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a dazzling surrender of redemptive light.

     
          
           
The last time,        
i thought        
i wouldn't notice much          
that the air you breathed            
was tempered with        
 distinct          
surrender            
           
.. and a dazzling            
brightness dimmed,          
i muse,          
as a honoring            
or a bit          
of darkened          
foreshadowing            
           
My reticence—          
(a reserve          
of much too polite)          
forgetting to say          
         
what I knew          
I should have
         
           
but didn't.      
           
This time,          
though            
my redemption          
is now tempered          
in that          
remembered          
surrender            
           
again,          
aching            
with your            
loss,            
more sweet          
than            
bitter            
           
           
as now—          
           
           
           
           
you know.          
         
Bluevelvete
Author's Note
© Blu2021
Missing friends new and old.... see you soon. 🌹
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