Overload

Awesome write sexy in a strange almost bdsm way
Great read, loved it
Love and light
Ron x

Strange like me. ;) There is definitely a BDSM tone and meaning to it. In addition to other things such as sensory overload from anxiety and ways to channel that into other senses that get me out of my head like BDSM and other physical activities. :p Thank you so much for the comment Ron. I really appreciate your thoughts. And love and light back at ya. :) 🕯️ ⛓️🌑

Dear, Kristina,
I love passion with which you write the piece. This paints well the overload theme,
"And break the universe
into a thousand pieces"
But what explosive ecstasy💥💥💞This question  is a good one,
"Where's the line?
between yourself and passion" Oh to lose oneself in passion🙏
Brava, goddess BD❣❣

I am full of passion so I am glad it shows. ;) Happy that you felt the overload theme worked in relation to the writing. Love pushing the boundaries till you cannot find the line. Losing oneself in passion is the best remedy, whether that's sex, BDSM, a hobby, fitness, or whatever else you are passionate about. :) 🕯️ ⛓️🌑

Always great for one to push the boundaries to draw/push beyond the line to fully find oneself in what they are passionate about. Great write thanks for sharing as this is inspiring 😊

Cheers

Definitely agree Stan, let's keep pushing those boundaries. ;) There is so much to experience in the world and so often, like with (not) traveling, so much opportunity is missed. Thank you so much for the comment and really happy it was inspiring. 🕯️ ⛓️🌑

I was feeling this poem all day
You wrote it

BIG LIKE YO

Ah yes, me too. Keep thinking of overloading the senses Poetspeak. ;) Thank you so much for the comment and thoughts. 🕯️ ⛓️🌑 Love the BLY.

The rough is what turns you on.  Keep on writing.

Hey Francisco! Yes! Getting it rough, can be very exciting. Definitely engages the senses. Push the limits of feeling. Thank you so much for the comment. 🕯️ ⛓️🌑

Ye-haw.

The passion is amazing.  I like this.

Hey Remy! Passion is my default setting. ;) I am really happy you liked it and thank you for reading and the comment. 🕯️ ⛓️🌑

I love the part where you don't feel anything else. That's my intention when playing the game. To take your woman and put her in a place where all she knows is anticipation of the next touch

Ah yes! That's the part I love too; you know in real life. :p And Oh yes! that's the place I want to be for sure. Anticipating that next touch or ... yeah, going to stop myself there. lol  Anyway, welcome RR... Sure you will fit right in and thank you for the read and comment. ;) 🕯️ ⛓️🌑

Hey Danny! How is that door holding up? ;) Weaving depth and desire, somebody has to do it. :p I do love it. You getting some sun over there yet or too early? :) So happy to see you. 🕯️ ⛓️🌑

I love your courage.  I'm  a little inhibited when it comes to really getting into the sexual energy through words.  It's  definitely there, just in code.  I love the way you put that feeling of running to stand still, like...feeling it all so you can feel nothing.  The psyche and the life force are so contradictory sometimes.  It's funny...I mean not that you asked. And don't mean to write a book here, but...when I try to cross those invisible lines in my mind and play rough or semi I initiate that vibe...and I get the response it would invoke...I'm always in my mind like "what the hell you think you're doing?!" to my partner and myself...then he's like..."WELL YOU started it!"  🤣🤣🤣  I'm like oh, yeah...sorry.  lmao.

Hey Margo! Thank you so much. Sometimes I have courage and other times none. I kind of move in extremes. Some of my sexual energy through words I am afraid to share also. The much more extreme stuff. :p Feeling it all so I can forget the bad stuff is vital for me because I have lots of bad stuff that I need to forget. Having OCD does not help with that either. That is so true that the life force and psyche can be so contradictory. I love your detailed feedback so much and I really appreciate you sharing your thoughts with me. Haha, you started it! just go with it... it's all good. ;) lol. You are awesome! You really had me smiling with your wonderful comment. 🕯️ ⛓️🌑

Awesome 😁  I love connecting ring with people on here on a deep level without it being considered over the top...bc you get to know at least a part of the person faster through their poetry.  Beats the hell out of small talk!  You have a nice night lady 💛

Like a dam about to overflow, sometimes you need to open the flood gates to relieve the pressure that has built up.  By -passing the normal path through your electrical power generation (brain) so it doesn't spin out of control.  Yes, the folks downstream might get wet, but all survive!  : )

My dam is always about to overflow. Have to plug it up often to prevent leaks and floods. The currents and flow produce a lot electricity too so it's a never ending of cycle of needs. Downstream people definitely get wet... I come (pun intended) with a disclaimer. Not all will survive. 🕯️ ⛓️🌑

I do love a good hard 'jaunt' in the outside always... Yes, I like my hobbies better. lol Oh boy, this is a subject that could certainly result in ... I am going to stop there; after all there is no EC setting on comments. :( Oh, and I am really happy you liked the poem too. lol 🕯️ ⛓️🌑

Nice erotic write ... smooth ... sensual ... great flow to keep me in the poem ... perfectly captures the power exchange that is the magic of BDSM ...

Yes, I wanted to keep you in the 'poem' LDF so I could... do things with you lol. because if I am going to do girl on girl then... let's do it right. I love that you think I was able to capture the power exchange and I can see you very much love BDSM as well. ;) 🕯️ ⛓️🌑

The red hot passion here bursts into a scene that overwhelms the senses. Love how you create erotic fire with words. There is dark magic here that defies taboos and pushes me as I read into a cosmic flower of desire. You, my friend, have a gift with sensual power that you wield with feminine might to my delight.

Xo
John

You overwhelmed my senses with this incredible comment John. Creating erotic fire, that's why I keep burning things down. :p  I am constantly defying taboos with dark magic and witchcraft; and hell fire too. And you my friend have a gift with words that is very evident in your comments. I adore that last line. I really appreciate your thoughts so much and I love everything about this. xo 🕯️ ⛓️🌑

I'm catching up to my readings and it was funny to see Poetspeak's "Sensory" followed by "Overload" in my reading list. (Coincidence?)  ;-)
Reading through I couldn't help but think that an overload can lead to an explosion, releasing all the heat, energy and passion that cannot be contained.

Excellent work Ms Kristina. Bravo!

Haha. A coincidence yes, or possibly the universe getting some wires crossed. ;) I did not realize, I need to go read Sensory and see if they fit together. :p That's exactly right, an orgasmic explosion of passion and energy that cannot be contained - you got it! I am really happy you liked it! 🕯️ ⛓️🌑