Constellations of Incisions

'This does not frighten tears in my soul' + 'And the Universe dedicates tears to the stars' - Epic lines ... Bless and love ... ..

Hey FeN, thank you so much. That makes me really happy that you think they are epic lines. I really appreciate your feedback as always. And Bless and love back at ya... 🌃☪️🔪

Hey Relic! It's so great to see you back... I hope things are going well for you at the moment. Lots of sensual and other ideas that come out in words :) so it is always great to hear what works and I really appreciate you sharing your thoughts. Thank you so much for the compliment. I like sexy. ;) 🌃☪️🔪

Beautifully written  work
Lovely stuff, powerful lines
Love and light
Ron x

Hey Ron! I am really happy you thought it is beautifully written. That means a lot to me and I appreciate your feedback so much. Sending you lots of Love and light always. 🌃☪️🔪

The entire piece is to tight, but that first stanza is sticking with us. It's almost a kindred within those words that walks along the edges of our darkness. To tight X

You know how much I love giving you a tight piece I_IS_ME. That might sound different in my head. lol You know me, there is often some darkness in my writing and you have a way of seeing it clearly. I suppose we share the edges of our darkness. Thank you so much for the comment. I always love getting a tight. ;) 🌃☪️🔪

I could stick this to my wall. Well done, my friend.

That means so much to me and I am so honored Adagio. Thank you so much for the awesome comment and compliment. I am really at a loss for adequate words. 🌃☪️🔪

I once had a star... it’s was locked in a constellation. Its light cut through my soul. I can’t find my star ⭐️ now... I’ve searched the universe over. I don’t know if the moon is in the way or not. Thank for your poem... good ink

Hi Buddydog!, I loved your poetic comment. :) Keep searching the universe and you will find your star if you haven't or your star will find you. I am really glad you thought it was good ink. :) 🌃☪️🔪

This hits the heart and soul really hard, but in the softest way possible.

Hey Remy! I really like that description a lot. Thank you so much for the comment and your thoughts. 🌃☪️🔪

The orgasmic bliss of true love.  Keep on writing.

Ah yes! Orgasmic bliss first, then true love. :) Thank you so much for the comment and feedback Francisco. 🌃☪️🔪

Lovely write ... what I think most of us want ... I know it is what I want ...  

We are all searching for that person that can really make us feel, everything, I think. I hope that you are able to find that. Thank you so much for the comment and compliment. I really appreciate it a lot. 🌃☪️🔪

So much depth in this gorgeous write! Sensual and spiritually entwined. I fell in love with all your beautiful words

Gwen :) x

I really appreciate your wonderful comment Gwen, thank you so much. Sensual and spiritually entwined is a beautiful description. :) I am so happy this one resonated. xo  🌃☪️🔪

Dear K,

There was a feeling of wistfulness after reading your poem. It was one of longing. The lovely way you write about that other person knowing you and the bond of trust between you both is magnificent and what sets you apart from other ideas in a relationship. Your balance of tension and tenderness is outstanding. Like I wish I could manage that in a write, you do it naturally. Really wonderful writing. H🌷

Wistfulness is a great description, you always have such an amazing way of analyzing things perfectly. When I love, I love crazily. :p so I need to feel that a bond. Because when you open yourself up and give so much there must be some trust and it's easy to get hurt. So happy you feel the balance; mostly I write that way - there is always a balance in things. I absolutely adore that you think I do it naturally, that is such a great compliment. And your writing is incredible and amazing; just listen to everyone here telling you. ;) Thank yo so much for the wonderful comment Honoria. I always love hearing from you. xo  🌃☪️🔪

Thank you so much for the comment Danny. I like loving and beautiful; that makes me really happy. 🌃☪️🔪

Love poetry was never more artful or sincerely passionate than in your poem. The last line brought back feelings I have for my late wife. What can be more loving than to be responsible for your beloved? This is no ordinary love poem. Extraordinarily unique in every way.

XoXo
John

Thank you so much for the amazing compliment and comment John. This was one of those deer in the headlights ones that leaves me without words. I agree, being responsible for each other is a beautiful thing. Feeling that level of love and admiration; that perfect union of love and desire. I love that you think it is extraordinarily unique in my expression! That means so much to me. Thanks again for reading and your wonderful comments. I love them. 🌃☪️🔪

This one really sets a tone
You are a seer of emotions and responsibilities
I have a lot of fondness for this entry

BL

RL

Really glad you like my tones Poetspeak. There are so many. ;) Ah yes! sometimes to much of seer as emotions can really get to me but what could be better than being responsible for each other? I appreciate your fondness very much. And the BL and RL. :) 🌃☪️🔪

"And the fact that the light disappears,
And the Universe dedicates tears to the stars"

I like the way that sounds.  It goes so well with the title.

Hey Lj! I am glad you see the synergy between those lines and the title. :) And I am really happy you like the way that sounds. Thank you so much for the comment.  🌃☪️🔪

I love the connection between these two, compared to the stars and constellations.
"Know how to love me until the
sweetest death"
It's both emotional and sultry, intimate and sensual it's palpable through and through.
Outstanding work.

You always make me so happy with your wonderful feedback and thoughts Wally. Thank you so much the comment and the RL. I have been pretty depressed and you have a way of making me feel a little better. Thank you. 🌃☪️🔪