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Immersive
... ...
Inner self
Spirit
No time
Immersive
No space
Soul-stimulating
My mind keeps on creating me?...
... Creating heaven within.
Heights of insight ... touching down ...
... And rolling to a stop
It is good to be home
...
Inner self
Spirit
No time
Immersive
No space
Soul-stimulating
My mind keeps on creating me?...
... Creating heaven within.
Heights of insight ... touching down ...
... And rolling to a stop
It is good to be home
...
Published 19th May 2021
Author's Note
"The Hunter" a 1846 painting by Asher Brown Durand (Hudson River School)
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Anonymous
19th May 2021 1:24am
Oh dude. Bruh. You just keep getting better and better.
19th May 2021 7:17pm
19th May 2021 2:54pm
I was struck by "creating heaven within" immersed in one's own self introspection... to become heaven within is such a pleasurable ideal to try and obtain, Marks.... your last line is 100% pure gold.
Just nails it in poetic perfection.
I agree with Em completely.... better and better.. Indeed!!
🌹
B
Just nails it in poetic perfection.
I agree with Em completely.... better and better.. Indeed!!
🌹
B
19th May 2021 7:17pm
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