of them!! 🐲🐺 👑.. lol
You are so so SO generous, dear poet. I'm beside myself, wanting to convey humility and grace in light of your true kindness left upon my page.
I appreciate everything, John.
Ty Ty Ty - 🙏🏻
🌹-Susan
You are so so SO generous, dear poet. I'm beside myself, wanting to convey humility and grace in light of your true kindness left upon my page.
I appreciate everything, John.
Ty Ty Ty - 🙏🏻
🌹-Susan
Re. isolation amidst an aftermath.
Re: Re. isolation amidst an aftermath.
19th May 2021 11:20pm
I hope all is well.... 🤷🏻♀️
Ty for reading and leaving your thoughts
It's appreciated.
🌹-B
Ty for reading and leaving your thoughts
It's appreciated.
🌹-B
Re: Re. isolation amidst an aftermath.
19th May 2021 11:28pm
De nada. All IS well, Ty for asking. Don't judge a candle by the poems it burns [or something]. Peace, love, mirth Richard
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Re: Re. isolation amidst an aftermath.
20th May 2021 2:40am
Re. isolation amidst an aftermath.
20th May 2021 00:18am
We all learn new things while we stayed home because of covid. Keep on writing.
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Re: Re. isolation amidst an aftermath.
20th May 2021 2:40am
Re. isolation amidst an aftermath.
20th May 2021 5:36am
Re: Re. isolation amidst an aftermath.
20th May 2021 6:36am
Re. isolation amidst an aftermath.
20th May 2021 5:41pm
I'm fully vaccinated, so a huuuuuuge virtual hug. And les you think you are alone, you're not. Agent 088 is keeping an eye on you.
You and zazzles need to hang out and push yourselves outdoors. She can be wicked fun! : )
Or is the outdoors scary from all the whistles and catcalls you two hotties would attract? Be well my friend, and maybe a bit less blue so you can be the true "Blue"!
You and zazzles need to hang out and push yourselves outdoors. She can be wicked fun! : )
Or is the outdoors scary from all the whistles and catcalls you two hotties would attract? Be well my friend, and maybe a bit less blue so you can be the true "Blue"!
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Re: Re. isolation amidst an aftermath.
Hey Leo... I'm fully vaxed too, so huuuuuge returned hug 🤗! I was hoping 🙏🏻 agent 088 was still assigned! Whew!! 💦 Such a relief 😌😉
heh heh...
I am not nearly as hermit-like /housebound as I wrote.... lol. I do find now, it's much easier to become complacent, though.... definitely!! Slowly but surely breaking that habit!
Yes, Jackie is wicked fun! I looooove her to pieces.... We two, together would definitely be trouble... heh heh heh 😈 😇
Ty for reading and leaving your wicked awesome comments, my friend 🙏🏻
-Aways a pleasure ✨
🌹-💙
B
heh heh...
I am not nearly as hermit-like /housebound as I wrote.... lol. I do find now, it's much easier to become complacent, though.... definitely!! Slowly but surely breaking that habit!
Yes, Jackie is wicked fun! I looooove her to pieces.... We two, together would definitely be trouble... heh heh heh 😈 😇
Ty for reading and leaving your wicked awesome comments, my friend 🙏🏻
-Aways a pleasure ✨
🌹-💙
B
Re. isolation amidst an aftermath.
9th Jul 2021 2:37am
I always enjoy your astute observations, penned in such a casual and eloquent manner, they become enlightened thoughts that most of us may have missed had we not seen this.
Beautiful work.
Beautiful work.
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