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found , in ad infinitum
a discovery
of hidden places
stretching forward
ad infinitum
reaching deep—
within and through
grasping at shreds of time
going forth, back
then past to present;
to fervently rising
in this,
a majestic wonder
sanguine within
our conjoined atmosphere
of malleable to dense
and of knotted to undone
located of the heart
beating in wisest laughter,
desire and a cosmic truth
unquestioning
betwixt each
and every beat
as light-years
travel in
one gaze
one breath
one stroke
one kiss
...One beg—
exquisitely imbuing
their
forever
e x p a n d i n g
cosmos
Author's Note
© Blu2021..... thinking about the ever expanding universe and writing my #Nopoo for today....
pic: via Pinterest
pic: via Pinterest
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Re. found , in ad infinitum
5th Apr 2021 2:15am
Re: Re. found , in ad infinitum
5th Apr 2021 2:28am
Ty, my lovely friend 🙏
I'm glad I could speak to you!
So very grateful for the read and you taking the time to leave your thoughts with me. I really enjoy that, completely.
In kindness,
🌹
xo
-B
I'm glad I could speak to you!
So very grateful for the read and you taking the time to leave your thoughts with me. I really enjoy that, completely.
In kindness,
🌹
xo
-B
Re. found , in ad infinitum
5th Apr 2021 4:32am
'one gaze one breath one stroke one kiss' - exquisite ... to exist in that moment perpetually ... Lovely ... Bless and much love ...
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Re: Re. found , in ad infinitum
5th Apr 2021 5:46am
Dearest FeNyX,
Thank you your thoughts.... yes... it's intoxicating to think of such possibilities....
I appreciate you, the generous list add and all your loveliness. I am so very happy to see you on my page :)
Returned love and blessings 🙏
x
-B
Thank you your thoughts.... yes... it's intoxicating to think of such possibilities....
I appreciate you, the generous list add and all your loveliness. I am so very happy to see you on my page :)
Returned love and blessings 🙏
x
-B
Re. found , in ad infinitum
Re: Re. found , in ad infinitum
5th Apr 2021 5:47am
Re. found , in ad infinitum
5th Apr 2021 6:56am
"Woman child of love’s creation
Come and step inside my dreams
In your eyes, I see no sadness
You are all that loving means"
Come and step inside my dreams
In your eyes, I see no sadness
You are all that loving means"
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Re: Re. found , in ad infinitum
5th Apr 2021 12:37pm
Beautifully written, dear poet. I thank you for your poetic kindness and appreciate you stopping by.
Warm regards,
x
Warm regards,
x
Re. found , in ad infinitum
5th Apr 2021 8:17am
Beautiful piece by a beautiful poetess. Go girl loved the "One gaze, one breath, one stroke
" part
Absolutely awesome
Love and light go girl this rocks
Ron x
" part
Absolutely awesome
Love and light go girl this rocks
Ron x
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Re: Re. found , in ad infinitum
5th Apr 2021 12:41pm
Your thoughts are so much more than simple comments, imo. They're little kernels of fuel via motivation. I am so grateful for you and over the moon you like what you read and that you found a sense of beauty, within. I always always seek your presence upon my page, as it's a true pleasure!
Much love, my lovely friend
🌹
xo
B
Much love, my lovely friend
🌹
xo
B
Re. found , in ad infinitum
5th Apr 2021 11:32am
Reading this poem was a happy ride through fluid time. My dizzy lines where it got fun:)
"reaching deep—
within and through
grasping at shreds of time
going forth, back
then past to present;
to fervently rising
in this,"
"reaching deep—
within and through
grasping at shreds of time
going forth, back
then past to present;
to fervently rising
in this,"
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Re: Re. found , in ad infinitum
5th Apr 2021 12:46pm
I adore your comments, LV! Especially knowing that you found my little fun places!! I wholeheartedly appreciate and utterly enjoy you reading and leaving your thoughts. Your point of view is heady and always piques my interest.
Much love,
🌹
x
Much love,
🌹
x
Re. found , in ad infinitum
5th Apr 2021 12:06pm
"exquisitely imbuing" ... another poetic gold nugget ... such a smooth write ... love the varying line length ... how it gets crisper at the end ... so the read is faster ... but then slowed down by the line break/spacing between lines ... like poetry speed bumps ... nice technique ...
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Re: Re. found , in ad infinitum
5th Apr 2021 12:52pm
Ohh, LilD, Thank you for the generous list add and your detailed feedback. I just adore it so much. I value your thoughts and opinions a great deal and I'm all smiles that you found something that resonated.
All my warmest regards,
🌹
xo
All my warmest regards,
🌹
xo
Re. found , in ad infinitum
5th Apr 2021 1:46pm
Re: Re. found , in ad infinitum
5th Apr 2021 6:38pm
Ohhh my (blushes)... A very humble Ty, my lovely friend 🙏... I'm so appreciative.
Far too kind!
🌹
xo
Far too kind!
🌹
xo
Re. found , in ad infinitum
Anonymous
5th Apr 2021 10:58pm
Just dropping by to say " their forever expanding cosmos " Is just so beautiful to me 🌷💜
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Re: Re. found , in ad infinitum
5th Apr 2021 11:12pm
Ohhh! ... Hey there lovey lady!
I swim in the deliciousness of your thoughtful sentiments, Rachel. The notion that we're both emotionally affected in similar ways, makes me smile and glow from within. I adore that and I'm so unbelievably grateful, too.
Like attracts like... me thinks!
You're a lovely soul ✨ 💫 ✨
🌹 💜 🌹
xoxo 💋
I swim in the deliciousness of your thoughtful sentiments, Rachel. The notion that we're both emotionally affected in similar ways, makes me smile and glow from within. I adore that and I'm so unbelievably grateful, too.
Like attracts like... me thinks!
You're a lovely soul ✨ 💫 ✨
🌹 💜 🌹
xoxo 💋
Re. found , in ad infinitum
6th Apr 2021 6:55am
Dear Goddess, Blue
I am sorry i missed this super romantic piece yesterday. I get pretty flighty during NaPo. You have a style of writing, a way with words that just warms my heart and generates within me deeply satisfying tingles. I love this passage,
"sanguine within
our conjoined atmosphere
of malleable to dense
and of knotted to undone "
Such a sensual connection.
The ending is sublime. Bravissima gorgeous BB 🌹🙏🐻💋🐻💋🐻
I am sorry i missed this super romantic piece yesterday. I get pretty flighty during NaPo. You have a style of writing, a way with words that just warms my heart and generates within me deeply satisfying tingles. I love this passage,
"sanguine within
our conjoined atmosphere
of malleable to dense
and of knotted to undone "
Such a sensual connection.
The ending is sublime. Bravissima gorgeous BB 🌹🙏🐻💋🐻💋🐻
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Re: Re. found , in ad infinitum
6th Apr 2021 4:02pm
no no..🙏 please, BB...
I've said before, you do you, my dear. No worries about missing any of my writes. It's understandable I truly don't expect that but I absolutely appreciate you and the kindness within that sentiment. Sincerely. My tingle maker must be directly linked to your tingle identifer!! (hee hee hee hee!!! 😈) Another amazing sentiment I bask in! You have an uncanny ability to select my lines of choice as well. Ohh BB, you get it!! Thank you so much my gentle bear. I adore you, your visits and all he gloriously beautiful light you shine upon me.
All my deepest gratitude (for everything!) and warmest regards,
🌹
🐻 💋 🐇
I've said before, you do you, my dear. No worries about missing any of my writes. It's understandable I truly don't expect that but I absolutely appreciate you and the kindness within that sentiment. Sincerely. My tingle maker must be directly linked to your tingle identifer!! (hee hee hee hee!!! 😈) Another amazing sentiment I bask in! You have an uncanny ability to select my lines of choice as well. Ohh BB, you get it!! Thank you so much my gentle bear. I adore you, your visits and all he gloriously beautiful light you shine upon me.
All my deepest gratitude (for everything!) and warmest regards,
🌹
🐻 💋 🐇
Re. found , in ad infinitum
7th Apr 2021 3:32am
You take the cosmic theme and merge it into an erotic exhalation of grand proportions. Love the expanding orgasmic sensations as they grow into a merging of the lover with beloved. You write this with your unique gift at taking a metaphor and spinning it into a profound poem.
Xo
John
Xo
John
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Re. found , in ad infinitum
15th May 2021 9:28pm
"exquisitely imbuing" that line it just both romantic and sensual. The entire verse also has a spiritual feel.
Beautiful work.
Beautiful work.
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