Collar

a sweet sensual spill upon your canvas

Really happy you liked it NB. That's what my mind did with collar.  Hopefully it reads well and with some creativity. ;) I like painting variety on the canvas. 🌋⭕💖🔥

yes it dose have a grate Friday and up coming weekend

I like this.

Really happy you liked it Adagio. I kind of had a feeling you might like this one for whatever reason. ;) 🌋⭕💖🔥

Nothing like the forging of the will only to quench it to our desired hardness. Hahaha, so freaking tight Lil X you are a one with this, dang this is tight and that pic. As they say, "spare the rod and spoil sub"

lol I love this comment; it is super tight. :p 'forging of the will' love that 'only to quench it to our desired hardness' oh definitely. Lil X - love that too. My dear I_IS_ME I think it is spare the rod and torture the sub. 🌋⭕💖🔥

The poem shows strength and works hard  
There should be a HARDWARE theme  
Those last two lines though bring this to a sleek sexy conclusion  

BIG LIKE

RL AWARD

P.S.  beautiful picture too

Oh yes, definitely should be a hardware theme. lol A lot of work goes into forging the perfect sub or anything worthwhile. ;) I thought the last two lines came (pun intended) together very well. I love the comment, BIG LIKE and RL. Thank you so much. The picture seems well liked as well. ;) 🌋⭕💖🔥

Nice tight erotic write ... "ingot" great juicy word ... nice sensual write ... the last line left me smiling ...

Lovely, I am so happy this one left you smiling! That's a great reward. :) I love juicy words... And really happy you thought it was a nice tight write... Thank you so much for the comment and feedback. 🌋⭕💖🔥

The girl did love the cum.  Nicely done.  I like the imagery.

What girl doesn't? ;) over and over... Thank you so much for the comment and compliment Robert. Really happy you like the imagery. 🌋⭕💖🔥

Extremely Creative. Impressive.

Enjoyed how you interwove the details of the collar and its metal working, with the bondage eroticism.

Hey DaVinci. You made me really happy with that. Thank you!

And I am really happy you enjoyed this spin on bondage and orgasm in relation to working the metal... ;) 🌋⭕💖🔥 Lots of steamy fun to be had with a rod.

Took me a while to realize there were words that went with the picture. Great spill, love how your poems are so well thought out. Now the tune spinning in my head is "Shes my... Heavy Metal Love"  

Cheers
 

I took some creative license with the blacksmith creation of the collar and the collar being a woman in a BDSM scenario. ;) I am super happy you think they are well thought out. Most of the time they just come to me fast and furious. That sounds like a good tune to associate. lol Thank you so much for reading and giving me your feedback Stan... 🌋⭕💖🔥

Interesting as mine all come out the same way except for Full Moon. Aroused was written when I was on a lunch break at work lol. All the others are written when I am in bed and just about to fall asleep, I guess we all have ways in which we write.
Who cares about dinner lets just get to dessert ; ) 😛🥰😉

Nice! I am going to take that as a good thing BP. Thank you for the comment. :) 🌋⭕💖🔥

Damn this poem is burning me up. Keep on writing.

That's the pyromaniac in me burning stuff up all the time
Francisco. Thank you for the comment. :) 🌋⭕💖🔥

very intense

I can be very intense. :p Thank you so much for the comment, S.O. 🌋⭕💖🔥

You work your metaphor with a finesse that draws me into the blacksmith imagery and keeps me there to linger as your erotically charged tale unfolds. Love this so much.

John

I am really happy you liked the metaphor and imagery John. Thank you so much for the comment and compliment. I really appreciate you reading and sharing your thoughts with me so much. Feel free to linger anytime. ;) 🌋⭕💖🔥

I re-read your poem and explored the sensual nuance deeper. Your analogy had me feeling the steam that rose from the rod's entrance as it made its way upward. That closing metaphor sizzled with your obedience to the blacksmith as he shaped you into his desired form. This is how erotic poetry can scintillate when written by a woman of your imagination. A truly wonderful metaphor that you rode out all the way.

XoXoXo
John

Ah yes! there is definitely steam as the rod enters her with a hot long shaft which she grips tightly. Submitting to the blacksmith's will can create such gorgeous sensations and being shaped into that most beautiful form. I am so happy you liked the metaphor and thank you for  re-visiting and sharing your additional thoughts with me.

Hi Gyco, thank you so much for reading and the wonderful comment. I love your description so much and I am so happy you think it is exquisitely written. 🌋⭕💖🔥

Well I like that you practiced your commenting skills on me. ;) I love exquisite delicacy and it seems your commenting skills are great. Thank you for the additional wonderful feedback. And I consider arousal through words or any other way a compliment. :p

Someone hand me some ice! I need to cool down after that read wow. This is so creative and so wonderfully sexy. You mastered this piece, perfect and such a good read

If I give you some ice you are going to steam up the place for sure Gwen. :) Creative and sexy is definitely the tone I hoped for. Thank you so much for the wonderful comment and compliment. I don't know what to say in regards to mastered this piece, that really makes me feel good. Thank you! 🌋⭕💖🔥

Nice poem.

Thank you for the comment Adagio. I am really happy you liked this one. :) 🌋⭕💖🔥

Very passionate and heated, that's definitely me. ;) I guess that's why I love cooler climates - like Scotland. I like LOTS of stuff - variety... name it... I am really happy you enjoyed the read Danny. :) 🌋⭕💖🔥

Here she was an ordinary ingot,
Here she became a workpiece

Wonderful transitional! What imagery. Steamy!

Hey RR, really glad you found the imagery compelling. :) The process of handling this workpiece definitely creates a lot of steam. ;) Thank you so much for reading and the comment.  🌋⭕💖🔥

I really really liked this. It's palpable, each line delivered like a gasp. It's a very steamy and sultry write. You sure do know your erotica.

Excellent stuff.

Hey Wally! I have a very dirty mind so that's good for writing erotica. ;p I love steamy and sultry and I try not to get to smutty here, with some exceptions ;). so I am really happy if it works. I really love your comment and thanks for the great compliment. 🌋⭕💖🔥

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