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seeing the dark forest for the trees
today i can see
through potent darkness
feel it's very chemistry evolving
from once,
a blackened realization
to tearing open
each crack
highlighting
each crevice
setting free
a type of amalgamated
cerulean light
that soul beckons
like life
born of
hard fought
conquered pestilence
newly discovered
{or maybe just realized}
this,
pungent force—
so very brilliant
of illumination
in everything
i believe to be majestic.
Author's Note
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today's #Nopoo
today's #Nopoo
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Re. seeing the dark forest for the trees
18th May 2021 00:53am
it is one of those works that
are an easy RL but difficult
to comment ones
job BV.
are an easy RL but difficult
to comment ones
job BV.
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Re: Re. seeing the dark forest for the trees
18th May 2021 1:30am
totally understandable , cf.
I very much appreciate you reading,
the generous list add
... and danke for the kind words. - 🌹
-B
I very much appreciate you reading,
the generous list add
... and danke for the kind words. - 🌹
-B
Re. seeing the dark forest for the trees
18th May 2021 1:19am
Dear BV,
Hmmm as I place myself inside that photo with your words I feel a sense of enlightenment in that all things murky and inexplicable have a precise meaning. Not necessarily one I want but at least the darkness makes sense and I can move forward. I’m now a keeper of the dark secrets and my Cheshire like smile holds those gems and I feel a bit powerful really. I really loved the mystical quality of the picture and the mythical essence of the poem. My coven feels very robust at the moment.🧙🏼♀️💫
Fab write. H🌷
Hmmm as I place myself inside that photo with your words I feel a sense of enlightenment in that all things murky and inexplicable have a precise meaning. Not necessarily one I want but at least the darkness makes sense and I can move forward. I’m now a keeper of the dark secrets and my Cheshire like smile holds those gems and I feel a bit powerful really. I really loved the mystical quality of the picture and the mythical essence of the poem. My coven feels very robust at the moment.🧙🏼♀️💫
Fab write. H🌷
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Re: Re. seeing the dark forest for the trees
Ahhhh. ...Yes, that power multiplies within —affording the robust nature of your coven to be truly potent, indeed....You've tapped a resource, my dear poetess ... heh heh...... Ohh, if only!...
😁 😜 🤭😉
I am basking in your comments, dear H. So very glad you could also see the forest for the trees. Much thanks for the generous list add and all your kindness. It means a lot to me - 💙
So mote it be! *😉
🌲🧹 🧙🏻 🔮 🧙♂️🧙🏻♀️🦉 🌲
-xo
B
😁 😜 🤭😉
I am basking in your comments, dear H. So very glad you could also see the forest for the trees. Much thanks for the generous list add and all your kindness. It means a lot to me - 💙
So mote it be! *😉
🌲🧹 🧙🏻 🔮 🧙♂️🧙🏻♀️🦉 🌲
-xo
B
Re. seeing the dark forest for the trees
18th May 2021 2:58am
Inside the dark forest where we end up is up to us. Keep on writing you strong beautiful sexy woman.
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Re: Re. seeing the dark forest for the trees
18th May 2021 11:27pm
Re. seeing the dark forest for the trees
18th May 2021 6:55am
Nice deepening of what is typically a cliche ... owning it ... making it yours ... making it original ... a rare skill for a poet ... you did it so masterfully ... the short lines build and maintain a cadence ... that keeps the reader/listener engaged ... awesome line breaks ... dappling with ripe plump words ... then the orphan line closing ... brings the speaker back into the forefront of the poem ... great write my dear ...
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Re: Re. seeing the dark forest for the trees
18th May 2021 11:35pm
Thanks for the in depth feedback, LilD.
I am so appreciative 🙏🏻..... Ambiguity is not normally my strong suit... I'm not normally hitting readers over the head with my intentions.... lol... I know this one was a difficult one to pinpoint... or nail down in a definitive way........ having to do with more of a feeling than an actual theme..... and you got that ..... all my gratitude...
Much love and respect,
🌹-💙
xo
B
I am so appreciative 🙏🏻..... Ambiguity is not normally my strong suit... I'm not normally hitting readers over the head with my intentions.... lol... I know this one was a difficult one to pinpoint... or nail down in a definitive way........ having to do with more of a feeling than an actual theme..... and you got that ..... all my gratitude...
Much love and respect,
🌹-💙
xo
B
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Re: Re. seeing the dark forest for the trees
Ohh Rian!
Your comments are just riddled with warmth and supportive light. I am so very heartened and uplifted that you can see and feel the things you do, when reading. It's MY joy, indeed. Thank you so very much for taking the time to convey your thoughts and the generous list add
I feel extremely lucky and deeply grateful.
Much love and returned light
🌹-💙
B
Your comments are just riddled with warmth and supportive light. I am so very heartened and uplifted that you can see and feel the things you do, when reading. It's MY joy, indeed. Thank you so very much for taking the time to convey your thoughts and the generous list add
I feel extremely lucky and deeply grateful.
Much love and returned light
🌹-💙
B
Re. seeing the dark forest for the trees
18th May 2021 7:39am
Such, a beautiful write
The portrayal of nature meeting imagination is wonderful...
In the dark forest, you can see darkness or the beauty of the trees....
I dig this
The portrayal of nature meeting imagination is wonderful...
In the dark forest, you can see darkness or the beauty of the trees....
I dig this
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Re: Re. seeing the dark forest for the trees
19th May 2021 7:05pm
POft,
Thank you for sharing such wonderful comments.. Your thoughts and perspectives are valued so much, allowing me a better understanding of life around me and as well as my own thoughts.
Always a pleasure ✨
🌹-💙
xo
B
Thank you for sharing such wonderful comments.. Your thoughts and perspectives are valued so much, allowing me a better understanding of life around me and as well as my own thoughts.
Always a pleasure ✨
🌹-💙
xo
B
Re. seeing the dark forest for the trees
18th May 2021 8:14am
Moody and dark like the black forest at night. You took me into the heart of what poetry can be when written by a master. Each subtle nuance made me sigh and feel the majestic force of true poetry the kind I live and breathe to read.
Xo
John
Xo
John
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Re: Re. seeing the dark forest for the trees
Thank you so much, John.
Your comments are truly amazing and you humble me, as always become a deer in headlights... lol.. I appreciate you, the generous list add and all your loveliness within these words.... I'm over the moon that you felt my intentions.
In kindness,
🌹-💙
- B
Your comments are truly amazing and you humble me, as always become a deer in headlights... lol.. I appreciate you, the generous list add and all your loveliness within these words.... I'm over the moon that you felt my intentions.
In kindness,
🌹-💙
- B
Re. seeing the dark forest for the trees
18th May 2021 4:57pm
Dearest, Lady Blue
This piece is beautifully composed. The progression from "potent darkness" to "a type of amalgamated cerulean light" is inspirational and demonstrates such a wonderous command of language...and quite a sapiosexual tingle maker.
Bravissima, Goddess BB🌹🐻💞🐰
This piece is beautifully composed. The progression from "potent darkness" to "a type of amalgamated cerulean light" is inspirational and demonstrates such a wonderous command of language...and quite a sapiosexual tingle maker.
Bravissima, Goddess BB🌹🐻💞🐰
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Re: Re. seeing the dark forest for the trees
19th May 2021 7:56pm
One word that evokes the yummiest tingles for us both is sapiosexual.... AND don't we both know it!!
haha 😂 😂... I'm extremely grateful for you and your kind words, BB. Thank you for reading and leaving the best of sentiments. I always appreciate you taking the time to pinpoint, like you do. It's very helpful and it means a great deal to me. Just wanted you to know that never gets overlooked!
I'm so glad you found something that resonated within and spurred feedback.
Always so pleasurable, BB!
🐻🌹🐇
xo
-B
haha 😂 😂... I'm extremely grateful for you and your kind words, BB. Thank you for reading and leaving the best of sentiments. I always appreciate you taking the time to pinpoint, like you do. It's very helpful and it means a great deal to me. Just wanted you to know that never gets overlooked!
I'm so glad you found something that resonated within and spurred feedback.
Always so pleasurable, BB!
🐻🌹🐇
xo
-B
Re: Re. seeing the dark forest for the trees
19th May 2021 8:46pm
Thank you for commenting on my propensity for recapitulating my favorite lines (thought I'd used a coupla sapiosexual words there. Tingles?) It helps to know that you appreciate them. 🌹🙏
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Re. seeing the dark forest for the trees
18th May 2021 5:27pm
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18th May 2021 11:36pm
Re. seeing the dark forest for the trees
18th May 2021 11:48pm
Oh... Such edifying beauty in this write!..
I understand that a human being in a state of meditation generates hundred of thousands of photons, which are thought to participate in the foundational elements of reality.
Truly majestic!
I understand that a human being in a state of meditation generates hundred of thousands of photons, which are thought to participate in the foundational elements of reality.
Truly majestic!
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Re: Re. seeing the dark forest for the trees
I appreciate your insightful comments, Cipher. Your encouraging and helpful remarks have me beaming... I'm sincerely grateful that you've taken the time you have to leave such insightful inspiration
It's a true delight to share in moments of majesty, indeed... ✨ 💫 ✨
Warmest regards,
🌹 - B
It's a true delight to share in moments of majesty, indeed... ✨ 💫 ✨
Warmest regards,
🌹 - B
Re. seeing the dark forest for the trees
7th Jul 2021 6:39pm
I like this perception, seeing beyond what are eyes are capable and feeling the nature of it all.
Wonderful spill.
Wonderful spill.
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Re: Re. seeing the dark forest for the trees
7th Jul 2021 9:21pm
I think I was feeling pleasure and basking within the darkness that was pressing upon, in that moment (can't quite remember.. lol) I appreciate your comments, Walter... I wish I was that deep, but I very much doubt it.... hahaha.... glad you enjoyed it, my friend 🙏🏻 thanks so much!!
🌹 - 💙
B
🌹 - 💙
B