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inopportune inspiration.
it's when i'm at my busiest
most unobtainable
or basking in my utter devastation
that i feel the pull
of images or ideas
bombarding
perfect lines
or lightning-strike phrases
thoughts that need capturing
flirting in momentary genius
spectacular in all that's coveted
yet, only to self impress
of that moment
in rare unique
a peek of lost wonder
glimmering
in pure possibility
especially as it slips away,
to flee upon the winds of
lost inspiration
with only
a
s h a d o w
remaining.
Author's Note
the trials and tribulations of where/when inspiration chooses to strike.... (like the shower) and then the inevitability of me forgetting completely what it was that was so striking.
Just *Poof*.. and it's gone.... #karma #Truth
©Blu2021
Just *Poof*.. and it's gone.... #karma #Truth
©Blu2021
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Re. inopportune inspiration.
12th Apr 2021 10:50pm
When the flowers fade the plant still remains to flower again and again ... Bless and love ... ..
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Re: Re. inopportune inspiration.
12th Apr 2021 10:56pm
unless you're one of the unfortunate flowering plant species that bloom drop seeds and then die.... never to bloom again.... yes, I'm in a mood, sorry..... 🖤 🥀
I thank you for sharing your thoughts, dear FeNyX
My gratitude is all yours.
Returned blessings,
-xo
I thank you for sharing your thoughts, dear FeNyX
My gratitude is all yours.
Returned blessings,
-xo
Re: Re. inopportune inspiration.
12th Apr 2021 11:19pm
well, yes lol ... but thats ok ... this too shall pass ... and flowers shall return to their full bloom shortly ... Bless and love, Dear Blue ... ..
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Re: Re. inopportune inspiration.
13th Apr 2021 00:44am
Your positivity is nice... Im gonna bask in some Cure and Smiths and see what the outlook is tomorrow.... sigh...
Appreciate you, A.
xoxo
Appreciate you, A.
xoxo
Re. inopportune inspiration.
12th Apr 2021 11:19pm
Like a fart in the wind, right? I know, it's vulgar. Maybe I'm just not feeling so poetic today. ;-)
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Re: Re. inopportune inspiration.
13th Apr 2021 00:43am
Don't worry... me either.
Yep exactly!
Thank you for reading and your thoughts, Billy
I am grateful for you
🙏
-B
Yep exactly!
Thank you for reading and your thoughts, Billy
I am grateful for you
🙏
-B
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- Edited 9th May 2021 8:45pm
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Re: Re. inopportune inspiration.
13th Apr 2021 00:47am
Ty, C for that wisp of inspiration due to YOUR brilliant mind. I was just happenstance
I'm glad you enjoyed reading and I appreciate the list add, too.
Good luck writing!
🌹
x
I'm glad you enjoyed reading and I appreciate the list add, too.
Good luck writing!
🌹
x
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Re: Re. inopportune inspiration.
I am not feeling that today... at all, so I truly thank you for saying so, C. My esteem is in the shitter today but I'll figure out how to bounce back....
Somehow!
🌹
xo
Somehow!
🌹
xo
Re. inopportune inspiration.
12th Apr 2021 11:45pm
I hate that I'm in the shower and in my head spill a work of genius, get to my phone to type it. Not a single stanza can I remember. I'm glad its not just me
Great write gorgeous
Love and light
Ron x
Great write gorgeous
Love and light
Ron x
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Re: Re. inopportune inspiration.
13th Apr 2021 00:53am
THAT'S ME!
💯 💯 💯 💯 💯 💯 💯
I come up with some AMAZING shower poetry!
Then it fucking disappears by the time I dry off.. dammit... hahaha...
It's where this one sprang up... 🚿
I am so grateful you understand! It's funny that we're sympatico that way! I appreciate your thoughtful comments and the RL add, Ron!
Much love,
🌹
xo
💯 💯 💯 💯 💯 💯 💯
I come up with some AMAZING shower poetry!
Then it fucking disappears by the time I dry off.. dammit... hahaha...
It's where this one sprang up... 🚿
I am so grateful you understand! It's funny that we're sympatico that way! I appreciate your thoughtful comments and the RL add, Ron!
Much love,
🌹
xo
Re. inopportune inspiration.
12th Apr 2021 11:58pm
Lord, I can be actively writing, click over to the dictionary and by the time I get back over to the poem the entire idea is gone. It is the worst though, when you have a poem in your head and you aren't in a position to write it down. Little ghosty poems, haunting us and then vanishing. Bastards.
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Re: Re. inopportune inspiration.
13th Apr 2021 00:39am
Complete and utter bastards!!
ugggh!
The. worst.
Thx for feeling my pain.
I've totally lost my train of thought because I was enthralled with wordhippo.com and all the cool features to expand my vocabulary there.
It's a great site, if you haven't checked it out...
Lmao.
Thank you for sharing your thoughts, E!
I appreciate you muchly :)
🌹
x
ugggh!
The. worst.
Thx for feeling my pain.
I've totally lost my train of thought because I was enthralled with wordhippo.com and all the cool features to expand my vocabulary there.
It's a great site, if you haven't checked it out...
Lmao.
Thank you for sharing your thoughts, E!
I appreciate you muchly :)
🌹
x
Re. inopportune inspiration.
13th Apr 2021 00:00am
Dearest, Blue
This happens to me all the time. I can't count the times when I've been struck by inspiration while busy and have forgotten the thought when I ho to write. And then there's dreams. My don actually sleeps with a pad next to his bed to record dreams. Brava, sweet S🌹
This happens to me all the time. I can't count the times when I've been struck by inspiration while busy and have forgotten the thought when I ho to write. And then there's dreams. My don actually sleeps with a pad next to his bed to record dreams. Brava, sweet S🌹
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13th Apr 2021 3:09pm
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13th Apr 2021 6:43pm
Re. inopportune inspiration.
13th Apr 2021 00:30am
I just love this, Blue.
Especially the first stanza, but all of it -- just beautifully phrased.
Especially the first stanza, but all of it -- just beautifully phrased.
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Re: Re. inopportune inspiration.
13th Apr 2021 1:03am
Thank you so much, Jav
I am very glad you enjoyed and found something in it! I appreciate you taking the time to leave your thoughts.
Much love and respect,
🌹
x
I am very glad you enjoyed and found something in it! I appreciate you taking the time to leave your thoughts.
Much love and respect,
🌹
x
Re. inopportune inspiration.
13th Apr 2021 3:26am
Oh my Blue, this was absolutely beautiful
It’s so true I often wonder what’s the point sometimes what am I doing all this for, I think it’s in for the free therapy to be honest. But at the same time it is rewarding self rewarding, and I think that that’s OK ♥️
Very very cleverly crafted darling, this perspective is awesome!
Loves you honey ♥️♥️♥️
Always
J🌹
yet, only to self impress
of that moment
in rare unique
a peek of lost wonder
glimmering
in pure possibility
especially as it slips away,
to flee upon the winds of
lost inspiration
with only
a
s h a d o w
remaining.
It’s so true I often wonder what’s the point sometimes what am I doing all this for, I think it’s in for the free therapy to be honest. But at the same time it is rewarding self rewarding, and I think that that’s OK ♥️
Very very cleverly crafted darling, this perspective is awesome!
Loves you honey ♥️♥️♥️
Always
J🌹
yet, only to self impress
of that moment
in rare unique
a peek of lost wonder
glimmering
in pure possibility
especially as it slips away,
to flee upon the winds of
lost inspiration
with only
a
s h a d o w
remaining.
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Re: Re. inopportune inspiration.
YOU are a dear sweet lady!!
I appreciate your thoughtful comments and Yes, I believe it is a therapy of sorts, 100%. A self rewarding experience, allowing my mental bullshit an opportunity to purge or reset, so I can properly see the forest for the trees.
I'm glad you enjoyed the pic and got it, and that you found something within my little poem that resonated. You are a beautiful soul and supportive juggernaut... I wholeheartedly thank you, my dear!
Much love and oodles of respect—
💙💙
BB
I appreciate your thoughtful comments and Yes, I believe it is a therapy of sorts, 100%. A self rewarding experience, allowing my mental bullshit an opportunity to purge or reset, so I can properly see the forest for the trees.
I'm glad you enjoyed the pic and got it, and that you found something within my little poem that resonated. You are a beautiful soul and supportive juggernaut... I wholeheartedly thank you, my dear!
Much love and oodles of respect—
💙💙
BB
Re. inopportune inspiration.
13th Apr 2021 3:27am
Oh yeah I love the broken light bulb 💡
that is just perfect just it’s brilliant love it!
Xo ♥️
that is just perfect just it’s brilliant love it!
Xo ♥️
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Re: Re. inopportune inspiration.
13th Apr 2021 5:21pm
Re. inopportune inspiration.
13th Apr 2021 5:22am
Dear BV,
Those lost poems are the duds. Those are the ones making way for the gems that do make the paper.
(I don’t really know that) but why not? It’s lunacy though how many beginning ideas should morph into Pulitzer wins but evaporate in the blink of an eye. I don’t get it but then again I won’t remember writing this unless you kindly respond back 😁
Tomorrow is another opportunity for another brilliant write which will happen because that’s how you roll. (I’m certain of that.) even this is eloquent and it’s you telling me you got inspired on the toilet. Or was that the shower? Damn it. Now I have scroll 100 miles back to the top and reread.
H🌷
Those lost poems are the duds. Those are the ones making way for the gems that do make the paper.
(I don’t really know that) but why not? It’s lunacy though how many beginning ideas should morph into Pulitzer wins but evaporate in the blink of an eye. I don’t get it but then again I won’t remember writing this unless you kindly respond back 😁
Tomorrow is another opportunity for another brilliant write which will happen because that’s how you roll. (I’m certain of that.) even this is eloquent and it’s you telling me you got inspired on the toilet. Or was that the shower? Damn it. Now I have scroll 100 miles back to the top and reread.
H🌷
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Re: Re. inopportune inspiration.
heh heh 😜
I'm 💯 going with that 'dud' theory!!
It's less painful than thinking that I lost out on some potential award winning grace while shaving my legs.... hahaha... (Yeeeeaaah riiiight!) 😂
I'm still giggling about toilet inspiration, perhaps that's where my next biggest place of deep thoughts are pulled from.... Har Har! 😏
Thanks for your amazing sense of humor, the support, the list add and all the kindness you leave me with. I am unbelievably grateful, H
Cheers, my lovely friend 🙏
🌹
x
-B
I'm 💯 going with that 'dud' theory!!
It's less painful than thinking that I lost out on some potential award winning grace while shaving my legs.... hahaha... (Yeeeeaaah riiiight!) 😂
I'm still giggling about toilet inspiration, perhaps that's where my next biggest place of deep thoughts are pulled from.... Har Har! 😏
Thanks for your amazing sense of humor, the support, the list add and all the kindness you leave me with. I am unbelievably grateful, H
Cheers, my lovely friend 🙏
🌹
x
-B
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- Edited 18th Nov 2021 8:45pm
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Re: Re. inopportune inspiration.
13th Apr 2021 5:38pm
Ooooo... I like that imagery, in abundance, Rian! Knowing that there's always another cloud beneath with more inspiration upon the winds, is smile creating, indeed!! It helps alleviate the frustration when that inspiration flickers and then immediately escapes... haha! Thank you so much for reading and for your extremely thoughtful sentiments. I am so lucky to have you take the time! Your comments are like little poems themselves... I love it!
Much love and smiles your way!
🌹
xo
-B
Much love and smiles your way!
🌹
xo
-B
Re. inopportune inspiration.
13th Apr 2021 6:17am
Re: Re. inopportune inspiration.
13th Apr 2021 5:40pm
At the cost of a clear conscience and sense of freedom, even if pain is involved. I thank you for sharing your thoughts, Francisco!
🌹
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Re: Re. inopportune inspiration.
I appreciate you reading and that solidarity! I hope I can retrieve some of lost inspiration as well!
Thank you for stopping by and leaving your thoughts, please don't hesitate to return!
It's nice to have visits ;)
🌹
xo
Thank you for stopping by and leaving your thoughts, please don't hesitate to return!
It's nice to have visits ;)
🌹
xo
Re. inopportune inspiration.
13th Apr 2021 8:56am
Some of my best poetry is forever lost hehe. Awsome poem, friend. Glad it wasn't forgotten 😁
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Re: Re. inopportune inspiration.
13th Apr 2021 5:49pm
Hey, DC!
Isn't that always the way, right? Damn! 😂
I'm taking solace in some of the advice here... Mostly that it's inevitable for inspiration to strike continuously... fingers crossed 🤞🏻...!!
I am glad that this poem wasn't forgotten either... ha! Thank you for sharing your thoughts and the list add, my friend. Seems we all have moments of escaped inspiration, "Doh's!"...
Warmest regards,
🌹
-🐝
Isn't that always the way, right? Damn! 😂
I'm taking solace in some of the advice here... Mostly that it's inevitable for inspiration to strike continuously... fingers crossed 🤞🏻...!!
I am glad that this poem wasn't forgotten either... ha! Thank you for sharing your thoughts and the list add, my friend. Seems we all have moments of escaped inspiration, "Doh's!"...
Warmest regards,
🌹
-🐝
Re. inopportune inspiration.
13th Apr 2021 3:11pm
Great Ars Poetica write ... captures the essence of writing poetry ... the creative process ... resonates so clearly ... I really hate it when themes appear when I am driving ... really like the physicality of the poem ... the big stanzas ... then the small closing ... visually pleasing ... as always ... great flow ... steady cadence ... good crisp line breaks ...
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Re: Re. inopportune inspiration.
13th Apr 2021 5:57pm
Ohhh!! The dreaded driving burst of inspiration! AND.. even if I talk to text to try and save a thought, it's a jumbled mess because talk to text captures about ever third word correctly.... hahaha.... Damn that almost worthy technology!!
I really appreciate your spot on thoughts, LilD. You nailed it. I'm so so happy you enjoyed the formatting as well. That's wonderful to know.
It's such a great pleasure to have you visit and read your feedback. I am grateful for the list add and you bringing me such joy, my friend 🙏
Much love and respect,
🌹
xo
B
I really appreciate your spot on thoughts, LilD. You nailed it. I'm so so happy you enjoyed the formatting as well. That's wonderful to know.
It's such a great pleasure to have you visit and read your feedback. I am grateful for the list add and you bringing me such joy, my friend 🙏
Much love and respect,
🌹
xo
B
Re. inopportune inspiration.
14th Apr 2021 2:01am
You put down in words exactly my experience with inspiration. It comes and goes like the wind. Often if I am not at home I email myself my ideas because if I don't they will evanesce into nothingness. Your poetry here is amazing. The lyrical clarity speaks a poet's language. And the passion within those brilliant concepts is illustrated like lightning that strikes in a beautiful arc from the sky.
XoXoXo
John
XoXoXo
John
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Re: Re. inopportune inspiration.
14th Apr 2021 3:08am
Hi John ;)
I hope all is well tonight!
Thank you for your visit and the eloquence of your thoughtful sentiments! I do kinda the same... I'll write notes down on an app in my phone that's synced to my Google account. Hence, it's saved to the cloud. Yes! That's IF I can remember that stroke of inspiration to begin with!! haha 😂....
I so appreciate your generous list add and the loveliness of your kind words. How I smile reading them!!! ☺
Here's to remembered inspiration!
Much love and respect,
🌹
-Susan
I hope all is well tonight!
Thank you for your visit and the eloquence of your thoughtful sentiments! I do kinda the same... I'll write notes down on an app in my phone that's synced to my Google account. Hence, it's saved to the cloud. Yes! That's IF I can remember that stroke of inspiration to begin with!! haha 😂....
I so appreciate your generous list add and the loveliness of your kind words. How I smile reading them!!! ☺
Here's to remembered inspiration!
Much love and respect,
🌹
-Susan
Re. inopportune inspiration.
25th May 2021 3:42pm
Sounds like the brain functions at a higher level when so many thoughts are running through, only to have them escape when you try to pause and capture them. Relatable...
Outstanding work Blue.
Outstanding work Blue.
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Re: Re. inopportune inspiration.
25th May 2021 3:52pm
You nailed it, Walter
That ache of escaped inspiration.... it's happened a zillion times, too. I think of something inspired when I sit down to capture it... *poof*.... lol... that's when I remember that sometimes the opposite works, too.... the poof comes at random.... at least the good ones do, in my experience... lol.
Ty for reading, my friend
I appreciate you and your thoughtful comments
🌹-💙
xoxo - B
That ache of escaped inspiration.... it's happened a zillion times, too. I think of something inspired when I sit down to capture it... *poof*.... lol... that's when I remember that sometimes the opposite works, too.... the poof comes at random.... at least the good ones do, in my experience... lol.
Ty for reading, my friend
I appreciate you and your thoughtful comments
🌹-💙
xoxo - B