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an altruistic encouragement of effervescence
I miss you
like mad
more so,
your innate
understanding
that
spiritual-like
wisdom
such an insightful
(and pushy)
mindset
the need
to hold accountable
never letting me
get away with
that bullshit
to be comfortably cloaked
in my chosen darkness
or not speaking my truth
Yours,
was pure
unmitigated
motivation
that unknown
but needed push
altruistic
and only
because
you could see
what I never do
or can
an exquisite substance
of worth
and a battered value
of unique thought
that
my voice,
sings of some
needed effervescence
and that
shutting down
hiding away
-per my usual-
would.
just.
not.
do.
Author's Note
©Blu2021
a simple 'thank you' can never suffice....
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a simple 'thank you' can never suffice....
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Re. an altruistic encouragement of effervescence
17th Apr 2021 6:28pm
a wonderful grouping of words
such a gift you have.
much enjoyed the read
such a gift you have.
much enjoyed the read
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Re: Re. an altruistic encouragement of effervescence
17th Apr 2021 6:41pm
Thanks for the lovely comments, ms
I'm happy you enjoyed reading and appreciate you leaving your thoughts with me.
🌹
-B
I'm happy you enjoyed reading and appreciate you leaving your thoughts with me.
🌹
-B
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Re: Re. an altruistic encouragement of effervescence
17th Apr 2021 10:39pm
I love that chosen word "counterbalance" it's perfect! 👌🏻 I appreciate you reading and taking the time to leave comments, PQ. It's valuable to me to get other's perspectives, allowing me to grow and stay motivated. Your own poetry is definitely becoming a favorite must read of mine, so your comments carry a lot of weight with me. I wholeheartedly thank you for the generous list add as well
Always a pleasure to see you 🦋
Warmest regards,
🌹
-B
Always a pleasure to see you 🦋
Warmest regards,
🌹
-B
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Re. an altruistic encouragement of effervescence
17th Apr 2021 7:07pm
The most eloquent thank. You
Fantastic write you are truly a talented writer beautiful
Love and light
Ron xx
Fantastic write you are truly a talented writer beautiful
Love and light
Ron xx
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Re: Re. an altruistic encouragement of effervescence
17th Apr 2021 10:41pm
Thank you for reading and leaving your thoughts, Ron. I appreciate that very much.
It's always a pleasure ✨
🌹
xo
It's always a pleasure ✨
🌹
xo
Re. an altruistic encouragement of effervescence
17th Apr 2021 8:29pm
Dear B ... this is splendid ... like a confession ... meant only to be heard by the reader/listener ... but deserving of the poetic ... awesome flow ... love the rolling layout ... it has an immediacy to it ... shows the love for this person without being maudlin ... bold ... vulnerable ... authenticity ... in a perfect melange ...
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Re: Re. an altruistic encouragement of effervescence
My goodness LilD! You make me smile so bright!!! Oooo... I'm so glad you think I wasn't over the top. I anguished publishing this because I felt like I was potentially tooting my own horn.... and ohh God no!!... so you definitely have me relieved 😌. I appreciate you reading, taking the time to leave these incredibly awesome insights, the generous list add and all your loveliness. I can't imagine what I would do without your sage advice/ knowledge. I am so very lucky!
Much love and respect,
🌹
xo
-S
Much love and respect,
🌹
xo
-S
Re. an altruistic encouragement of effervescence
17th Apr 2021 8:47pm
Re: Re. an altruistic encouragement of effervescence
(You're stubborn though.... it could be about you.... there's a possibility.... never say never.... I see shades of you within this write... absolutely!!)
Ty for sharing your thoughts, Colin. I love it when you decide to grace me with a few words! I definitely see myself as effervescent through your eyes, indeed.
Much love and respect from across the pond
🌹🤖 💙
xo
Ty for sharing your thoughts, Colin. I love it when you decide to grace me with a few words! I definitely see myself as effervescent through your eyes, indeed.
Much love and respect from across the pond
🌹🤖 💙
xo
Re. an altruistic encouragement of effervescence
This evokes fond memorues of poets that have passed, like souladareatease and some I haven't seen on the site in awhile. The beautiluk quality of this piece is how it does evoke fond memories of loved ones passed but also compels me to make contact with long uncontacted friends.
We all need friends in our lives that do this,
"never letting me
get away with
that bullshit
to be comfortably cloaked
in my chosen darkness"
You definitely do that for this bear of little brain 🐻💋🐻💋🐻
Bravissima and Muchisimas gracias, your goddessness 👑 Lady Blue❣🌹🙏
We all need friends in our lives that do this,
"never letting me
get away with
that bullshit
to be comfortably cloaked
in my chosen darkness"
You definitely do that for this bear of little brain 🐻💋🐻💋🐻
Bravissima and Muchisimas gracias, your goddessness 👑 Lady Blue❣🌹🙏
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Re: Re. an altruistic encouragement of effervescence
Ohhh BB... you almost brought me to tears! Grace sometimes tells me that I remind her of Gabe and you mentioning that I evoke his memories and bring him to mind, is extremely touching. You know it's so strange, like a good strange... I never knew souladareatease (Gabe) but when lepp started the #Nopoo forum for Soul last November, I was drawn there... I can't explain it... I was just pulled to contribute. I never in a zillion years would have thought that I could post a poem a day this long... it's ludicrous! Much less have anything worthy to say. Yet not only do I just figure it out, I actually like it now. Good or bad or meh writing.... no matter. I like posting there every day!! I have met Grace through that forum, cold_fusion, Missy, lepp and I have read more of Soul's poetry than I bet a lot of people have.
I have spoken out before (to you or someone I can't remember now) saying that I feel like I get a specific type of energy or motivation when I construct my poems directly from the #Nopoo forum. I mentioned to Grace that I think Soul's energy lead me there, to the forum while he was still with us, so I could meet her and we could become friends. Maybe that's crazy but her and I have developed a friendship that I know wouldn't have ever come to fruition, otherwise. I am hopeful that maybe Soul caught a glimpse of my poetry and somehow spiritually connected her and I. Knowing that we could help each other in the days ahead..... just my humble opinion....
Anyway. I thank you for reading and sharing your overwhelmingly beautiful thoughts with me. I can't put into words correctly how happy that makes me. I am so grateful for your visits, the generous list add and your bear brain too!!
Much love, along with bear hugs too!
🐻💞🐇
xoxo
-S
I have spoken out before (to you or someone I can't remember now) saying that I feel like I get a specific type of energy or motivation when I construct my poems directly from the #Nopoo forum. I mentioned to Grace that I think Soul's energy lead me there, to the forum while he was still with us, so I could meet her and we could become friends. Maybe that's crazy but her and I have developed a friendship that I know wouldn't have ever come to fruition, otherwise. I am hopeful that maybe Soul caught a glimpse of my poetry and somehow spiritually connected her and I. Knowing that we could help each other in the days ahead..... just my humble opinion....
Anyway. I thank you for reading and sharing your overwhelmingly beautiful thoughts with me. I can't put into words correctly how happy that makes me. I am so grateful for your visits, the generous list add and your bear brain too!!
Much love, along with bear hugs too!
🐻💞🐇
xoxo
-S
Re. an altruistic encouragement of effervescence
There's depth, and I feel it, here. Good write, B. Honesty in any relationship level is important. Hugs.🌹
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Re: Re. an altruistic encouragement of effervescence
18th Apr 2021 8:54am
I appreciate that greatly, Grace.... an extremely kind sentiment. Honesty is the key
🌹
xo
🌹
xo
Re. an altruistic encouragement of effervescence
18th Apr 2021 2:18am
Oh, those special ones, who call us out of ourselves and help us see our worth... I have said a hundred thank yous to such people, and it has never felt adequate. This beautiful offering is as close as it gets, I think! What a perfect tribute to a sacred friendship. Bravo!
❤ k
❤ k
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Re: Re. an altruistic encouragement of effervescence
18th Apr 2021 8:53am
Yeah, those particularly special ones, who don't take any of our crap!! I thank you for reading and understanding exactly what I meant and who I was thanking. I appreciate your thoughtful and kind comments, the generous list add and you taking the time you did
Its always a pleasure.
I'll be thinking about you and Nova Scotia today.
Sending hugs all around,
🌹 🤗🌹🤗🌹
-B
Its always a pleasure.
I'll be thinking about you and Nova Scotia today.
Sending hugs all around,
🌹 🤗🌹🤗🌹
-B
Re. an altruistic encouragement of effervescence
18th Apr 2021 7:07am
We all have to find balance within ourselves. We can be good and a little bit naughty between the sheets. Keep on writing.
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18th Apr 2021 8:48am
Re. an altruistic encouragement of effervescence
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Re: Re. an altruistic encouragement of effervescence
19th Apr 2021 00:47am
YOU'RE lovely, Margo
Ty for reading and the generous list add. It's so lovely to see you 🦋
I hope you're doing well, my friend
🌹
xo
-B
Ty for reading and the generous list add. It's so lovely to see you 🦋
I hope you're doing well, my friend
🌹
xo
-B
Re: Re. an altruistic encouragement of effervescence
19th Apr 2021 3:37am
I am wonderful tonight, actually! Yay!!! A rare occasion...thank you for asking, sweetheart.
X O ❤❤❤
X O ❤❤❤
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Re. an altruistic encouragement of effervescence
21st Apr 2021 3:59am
I truly love this! His expectation of no-nonsense is exercised to help you be who you should on a difficult night. A light dom sub poem in which interpersonal dom like a teacher correcting a student. Truly fine writing my friend. Enjoyed it thoroughly.
Xo
John
Xo
John
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Re: Re. an altruistic encouragement of effervescence
31st May 2021 3:13am
I am so sorry I missed this, John. I thank you for reading and for your extremely kind remarks, here. I am so happy you enjoyed this and just so grateful for all your loveliness, shown.
Much love and respect,
🌹-
xoxo
S
Much love and respect,
🌹-
xoxo
S
Re. an altruistic encouragement of effervescence
31st May 2021 3:09am
Blue, you really are able to create excellent work in many different types of themes.
"an exquisite substance
of worth" conjures up emotions and understanding of the true self.
Great verse.
"an exquisite substance
of worth" conjures up emotions and understanding of the true self.
Great verse.
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Re: Re. an altruistic encouragement of effervescence
31st May 2021 3:14am
I appreciate your supportive encouragements, Wally... it really means a lot to me.
I'm heartened by your compliment and I humbly thank you muchly, my friend 🙏🏻
🌹-💙
xo
B
I'm heartened by your compliment and I humbly thank you muchly, my friend 🙏🏻
🌹-💙
xo
B