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finding a way...home.
I think there's a saying
(or perhaps it's the Mandela effect)
unclear in origin yet still, I believe...
When certain things are lost,
they eventually return
from whence they came
with sheer
interconnectedness
powerful in their amplifying
enough to find a way
from
the
deepest
of
depths
feeling lovingly recaptured
possibilities in reclaiming
of a souls particular charms
excavated from darkened ether
Oh extracting a likened light
gnarled and weary
by such wayward roaming
listening to a honed voice
of echoed knowledge
hearing a uniqueness
within words of dark and light combined
when once,
that, which was lead astray
has now choice returned
to open arms
wrapping entwined minds
into an abyss of unwavering sharing
to be exact
in motive, wants and desires
reflecting
truth
back to
truth
and finding
that found of
a home
sweet home
Author's Note
İBlu2021
...there may not be that saying, exactly.... I now realize AFTER I have written this poem. I may have thought of two sayings and indirectly combined them, which I think I kinda like too, sooo I'm sticking with it....😁... lol.
-thx for reading-
🌹-B
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...there may not be that saying, exactly.... I now realize AFTER I have written this poem. I may have thought of two sayings and indirectly combined them, which I think I kinda like too, sooo I'm sticking with it....😁... lol.
-thx for reading-
🌹-B
x
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Re. finding a way...home.
1st May 2021 5:21am
You find your way home to friends and family. You are my friend. Keep on writing you strong beautiful sexy woman.
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Re: Re. finding a way...home.
1st May 2021 8:01am
You're are correct and yes... likewise you are mine and I appreciate your thoughtful comments, Francisco
Ty
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Ty
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Re. finding a way...home.
1st May 2021 5:33am
It's said a man will always find his destiny even in a path he choose to avoid it....
So everything will eventually find it's way back home....
Nice write
So everything will eventually find it's way back home....
Nice write
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Re: Re. finding a way...home.
1st May 2021 8:00am
Your words are truth sprinkled with a dash of fate or hope... maybe both?!? Either way I adored them and appreciate your visit very much. I am so grateful for your thoughtful insights.
You're always welcomed here, POft🙏🏻
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xo
B
You're always welcomed here, POft🙏🏻
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xo
B
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1st May 2021 5:51am
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Re: Re. finding a way...home.
1st May 2021 6:04am
heh heh heh! 🗡 🩸🪓
😂 I loved the comments... 🤭..... but I'm deeply inappropriate and a darling of dark senses of humor... Mwahahahaha!!! 😈
I appreciate the list add and your thoughtful comments.... looks like you're in the clear from my axe! ..... more than likely, that is .... ha! 😉 😇 👀
I thank you for reading and the lovely visit
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xo
B
😂 I loved the comments... 🤭..... but I'm deeply inappropriate and a darling of dark senses of humor... Mwahahahaha!!! 😈
I appreciate the list add and your thoughtful comments.... looks like you're in the clear from my axe! ..... more than likely, that is .... ha! 😉 😇 👀
I thank you for reading and the lovely visit
🌹
xo
B
Re. finding a way...home.
1st May 2021 6:01am
Ah, your words and this mystical cycle; and yet I can't find my keys. I'll try putting a key chain on the hook and see if they come home. : )
You have a great Friday evening West coast blue.
You have a great Friday evening West coast blue.
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Re: Re. finding a way...home.
1st May 2021 6:16am
haha 😂... ohh Leo!
Keep me posted on their return
and I'll 🤞🏻 for you.
Thank you for reading (hugs)
You have a good one too, my luv
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xo
-B
Keep me posted on their return
and I'll 🤞🏻 for you.
Thank you for reading (hugs)
You have a good one too, my luv
🌹
xo
-B
Re. finding a way...home.
1st May 2021 6:03am
Yes. Finding your way home, and it's not always the house. I love this poem, Blue.🌹
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Re: Re. finding a way...home.
1st May 2021 6:11am
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Re: Re. finding a way...home.
1st May 2021 6:40am
Re: Re. finding a way...home.
1st May 2021 8:03am
btw, I almost teared up at this comment, Ru
I cannot properly convey how much it means.....
*hand on heart, thank you.
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I cannot properly convey how much it means.....
*hand on heart, thank you.
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Re. finding a way...home.
1st May 2021 7:01am
That 6th stanza Blu! The whole thing but.. the 6th stanza
Opened the door and let me in from the rain and the cold, took my raincoat off, hugged me, then give me my favorite blanket freshly washed, with my favorite tv show Futurama, chocolate and soda, and silence, and space. Tomorrow is a new day we can chat in the morning vibe.
Opened the door and let me in from the rain and the cold, took my raincoat off, hugged me, then give me my favorite blanket freshly washed, with my favorite tv show Futurama, chocolate and soda, and silence, and space. Tomorrow is a new day we can chat in the morning vibe.
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Re: Re. finding a way...home.
How I love Bender so....
Well if those aren't the best comments of the fucking month, I don't know what are....
I'm awed and left speechless, Lj.
I didn't think anyone would get this (not 'get' but like this ) and... well... again, speechless...
Ty my lovely lady
for the RL add, your utter thoughtfulness and your supportive nature. You're such a positive force and valued voice within these DU walls.....
I appreciate you, Lj
Much respect and love your way ✨ 💫 ✨
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B
Well if those aren't the best comments of the fucking month, I don't know what are....
I'm awed and left speechless, Lj.
I didn't think anyone would get this (not 'get' but like this ) and... well... again, speechless...
Ty my lovely lady
for the RL add, your utter thoughtfulness and your supportive nature. You're such a positive force and valued voice within these DU walls.....
I appreciate you, Lj
Much respect and love your way ✨ 💫 ✨
🌹
B
Re. finding a way...home.
If only I could find the love note where she explains what not to do while courting just before farewell. It was a kind of user guide to romance. I guess I am doomed to wander the labyrinth of romance without Ariadne's thread. lol
Truly profound work my friend. Loved the intricacies you took me through never once losing your poetic prowess.
Xo
John
Truly profound work my friend. Loved the intricacies you took me through never once losing your poetic prowess.
Xo
John
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Re: Re. finding a way...home.
1st May 2021 2:45pm
Your comments always elicit a smile... a feat before coffee! lol... I love the kindness and supportive nature , John. I appreciate you reading, the list add and the generosity of spirit...
Thank you for taking the time to visit
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xoxo
-S
Thank you for taking the time to visit
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xoxo
-S
Re. finding a way...home.
1st May 2021 8:16am
I believe what's meant to truly meant to be together finds away, even if it's once lost, old friends, lovers, trinkets of the past. They just seem to find a way, a way to get home to their rightful place
Loved the write beautiful girl
Love and light
Ron xxx
Loved the write beautiful girl
Love and light
Ron xxx
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Re: Re. finding a way...home.
1st May 2021 8:22am
You got it... that's what I was trying to articulate... about feelings... and all the variations of love...
Spot on, my dear
I really enjoyed your thoughts and the care you've taken with me. Thank you for the generous list add and the insightfulness.
Much love,
🌹⚔️💙
xoxo
B
Spot on, my dear
I really enjoyed your thoughts and the care you've taken with me. Thank you for the generous list add and the insightfulness.
Much love,
🌹⚔️💙
xoxo
B
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1st May 2021 12:40pm
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Re: Re. finding a way...home.
1st May 2021 2:49pm
Good morning, VM! ☕ or 🍵... :)
I thank you for your visit and taking the time to read and leave your thoughtful comments. I am all red blushes and I humbly appreciate your kind compliment. I am glad you liked what you read..
It's always such a pleasure to see you 🦋
🌹- xo
B
I thank you for your visit and taking the time to read and leave your thoughtful comments. I am all red blushes and I humbly appreciate your kind compliment. I am glad you liked what you read..
It's always such a pleasure to see you 🦋
🌹- xo
B
Re. finding a way...home.
1st May 2021 2:07pm
"Oh extracting a liken light" ... more poetic gold ... so beautiful when whispered ... "listening to a honed voice/or echoed knowledge" ... more nuggets ...
"reflecting/truth/back to truth" ... nice combo of single word lines and line breaks ... the closing ... familiar ... reassuring ... brings the poem home ... pun intended ... wonderful soothing write ...
"reflecting/truth/back to truth" ... nice combo of single word lines and line breaks ... the closing ... familiar ... reassuring ... brings the poem home ... pun intended ... wonderful soothing write ...
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Re: Re. finding a way...home.
1st May 2021 2:54pm
I adore you, LilD and I thank you so very much for this breakdown... I will bask in even the smallest ability I might have to be soothing via my write ...
I deeply appreciate your list add, and making my morning a little brighter with your visit.
Have a lovely Saturday, dear friend 🙏🏻
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xo
B
I deeply appreciate your list add, and making my morning a little brighter with your visit.
Have a lovely Saturday, dear friend 🙏🏻
🌹
xo
B
Re. finding a way...home.
1st May 2021 3:52pm
Re: Re. finding a way...home.
1st May 2021 7:39pm
Thank you so much for reading, leaving your thoughts and the generous list add...
I'm all smiles that you found something you enjoyed within my little offering.
It's truly lovely to see you 🦋
🌹-B
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I'm all smiles that you found something you enjoyed within my little offering.
It's truly lovely to see you 🦋
🌹-B
x
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1st May 2021 8:10pm
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Re: Re. finding a way...home.
2nd May 2021 2:29am
Thank you, Tim. I appreciate you reading and taking the time to leave your thoughts and insights.. It's about having that something special returning to you when you thought that it was perhaps an impossibility.... I like to believe it's possible, yes. Perhaps it's naive... but I do.
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I am so grateful for your visit, the list add and you, taking the time to actually write feedback like you do.
Much appreciated, my dear 🙏🏻
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xo
-B
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I am so grateful for your visit, the list add and you, taking the time to actually write feedback like you do.
Much appreciated, my dear 🙏🏻
🌹
xo
-B
Re. finding a way...home.
2nd May 2021 2:27am
I hope you'll be 'Rollin' Home' one day as Status Quo once sang. And believe me, I know what you mean. Home doesn't even have to mean 'home' for starters. Home is somewhere in your mind. It is more a state of being than an actual physical home. If you can have both then all well & good but to me, home is more about how you feel about yourself & if you have made peace with yourself & others. To hell with the others. Start with you!
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Re: Re. finding a way...home.
2nd May 2021 2:34am
I wholeheartedly agree 110% with you here, Billy. It's not the actual physical house 🏡that = a home.
It's wherever you are and where that missing piece finds it's way to. THAT'S home, indeed.
I think neither party is ready to be found until they come to terms with themselves and internal struggles.
Truly appreciated your visit and your thoughtful comments, my dear 🙏🏻
Thank you so much.
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xo
B
It's wherever you are and where that missing piece finds it's way to. THAT'S home, indeed.
I think neither party is ready to be found until they come to terms with themselves and internal struggles.
Truly appreciated your visit and your thoughtful comments, my dear 🙏🏻
Thank you so much.
🌹
xo
B
Re: Re. finding a way...home.
I ain't quite home yet. To me it feels almost too boring. When you're home you're no longer hungry, right? Ok, if I was say, 80, I might be happy to be home, content, whatever but that don't make for good reading, right? God, when are you & I gonna get on a chat or art show together? cos I feel I'm on form tonight, baby! Lol or talking bollocks tonight! 😁
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2nd May 2021 4:35am
Re. finding a way...home.
3rd Jul 2021 4:14am
Not sure if it's the Mandela effect or I'm having some deja vu in my comment, but I think we all long to go home or find our way home, wherever (or whenever) that may be. You really brought this to heart and it felt reassuring to know you've expressed something I've felt many times.
Outstanding work.
Outstanding work.
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Re: Re. finding a way...home.
3rd Jul 2021 7:43am
Hey there Walter ;)
It's nice to know that I hit upon something that's so relatable, it definitely makes me feel inspired and connected. I so appreciate your thoughtful comments and the kindness you've shown. It's just amazing and and I'm so fortunate to get such tremendous feedback.
Thanks so much!
🌹 - 💙
B
It's nice to know that I hit upon something that's so relatable, it definitely makes me feel inspired and connected. I so appreciate your thoughtful comments and the kindness you've shown. It's just amazing and and I'm so fortunate to get such tremendous feedback.
Thanks so much!
🌹 - 💙
B