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... is everything.
i read
about not forgetting,
echoes that remain chested within
closer than our very own skin
and beckoning
that beckoning
of sweet memory
my pitter,
it quickens and patters
o' how deeply the grasp
into the heart
of my heart
seeing... me
seeing.
me.
as you see me.
affording that clarity
an exquisite poignancy
delivers a sort of healing
when i see myself,
through you
the breadth
of such tender beauty
reflected back to me
how you allow me
to permeate
without question
willing ....
it's that willingness, my love
willing
and wanting
my tattered soul
as is.
Written by
Bluevelvete
Published 24th Apr 2021
| Edited 25th Jun 2021
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Re. ... is everything.
24th Apr 2021 1:16pm
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24th Apr 2021 1:26pm
I agree!
I had the best, most wonderful inspiration
✨ 💫 ✨ .....
Thank you, C
Extremely glad you enjoyed it.
🌹
xo
B
ps - thank you for the generous list add, too!
💙🌊
I had the best, most wonderful inspiration
✨ 💫 ✨ .....
Thank you, C
Extremely glad you enjoyed it.
🌹
xo
B
ps - thank you for the generous list add, too!
💙🌊
Re. ... is everything.
24th Apr 2021 2:51pm
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Re. ... is everything.
24th Apr 2021 3:12pm
"my pitter/it quickens and patters" ... I love jeu de mots ... breaking apart this cliche of pitter patter ... making it original ... making it your own ... "how you allow me/to permeate" ... poetic gold (I found a new vein of it) ... the last stanza truly brings the poem home ... marvelous ...
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Re: Re. ... is everything.
24th Apr 2021 5:11pm
I love seeing you, LilD! 🦋
Your comments are the healing salve I needed today, and I deeply thank you for it, my dear. Marvelous, is humbling and so extremely kind....🙏🏻
My gratitude is yours, S.
Warmest regards and much love your way...✨
🌹-B
💙
Your comments are the healing salve I needed today, and I deeply thank you for it, my dear. Marvelous, is humbling and so extremely kind....🙏🏻
My gratitude is yours, S.
Warmest regards and much love your way...✨
🌹-B
💙
Re. ... is everything.
24th Apr 2021 4:02pm
Re: Re. ... is everything.
24th Apr 2021 5:15pm
Hee.. 💙..Hee
I am all smiles you enjoyed, KP....
Yes, I am excellent at inspiring patter pottering!
😉
x
I am all smiles you enjoyed, KP....
Yes, I am excellent at inspiring patter pottering!
😉
x
Re. ... is everything.
Dearest, Lady Blue
You reached in and massaged my despairing heart with this beautifully intimate and romantic piece. The build to the "as is" shined a light into the dark recesses of my soul.
I got a little emotional reading this part,
"seeing.
me.
as you see me
affording that clarity
an exquisite poignancy
of a sort of healing"
What a challenge to see oneself the same as trusted friends and lovers. Bravissima, sweet goddess, Susan🥰🐻💋🐻💋🐻💋🐰
You reached in and massaged my despairing heart with this beautifully intimate and romantic piece. The build to the "as is" shined a light into the dark recesses of my soul.
I got a little emotional reading this part,
"seeing.
me.
as you see me
affording that clarity
an exquisite poignancy
of a sort of healing"
What a challenge to see oneself the same as trusted friends and lovers. Bravissima, sweet goddess, Susan🥰🐻💋🐻💋🐻💋🐰
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Re: Re. ... is everything.
25th Apr 2021 1:01am
My dear friend,
Your kindness in these comments is a true gift BB. I thank you for reading and sharing how l'il ole me can impact you like I apparently did. I'm so appreciative and humbled (🤯) <----me
My smile is wide and goofy with pride. I'm glad you enjoyed those lines and the poem as a whole. My gratitude is yours for that generous list add, too.
it such a pleasure to see you 🦋
Much love and respect,
🌹
xo
B
🐻✨ 🐇
Your kindness in these comments is a true gift BB. I thank you for reading and sharing how l'il ole me can impact you like I apparently did. I'm so appreciative and humbled (🤯) <----me
My smile is wide and goofy with pride. I'm glad you enjoyed those lines and the poem as a whole. My gratitude is yours for that generous list add, too.
it such a pleasure to see you 🦋
Much love and respect,
🌹
xo
B
🐻✨ 🐇
Re. ... is everything.
25th Apr 2021 1:33am
Damn! I was gonna say, keep him. Good program though. Good poem though.
Definitely a definition of love.
Definitely a definition of love.
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Re: Re. ... is everything.
25th Apr 2021 1:39am
Thank you, Billy. I appreciate you stopping by to read. Your thoughtful, generous comments are truly lovely.
Warm regards,
🌹
B
Warm regards,
🌹
B
Re. ... is everything.
25th Apr 2021 1:57am
To love yourself ragged around the edges but true as Polaris is the best kind of love. There is strength in such love that cannot be matched by superficial gestures. It buoys the spirit into a rise that no sea squall can capsize.
Xo
John
Xo
John
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25th Apr 2021 6:12pm
Your comments are some seriously amazing sage advice/ facts. I thank you for reinforcing my own inclinations. Sometimes you just need to hear or read it from a well rounded, (extremely!!) intelligent neutral party. Thank you so much for being just that. I am so grateful for you, the generous list add and all you the broadening I've been able to feel and achieve with help like yours.
How lucky am I!!!
Ty Ty, dear friend.
Best wishes,
🌹
-Susan
xoxo
How lucky am I!!!
Ty Ty, dear friend.
Best wishes,
🌹
-Susan
xoxo
Re. ... is everything.
25th Apr 2021 6:10am
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25th Apr 2021 6:13pm
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14th May 2021 7:41pm
Ty very much, Tim
I adore your visits and deeply appreciate your thoughts left.
🌹
xo
I adore your visits and deeply appreciate your thoughts left.
🌹
xo
Re. ... is everything.
14th May 2021 7:39pm
This is a very well written love poem. You must be a very lucky lover and tremendously talented writer. Great piece ❤️
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14th May 2021 7:45pm
Hi William :)
I thank you for your visit and taking the time to leave your extremely kind sentiments with me. It means a lot and I'm appreciative. I am lucky in some ways and I'm forever working on my writing....in hopes of improving
It's nice meeting you and I hope to see you again
Warmest regards,
🌹
-B
I thank you for your visit and taking the time to leave your extremely kind sentiments with me. It means a lot and I'm appreciative. I am lucky in some ways and I'm forever working on my writing....in hopes of improving
It's nice meeting you and I hope to see you again
Warmest regards,
🌹
-B
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Re: Re. ... is everything.
25th May 2021 3:17pm
Thank you for reading and leaving your thoughts, Ted. I am glad you enjoyed those lines and the piece, in general...I can't remember the impetus but it's usually just spur of the moment or off the cuff... lol... When inspiration decides to strike!
A pleasure to see you 🦋
🌹-B
A pleasure to see you 🦋
🌹-B
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25th May 2021 5:16pm
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Re. ... is everything.
14th Jun 2021 6:12am
“when I see myself,
through you” I think really captures the appreciation others may have for us, from their point of view and our value as well as self worth really allows to be a little more complete.
Beautiful work.
through you” I think really captures the appreciation others may have for us, from their point of view and our value as well as self worth really allows to be a little more complete.
Beautiful work.
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14th Jun 2021 6:19am